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kathhh's review against another edition
DNF @ Chapter 21.
The first chapters were okay and a bit cute. But then it got cheesy and cringey. Eventually I was bored and decided not to finish it because it's giving wattpad-y vibes or written by a gradeschooler. It has potential but it lacks in execution.
The first chapters were okay and a bit cute. But then it got cheesy and cringey. Eventually I was bored and decided not to finish it because it's giving wattpad-y vibes or written by a gradeschooler. It has potential but it lacks in execution.
xxbatboyspantymisterxx's review
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
1.0
I couldn’t get into the writing style. It seemed very juvenile and “watpad” to me. I ended up skipping pages and reading ahead because it was just “wtf” to me. The story jumped around a lot and seemed to be trying to incorporate way too much into 370 pages.
I loved the premise of the story and was wishing for so much better.
I loved the premise of the story and was wishing for so much better.
kittyemma9's review
adventurous
lighthearted
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.0
aromer19's review against another edition
emotional
funny
hopeful
lighthearted
reflective
tense
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
jmb3847's review
lighthearted
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.0
readingwith_dani's review
4.0
lucy is a struggling artist and author, who lets jace “the salesman” rent out her extra room for more income after stumbling into him one weird afternoon. lucy was dealing with writer’s block until jace moved in and she realizes he’s the perfect inspiration for a book boyfriend! so she starts writing a new spicy romance, but what happens when fiction blurs with reality? because jace has some secrets of his own
gimli5's review
Totally inconsistent characterization. Got really tedious to read.
bookishreverie's review
funny
hopeful
reflective
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? N/A
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.25
I really liked the story and it sped up in the second half. There is a lot of internal dialogue, so if you don’t like that this isn’t the one for you.