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3.29 AVERAGE
3.29 AVERAGE
Definitely a must read. The trope and warnings (especially with OW) had me nervous but I was actually pleasantly surprised. Evie is INCREDIBLY strong and really kick ass and not a push over. She reminds me a lot of Reagan in Knot For Me by Rory Miles. If you like OV this is a great book. The spice is near the end but the story is so well written you don’t even miss it.
emotional
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
emotional
lighthearted
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Complicated
Diverse cast of characters:
N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
I was so looking forward to this book. Sadly, the grovel was disappointing. The men's behavior is borderline abusive, if not outright so. These men literally nearly killed her, and they did not grovel nearly enough for that forgiveness that came so quickly.
Here are the actions that they did to 'grovel':
- said sorry
- built her a proper nest
- took care of her during her recovery
- made her eggs
- explained they had an ex Omega mate AFTER 3/4 mated with her
The plot and everything was also wrapped up at about 80-85%. The pacing was too quick. We needed to breathe a bit and slow down.
I also understand all OV worlds are different, but this book reads as if the author had not read any OVs before. I say this because of how excited the heat was, but I will be honest. I am a bit biased and love a feral heat scene.
I ran my thoughts through the CAWPILE system, and the rating it came out with was 1 star. The reason I rated it 3 stars on GR is because I'm a fellow author. Authors are technically coworkers. I do not think it is fair to bash other coworkers, but I do think people need to be honest. So that is why I am writing my review. I know how hard it is to write a book and do everything. This is also a debut novel. I really hope this author takes in all of the reviews that are being written and takes the constructive criticism that is being provided into her future books. I recommend getting some more beta readers to tear through your book, it'll help in the long run, I promise.
Here are the actions that they did to 'grovel':
- said sorry
- built her a proper nest
- took care of her during her recovery
- made her eggs
- explained they had an ex Omega mate AFTER 3/4 mated with her
The plot and everything was also wrapped up at about 80-85%. The pacing was too quick. We needed to breathe a bit and slow down.
I also understand all OV worlds are different, but this book reads as if the author had not read any OVs before. I say this because of how excited the heat was, but I will be honest. I am a bit biased and love a feral heat scene.
I ran my thoughts through the CAWPILE system, and the rating it came out with was 1 star. The reason I rated it 3 stars on GR is because I'm a fellow author. Authors are technically coworkers. I do not think it is fair to bash other coworkers, but I do think people need to be honest. So that is why I am writing my review. I know how hard it is to write a book and do everything. This is also a debut novel. I really hope this author takes in all of the reviews that are being written and takes the constructive criticism that is being provided into her future books. I recommend getting some more beta readers to tear through your book, it'll help in the long run, I promise.
emotional
slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
A mix
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Complicated
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
i'm still unsure if there was enough groveling for how awful they treated her but at least they recognize that they don't deserve her. i was definitely crying a lot about how they treated her and i'm glad that it was acknowledged as abuse by the doctor. this definitely wouldn't work outside of the omegaverse
Content Warnings
Graphic: Emotional abuse, Sexual content
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
A mix
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
it’s alright. not bad but nothing special. i admire that she was a baddie who stood up for herself.
emotional
funny
hopeful
lighthearted
sad
tense
medium-paced
tense
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
emotional
sad
tense
slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes