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gabriella_'s review against another edition
lighthearted
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? N/A
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
1.25
This is one of the worst books I’ve read this year. So much writing inconsistency, the pacing was terrible (it felt like nothing happened despite this book being over 600 pages long!), and the scenarios read like baby’s first Wattpad fanfiction. These were caricatures and not characters. She based everything off tropes. I really strongly disliked this book.
Did people think he was hot?? He was harassing her at work. Not to mention the overuse of “don’t talk to me until I’ve had my coffee” and the barrage of period puns. It was annoying at best.
Did people think he was hot?? He was harassing her at work. Not to mention the overuse of “don’t talk to me until I’ve had my coffee” and the barrage of period puns. It was annoying at best.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Confinement, Kidnapping, and Sexual harassment
clara01's review against another edition
emotional
funny
hopeful
inspiring
lighthearted
mysterious
relaxing
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Content Warnings
Graphic: Abandonment
Moderate: Death, Gun violence, Medical content, Kidnapping, Death of parent, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Addiction, Bullying, Drug abuse, Infertility, Infidelity, Physical abuse, Toxic relationship, Police brutality, Car accident, and Sexual harassment
taylormoore's review against another edition
emotional
funny
lighthearted
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.75
Content Warnings
Graphic: Child abuse, Domestic abuse, Gun violence, Kidnapping, and Abandonment
Moderate: Violence and Sexual harassment
krosebooks's review against another edition
adventurous
funny
inspiring
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? N/A
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Started off great and then went down hill the last 25% of the book. I was thinking before the bad part of a 4+ star rating. But the climax was disappointing. The characters were so cringey it broke the reality of the book. But I loved everything before the climax so I’m just disappointed.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Alcoholism, Cursing, Death, Drug abuse, Emotional abuse, Gun violence, Infertility, Sexual content, Violence, Medical content, Kidnapping, Grief, Car accident, Death of parent, Alcohol, Sexual harassment, and Injury/Injury detail
abbycasey's review against another edition
emotional
funny
lighthearted
relaxing
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? N/A
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.5
Content Warnings
Graphic: Cursing, Emotional abuse, Sexual content, and Toxic relationship
Moderate: Gun violence, Physical abuse, Kidnapping, Abandonment, and Sexual harassment
Minor: Addiction, Infertility, and Death of parent
matthewslaura's review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
funny
hopeful
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
Maybe it’s because I have a tendency to put others needs before my own, but I loved how a big part of the story was Naomi learning to accept the fact that she didn’t have to do everything on her own and can rely on others for help. I especially loved how her and Knox’s characters seem like a real life couple with the way they compliment, love, hurt, and help each other… this book was cute and I devoured it.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Addiction, Bullying, Child abuse, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Toxic relationship, Medical content, Kidnapping, Death of parent, Abandonment, Alcohol, and Sexual harassment
memoirsofabooklover's review against another edition
challenging
emotional
funny
inspiring
sad
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
One of my favourite series ever. I love a grumpy x sunshine and a found family. This was my first Lucy Score, book; it made me fall in love with her writing and these characters. I immediately fell in love with both of the mcs, I loved the introduction to the world, it was entertaining and drama-filled from page 1. I not only fell in love with the mcs but also all the side characters, I could see the setup for future books but I also loved the depth other characters brought, which added depth to the mcs. It was a perfect slow burn that's full of tension, humour, and love. What was perfect was that you got the slow burn in the first half and the spice in the second half; the story had a crime side plot that was well-developed enough to make it a massive part of the story, linked to multiple side characters, and really dragged you in. I also loved the fact that they had real conversations and even though it was a happy ending, the conversations and self-healing to get there were healthy (in the end) and realistic. 6/5 stars!
