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The Unfortunate Side Effects of Heartbreak and Magic by Breanne Randall
32 reviews
readswithcat's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
hopeful
inspiring
lighthearted
reflective
sad
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death, Death of parent, Abandonment, and Suicide attempt
Moderate: Pregnancy, Grief, Cancer, and Murder
Minor: Sexual assault
brandetl27's review against another edition
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
1.0
There’s so many spoilers in this, I can’t possibly tag them all. Proceed with caution.
As someone who LOVES cozy, witchy books, this just did not do it for me. The way this was marketed felt extremely inaccurate. Do not serve this to me as a “Gilmore Girls meets Practical Magic” & then let me down. Whoever marketed this like that has clearly never seen either of those. If you’re gonna throw those big names around, you better at least attempt to live up to it.
As someone who LOVES cozy, witchy books, this just did not do it for me. The way this was marketed felt extremely inaccurate. Do not serve this to me as a “Gilmore Girls meets Practical Magic” & then let me down. Whoever marketed this like that has clearly never seen either of those. If you’re gonna throw those big names around, you better at least attempt to live up to it.
This was painfully overwritten. There were too many descriptions of ingredients and plants & baked goods & not nearly enough details that help explain the actual plot. It was very messy & got confusing at times. The overall plot was too complicated & not cohesive at all. Like what was ever actually going on?
I didn’t like any of the characters really because they were either extremely insufferable or we didn’t get to know them enough in order for me to care about them. I wanted to like Gigi because I love a grandmother character but to be honest, she wasn’t the greatest either. One of your grandkids is going to die & you know exactly what needs to be done to save them & you’re leaving secret messages in letters after you die instead of explicitly telling someone? It’s giving Dumbledore in the worst way possible.
The romance storyline felt like a complete afterthought. What a waste of time that was. I didn’t know Jake or their backstory well enough to care if they got together. But also, you’d think your dying grandmother & impending death of your brother kind of takes priority over your ex boyfriend coming back into town?
There was also some causal murder, attempted suicide, faked pregnancies, sexual assault, drugging (which was done twice btw). Like what? This was too much.
Also things that were brought up regularly but ended up being such a waste because it added nothing to the story & had nothing to do with anything:
•dog napping
•the high school putting on a production of Carrie as their play
•the fall festival
•A mysterious figure constantly being seen in the garden which ended up being their late grandfather
Also, when you really think about it, what was the purpose of the 4 heartbreaks curse? After 4 heartbreaks, Sadie was going to lose her magic. She only had one left, her brother dying would have been her 4th one. They made a big deal about her having to give up her magic to save him but she would have lost it anyway if she died because of the heartbreak curse so it really didn’t seem like that much of a heroic move for her to give up her magic. The heartbreak curse should have never been a part of this because without it, Sadie giving up her magic would have been a huge sacrifice for her to save her brother. They made her out to be so selfless & brave at the end but she literally wasn’t at all. Her choices were: lose your brother & lose your magic or give up your magic & save your brother. It seems pretty obvious to me which one your would choose here.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Suicide attempt, Death, and Grief
Moderate: Mental illness
Minor: Sexual assault and Murder
laura_berger's review against another edition
emotional
funny
lighthearted
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Content Warnings
Moderate: Death and Mental illness
Minor: Pregnancy, Toxic relationship, and Murder
etl's review against another edition
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? N/A
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
1.5
This book was.... not for me. Plot lines that go nowhere, confusing and bizarre christian ideology that comes out of nowhere (in a book about a witch...?), plot holes, a bizarre dog kidnapping that I think we're supposed to read as quirky and banter-y, overly-descriptive language while still not actually telling us anything, wildly casual mentions of very serious topics SA, attempted suicide, murder, and also what essentially amounts to the drugging of an unsuspecting third party... TWICE. SHE DOES IT TWICE . I can't believe this was marketed as a cozy read tbh.
The only reason I finished this book is because I became absolutely obsessed with the frankly absurd similes and metaphors. The writing is chock full of some truly bizarre writing but by chapter two I started highlighting the comparisons to food (specifically sweet treats) just in case the reader forgot that the main character was a baker. My favorites are below for your reading pleasure:
- "the tenuous peace they'd formed in the kitchen cracked like creme brulee"
- "shaking her momentary mirth off like powdered sugar"
- "excitement brushed along her skin like confectioners' sugar"
- "gingersnap laugh"
- "The air turned sweet like sparkle-dusted rainbow cotton candy"
and my number one, the line I will be thinking about for the rest of my life:
- "hugs were passed around like a tray of chocolate truffles, sweet and decadent until too much made you sad for no reason" - huh. huh?I have never ever been sad due to too many chocolate truffles OR too many hugs. sick? yes. touched out? yes. sad...? am I missing something? do chocolates and hugs make people sad?
