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tanner's review
dark
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.0
sinbetweenthelines's review against another edition
3.0
I’m a sucker for a mafia romance, especially when it’s by an indie author. This book was a fun read, with honestly really enjoyable spicy scenes, and that’s all I needed it to be!
Lorenzo Boticelli, heir to the Italian mafia family in NYC, agrees to take Avalie as payment for her stepfather’s debt. The spitfire that is Ava obviously wasn’t a huge fan, but who can resist a sexy, powerful man like Renzo. He wins her over in the lust department easily, but her heart is a bit harder to catch.
I can’t say the book was very well written, and it could definitely use another round of editing, but I still enjoyed it! The spicy scenes had a bit of kink and BDSM in it, which is always fun; our FMC loves pain and our MMC likes delivering it… so it works out!
I honestly enjoyed the two MCs and their dual POV. I do think some phrases and interactions were overused, particularly in the romantic side of their relationship, but it’s fineee. The plot was a bit random, but you know what? I was along for the ride. And I did quite enjoy the addition of other mafia and mob families that actually seemed to be well-informed (unlike some other mafia romances I’ve read).
Lorenzo Boticelli, heir to the Italian mafia family in NYC, agrees to take Avalie as payment for her stepfather’s debt. The spitfire that is Ava obviously wasn’t a huge fan, but who can resist a sexy, powerful man like Renzo. He wins her over in the lust department easily, but her heart is a bit harder to catch.
I can’t say the book was very well written, and it could definitely use another round of editing, but I still enjoyed it! The spicy scenes had a bit of kink and BDSM in it, which is always fun; our FMC loves pain and our MMC likes delivering it… so it works out!
I honestly enjoyed the two MCs and their dual POV. I do think some phrases and interactions were overused, particularly in the romantic side of their relationship, but it’s fineee. The plot was a bit random, but you know what? I was along for the ride. And I did quite enjoy the addition of other mafia and mob families that actually seemed to be well-informed (unlike some other mafia romances I’ve read).
allbookedup_'s review
2.0
This book does have some spelling/ grammar mistakes that could be fixed.
Gave it two stars because there were a few good one liners.
Story felt rushed and the characters were fine for a short story but had no personality or growth.
Gave it two stars because there were a few good one liners.
Story felt rushed and the characters were fine for a short story but had no personality or growth.
giigii_graceless's review
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? N/A
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.25
thereadersteacup's review
adventurous
dark
relaxing
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? N/A
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
5.0
mylastromancenovel's review
dark
mysterious
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
3.75
My Rating: ❤️❤️❤️.75
General Thoughts: I enjoyed this one. J.L. Quick has been on my to read list for awhile. I enjoyed this one. Dark, steamy, check your triggers. Fast-paced, short, easily digestibel, and super steamy. Interested to see what happens next in this series.
Steam Meter: ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥.5 This was a steamy book. Super steamy often.
Tropes
-dark romance
-mafia romance
-dual pov
-interconnected standalone
-series
You can read more of my reviews at mylastromance.com. You can also find me on Insta @mylastromancenovel.
General Thoughts: I enjoyed this one. J.L. Quick has been on my to read list for awhile. I enjoyed this one. Dark, steamy, check your triggers. Fast-paced, short, easily digestibel, and super steamy. Interested to see what happens next in this series.
Steam Meter: ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥.5 This was a steamy book. Super steamy often.
Tropes
-dark romance
-mafia romance
-dual pov
-interconnected standalone
-series
You can read more of my reviews at mylastromance.com. You can also find me on Insta @mylastromancenovel.
smartie2403's review
dark
emotional
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? N/A
3.0
apelsinas's review
funny
lighthearted
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.0