Content Warnings
Graphic: Sexual content and Kidnapping
Moderate: Child abuse, Cursing, Death, Domestic abuse, Drug abuse, Emotional abuse, Physical abuse, Violence, Grief, Medical trauma, Death of parent, and Abandonment
Minor: Alcoholism, Fatphobia, Gun violence, Infertility, Infidelity, Sexism, Blood, Car accident, Lesbophobia, Gaslighting, and Sexual harassment
dosxhime's review against another edition
emotional
funny
hopeful
inspiring
lighthearted
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.75
MY LITTLE UWUS
I WILL K*LL FOR WAYLAY. but seriously, I would love to have a spin off or something for waylay. Love that girl
4.75 / 5 A
I WILL K*LL FOR WAYLAY. but seriously, I would love to have a spin off or something for waylay. Love that girl
4.75 / 5 A
Content Warnings
Moderate: Child abuse, Domestic abuse, Sexual content, Violence, Kidnapping, Abandonment, Alcohol, and Sexual harassment
gmoneyyyyy's review against another edition
adventurous
challenging
dark
emotional
funny
hopeful
inspiring
reflective
sad
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Content Warnings
Graphic: Drug abuse, Gun violence, Sexual content, Kidnapping, and Sexual harassment
sarahh1425's review against another edition
I’m just going to quote a couple paragraphs for context:
> “If you’re not in my office in fifteen, I will come out here, throw you over my shoulder, and carry your ass back there.” I leaned in closer, almost close enough to kiss her. “And there is no way that skirt of yours is up for that.”
… Sixteen minutes later … I went straight for her … I caught her by the arm and bent at the waist. She was up over my shoulder in less than a second … Naomi squirmed, trying to right herself, but I wasn’t having any of it. I gave her a hard slap on the ass, catching denim, cotton, and bare skin.
The bar erupted into pandemonium.<
This is sexual assault. Pure and simple. In any context, a guy grabbing a girl, physically assaulting her, touching her with sexual intent and exposing her in public is sexual assault. And Knox isn’t even in a relationship with Naomi at this point (not that this behavior is okay within a relationship either)
I’m not being nitpicky, or dismissing the whole book based on this one scene. This bit is actually just the most egregious example of Knox being a misogynistic, abusive sod of a human being, who makes this book utterly unreadable. I understand creating “grumpy” characters, and that’s fun, but there’s no fun in reading from the pov of a literal human asshole, especially when all of his toxic behaviors are being romanticized.
And again, I’m no prude. I love my villains and morally gray characters. But Knox in this book was clearly written by the author to be the swooning male alpha hero that everyone is meant to love, but also somehow is a liberal version of Andrew Tate. Every shitty behavior of his is excused away and he’s treated like he’s a god on earth.
I don’t like books like these, where we’re taught that it’s okay if shitty people do shitty things, as long as they’re hot. I don’t like books where a man can verbally and sexually assault a woman, and get away with it because he has a sad backstory. I don’t like how every action the man takes is perfectly alright, or treated with a half-hearted talking to. Seriously, after the scene above, not one of Naomi’s friends or seemed to be worried about the fact that AFTER SHE WAS PHYSICALLY ASSAULTED AND SEXUALLY EXPOSED AT HER PLACE OF WORK, BY HER BOSS. No, they’re just worried about her “broken heart” and “embarrassment”.
I don’t think there are enough words to express how much I despise and dislike Knox. I hate every word or thought he ever said or had. Given that 50% of the book is his voice, you can understand the one star rating.
Less importantly, I also disliked Naomi. She’s just such a perfectly wonderful character, she almost belongs in fairyland. Heart of gold, always cares for others, never selfish - in short, the perfect woman. Compared to Knox, she’s an alright character, but she’s not in anyway likeable. And there’s absolutely no point reading a romance novel where the main ROMANCE consists of a human pile of shit and a woman so boring and unlikable I was almost rooting for her evil twin to win.