Overall I counted 41 instances of food-related symbolism, and this doesn't include anything from chapter one or descriptive language like "butter-soft" or "caramel-colored" because at least those descriptions make sense.
I'm sure this book is for someone. That someone is not me.
The only reason I finished this book is because I became absolutely obsessed with the frankly absurd similes and metaphors. The writing is chock full of some truly bizarre writing but by chapter two I started highlighting the comparisons to food (specifically sweet treats) just in case the reader forgot that the main character was a baker. My favorites are below for your reading pleasure:
- "the tenuous peace they'd formed in the kitchen cracked like creme brulee"
- "shaking her momentary mirth off like powdered sugar"
- "excitement brushed along her skin like confectioners' sugar"
- "gingersnap laugh"
- "The air turned sweet like sparkle-dusted rainbow cotton candy"
and my number one, the line I will be thinking about for the rest of my life:
- "hugs were passed around like a tray of chocolate truffles, sweet and decadent until too much made you sad for no reason" - huh. huh?I have never ever been sad due to too many chocolate truffles OR too many hugs. sick? yes. touched out? yes. sad...? am I missing something? do chocolates and hugs make people sad?
Overall I counted 41 instances of food-related symbolism, and this doesn't include anything from chapter one or descriptive language like "butter-soft" or "caramel-colored" because at least those descriptions make sense.
I'm sure this book is for someone. That someone is not me.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Grief
Moderate: Mental illness, Cancer, Terminal illness, Sexual assault, Rape, Murder, Suicide attempt, Suicidal thoughts, Death of parent, and Death
Minor: Pregnancy and Infertility
ggreen1379's review against another edition
1.5
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death and Murder
Moderate: Murder
rromero721's review against another edition
emotional
hopeful
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Content Warnings
Minor: Mental illness, Death, Suicidal thoughts, Pregnancy, Death of parent, Suicide attempt, Panic attacks/disorders, Murder, Cancer, Grief, Domestic abuse, Cursing, and Alcohol
sarinaslibrary's review against another edition
lighthearted
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? N/A
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? N/A
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
2.75
I would like to thank Netgalley for allowing me to read this ARC.
I really really wanted to enjoy this book, it's marketing on TikTok was crazy and I was super excited when I got approved to read a proof. Sadly it didn't hit right for me.
I didn't find myself liking any of the characters, the grandmother was a bit mean to me, the FMC was a bit of a pushover & people pleaser, also a bit dumb and annoying. The rest of the characters were also quite annoying as well, the only one I really liked was Seth, the FMC brother who went away and came back after a couple of years.
The FMC just didn't sit right for me, especially when she came to find that the dog she found and took in was her ex's and refused to give it back to him because at first she's petty, then she wanted a part of him with her when all the drama was going on. He kept asking for it back and she kept refusing, and as a dog owner myself it really made me angry.
Seth's story was just more interesting to me because there was a bit of mystery and he didn't want magic because it was hurting him and making him depressed, but in the end of the book the FMC gives up her magic so he can keep his - why not have Seth give up the magic he doesn't want to his sister that does want it?? Everytime he said he didn't want magic his family (even the FMC) just dismissed his feelings and saying that he can't run away from it. That's not a good message.
There's a strong message of family in this book that doesn't hit right, there's a line basically saying that family will hurt you but you have to forgive and love them in the end because that's what family is all about - I'm sorry but no. Families can hurt you and you have every right to cut them out and keep it that way, some things families do are unforgivable and it remains that way. It left a bad taste in my mouth for personal reasons and I almost gave up the book around this time, but I kept going.
The romance in this wasn't good either, FMC's ex comes back into the town (the one she refuses to give the dog back too), turns out he's engaged which he tried to tell her (which by the way comes not far from the end of the book) but she kept dismissing him, turns out the woman he's engaged to fakes her pregnancy - all of this was really unnecessary.
It wasn't a cosy witchy book at all, all the magic was food and drinks and it contained some triggers that I didn't expect. There's also a lot of cheesy paragraphs that didn't need to be there - oh and the grandmother forcing the FMC to attend church also didn't sit well with me.
Overall I was disappointed in this book, I really love cosy witchy books but this one just didn't hit the mark.
I really really wanted to enjoy this book, it's marketing on TikTok was crazy and I was super excited when I got approved to read a proof. Sadly it didn't hit right for me.
