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The Real Deal by Caitlin Devlin

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emotional hopeful reflective tense slow-paced
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5

I read The Real Deal having followed its author, Caitlin Devlin, on TikTok for quite some time. Its premise stuck with me prior to release because of how I, as a drama & music loving teenager, dreamed of a life as a ‘child star’, a fact that has intrigued and, frankly, mortified me as I’ve aged. The experiences that so many children have faced in such an adult industry are harrowing, and I think it is a service to society to provide stories like The Real Deal to reflect on the darker sides of fame. The Real Deal is that Hollywood is not all stars and glory. It’s manipulation and unachievable standards and pitting women against each other.

Witnessing Belle process her trauma through her younger sister is both heartwarming and heartbreaking. She experienced an awful lot at such a young age, an immense pressure and expectation and otherworldliness that so few people could ever understand, so for her to have a younger sister so similar and yet so different to her was a beautiful reflection of what her childhood could have been and how the future can and will be better for the next generation.

I listened to The Real Deal on audiobook and I will say that I found the pacing very slow. I think I would have become more engaged with the story more quickly had I read it physically. Speeding it up to 1.5x speed helped with this. For me, 1.5x speed sounded like 1x does for most audiobooks. I’m not sure why it was so slow, but I would definitely recommend adjusting the speed if listening to it.

There are elements of the story I wish we had seen more of, in particular Belle and Faye’s connection as teenagers. I feel like there was plenty eluded to in relation to the ins and outs of their relationship together, but not enough depth. This meant that I found
the footage that Rupert produced to Donna and Fred slightly unbelievable because the book had made it seem like Belle and Faye barely touched, let alone kissing enough to get a video of it
. I’d also liked to have seen more of Faye’s reaction to finding out exactly what happened in Season Five.

Parts of the story I think that could have been spared to adjust pacing or enable more time to focus on your characters would be the inclusion of Fred. I feel like he and Rupert could easily have been one character. They are interchangeable, to me, and I feel like he didn’t add much to the story. I feel similarly towards Howie. Though I understand his importance in Season One, I do feel that his character didn’t live up to his potential throughout the rest of the story. He could have been explored further or removed from the latter part of the tale as his participation felt more like he was providing ‘filler’ and ‘exposition’ rather than moving the story along.

Also question: in the last chapter, we’re shown the Season One photo on Hannah’s mantel but then Kendra puts her feet up on Roni’s footstool. Continuity error or am I missing something and they’ve moved locations? 

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izzyproudfoot's review

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challenging dark mysterious tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0


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sstewart89's review

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challenging dark emotional mysterious reflective medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0


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