I know if a man like Knox did exist, every woman on the planet would be staying as far away from him as possible, so it’s impossible to read this book and be sucked into the romance, when the whole time you’re thinking “what the fuck Naomi?? Get out while you can!” The writing was shitty, and it actually felt like this book was written in one long coffee-fueled spell, because it reads like that (and ENOUGH with the coffee mentions already. We get it, Naomi is addicted to caffeine. It doesn’t need to be her entire personality). The chapters end in really weird, abrupt places that seriously spoil the flow of the book, and makes me wonder if they just arbitrarily split up a long story to make short chapters.
In short, this book wouldn’t be worth your time or your money even if it was 300 pages shorter. At over 600 pages, it’s definitely even worse
> “If you’re not in my office in fifteen, I will come out here, throw you over my shoulder, and carry your ass back there.” I leaned in closer, almost close enough to kiss her. “And there is no way that skirt of yours is up for that.”
… Sixteen minutes later … I went straight for her … I caught her by the arm and bent at the waist. She was up over my shoulder in less than a second … Naomi squirmed, trying to right herself, but I wasn’t having any of it. I gave her a hard slap on the ass, catching denim, cotton, and bare skin.
The bar erupted into pandemonium.<
This is sexual assault. Pure and simple. In any context, a guy grabbing a girl, physically assaulting her, touching her with sexual intent and exposing her in public is sexual assault. And Knox isn’t even in a relationship with Naomi at this point (not that this behavior is okay within a relationship either)
I’m not being nitpicky, or dismissing the whole book based on this one scene. This bit is actually just the most egregious example of Knox being a misogynistic, abusive sod of a human being, who makes this book utterly unreadable. I understand creating “grumpy” characters, and that’s fun, but there’s no fun in reading from the pov of a literal human asshole, especially when all of his toxic behaviors are being romanticized.
And again, I’m no prude. I love my villains and morally gray characters. But Knox in this book was clearly written by the author to be the swooning male alpha hero that everyone is meant to love, but also somehow is a liberal version of Andrew Tate. Every shitty behavior of his is excused away and he’s treated like he’s a god on earth.
I don’t like books like these, where we’re taught that it’s okay if shitty people do shitty things, as long as they’re hot. I don’t like books where a man can verbally and sexually assault a woman, and get away with it because he has a sad backstory. I don’t like how every action the man takes is perfectly alright, or treated with a half-hearted talking to. Seriously, after the scene above, not one of Naomi’s friends or seemed to be worried about the fact that AFTER SHE WAS PHYSICALLY ASSAULTED AND SEXUALLY EXPOSED AT HER PLACE OF WORK, BY HER BOSS. No, they’re just worried about her “broken heart” and “embarrassment”.
I don’t think there are enough words to express how much I despise and dislike Knox. I hate every word or thought he ever said or had. Given that 50% of the book is his voice, you can understand the one star rating.
Less importantly, I also disliked Naomi. She’s just such a perfectly wonderful character, she almost belongs in fairyland. Heart of gold, always cares for others, never selfish - in short, the perfect woman. Compared to Knox, she’s an alright character, but she’s not in anyway likeable. And there’s absolutely no point reading a romance novel where the main ROMANCE consists of a human pile of shit and a woman so boring and unlikable I was almost rooting for her evil twin to win.
I know if a man like Knox did exist, every woman on the planet would be staying as far away from him as possible, so it’s impossible to read this book and be sucked into the romance, when the whole time you’re thinking “what the fuck Naomi?? Get out while you can!” The writing was shitty, and it actually felt like this book was written in one long coffee-fueled spell, because it reads like that (and ENOUGH with the coffee mentions already. We get it, Naomi is addicted to caffeine. It doesn’t need to be her entire personality). The chapters end in really weird, abrupt places that seriously spoil the flow of the book, and makes me wonder if they just arbitrarily split up a long story to make short chapters.
In short, this book wouldn’t be worth your time or your money even if it was 300 pages shorter. At over 600 pages, it’s definitely even worse
Content Warnings
Graphic: Sexual harassment