I didn't find myself liking any of the characters, the grandmother was a bit mean to me, the FMC was a bit of a pushover & people pleaser, also a bit dumb and annoying. The rest of the characters were also quite annoying as well, the only one I really liked was Seth, the FMC brother who went away and came back after a couple of years.
The FMC just didn't sit right for me, especially when she came to find that the dog she found and took in was her ex's and refused to give it back to him because at first she's petty, then she wanted a part of him with her when all the drama was going on. He kept asking for it back and she kept refusing, and as a dog owner myself it really made me angry.
Seth's story was just more interesting to me because there was a bit of mystery and he didn't want magic because it was hurting him and making him depressed, but in the end of the book the FMC gives up her magic so he can keep his - why not have Seth give up the magic he doesn't want to his sister that does want it?? Everytime he said he didn't want magic his family (even the FMC) just dismissed his feelings and saying that he can't run away from it. That's not a good message.
There's a strong message of family in this book that doesn't hit right, there's a line basically saying that family will hurt you but you have to forgive and love them in the end because that's what family is all about - I'm sorry but no. Families can hurt you and you have every right to cut them out and keep it that way, some things families do are unforgivable and it remains that way. It left a bad taste in my mouth for personal reasons and I almost gave up the book around this time, but I kept going.
The romance in this wasn't good either, FMC's ex comes back into the town (the one she refuses to give the dog back too), turns out he's engaged which he tried to tell her (which by the way comes not far from the end of the book) but she kept dismissing him, turns out the woman he's engaged to fakes her pregnancy - all of this was really unnecessary.
It wasn't a cosy witchy book at all, all the magic was food and drinks and it contained some triggers that I didn't expect. There's also a lot of cheesy paragraphs that didn't need to be there - oh and the grandmother forcing the FMC to attend church also didn't sit well with me.
Overall I was disappointed in this book, I really love cosy witchy books but this one just didn't hit the mark.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Cancer and Death
Moderate: Suicidal thoughts, Suicide attempt, and Gaslighting
Minor: Murder
callmeamelia's review against another edition
emotional
lighthearted
reflective
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.75
Content Warnings
Moderate: Suicide attempt
Minor: Panic attacks/disorders and Murder
wornpagesandendlesscoffey's review against another edition
challenging
dark
emotional
sad
tense
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
Always thankful for the ARCs I receive, and this is my honest review. I am certain there is an audience for this book, one that will adore it and make it their entire identity. I am not that audience. I want to first say, the marketing here was super deceptive and I was almost immediately disappointed. Nothing about this story was "Gilmore Girls"- literally, nothing. There was a huge chunk of Practical Magic in there, so much so it almost felt like the same story, adjusted. It wasn't a bad book, it wasn't poorly written, but the false marketing left me with a horrid taste in my mouth for the book. I love Gilmore Girls, I named my child after the show and watch it once a year (at least), so I was thrilled to have a book that had that vibe. This book wasn't that at all, There are also a mountain of triggers and no TW of any kind, the dynamics of the grandmother felt off, the way everyone treated the main character was shady and bad, and worst of all the female main character had to sacrifice her magic and her identity for a man. Lorelai would *never*. The conflict was rushed and the resolution was sloppy. Every character treated the FMC like she was loved for how she made them feel or how she was useful to them, her boundaries were ignored or pushed past by nearly everyone, and have I mentioned the massive triggers. SO since the author didn't include them, a few to note are death, abandonment, toxic relationships, magic bypassing consent, suicidal thoughts, suicide attempt, cancer, manipulation, gaslighting, murder, and relationship abuse- this is not an exhaustive list by any means but someone should put it out there.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Gaslighting, Toxic friendship, Domestic abuse, Grief, Suicide attempt, Abandonment, Toxic relationship, Cancer, Death, Death of parent, Emotional abuse, Self harm, and Suicidal thoughts
Moderate: Murder
paperbackportals's review against another edition
adventurous
lighthearted
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
3.0
Review: The Unfortunate Side Effects of Heartbreak and Magic by Breanne Randall
Looking for an adventurous witchy read? This might be the one.
Read it if you love:
🧙♀️witches and magic
🏘️small towns with quirky characters
⚡️family drama
❤️second chance romance
🍂delicious fall vibes
🍰baking (there’s recipes!)
It is no secret that I love a book with baking and even more so if it includes recipes. This was a fun and light read that let me feel some of the fall vibes I’m looking forward to. I enjoyed the dynamic of the characters and the inclusion of adorable animals. I admit that at times I found the pacing a bit slow and some of the language jarring, but overall it was an enjoyable read with quirky characters, and delightful message to celebrate life and embrace your own personal magic.
Content Warnings
Moderate: Murder and Mental illness
Minor: Pregnancy