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Kids of Appetite by David Arnold

nklosty's review against another edition

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5.0

The kids of appetite struggled through many obstacles to ultimately try and help each other out. The bonds that are formed through need or youth are often the most unshakeable and most genuine. 97

in_and_out_of_the_stash's review

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3.0

Took a while to get into this.

katiegrrrl's review against another edition

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4.0

2017 Popsugar - A book by or about a person who has a disability

indecisivesailorscout's review against another edition

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5.0

I really, really enjoyed this. I haven't read a contemporary book I enjoyed in a long time, and I'm so glad I picked it up. Can't recommend enough!

joannaautumn's review

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2.0

Someone has been reading John Green. Just saying.

What even was this book? Let’s address the elephant in the room.

CAN WE PLEASE LEARN HOW TO WRITE FEMALE CHARACTERS?

Reading this book as a female was very confusing to me.

The main female character doesn’t have a personality. She is a manic pixie dream girl. And that is entirely the fault of the writer because he had material to make her a strong deuteragonist but decided to go on the other route.

Mad is a girl who loves Elliott Smith, reading The Outsiders, hanging out with her friends. And that’s that. Her page time is wasted on seemingly profound conversations with Vic and their love story.
I’ll get to that later

Mad is a victim of domestic abuse. This is a serious thing, one which should have been dealt better, In my opinion. But it was completely pushed aside until 70% of the book.

The characters aren’t really developed

Can you name 3 traits of these characters besides being nice, hurt in life, and outsiders?

They didn’t feel like real people, more like cut-outs from a list of character tropes put on paper.Reminds me of another writer, first name John, surname Green

What will you remember about the characters after you read the book and let’s say five years pass? Nothing.

The love story makes no sense and has zero chemistry

Vic is clearly attracted to Mad, Mad has shown an attraction to Vic, but at what point did it evolve into love? Pay attention to all the passages where Vic idealizes Mad and basically gets high on his idea of her.

And how many times he focuses on her looks vs. how many times he focuses on her personality.
This book has given birth to one of the most cringy YA paragraphs:

The hair led to the eyes, which led to the lips, which led to the skin, which led to, which led to, which led to . . .
Mad was a map.
And I was Magellan.


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Here’s what wasn’t a maybe: everything Mad said, every delicate movement she made—from her hair, to her hands, to the way she read a book like it was the last thing on Earth worth doing—was pure verve and value.
If a poem could be a person, it would be Madeline Falco.


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And I was absolutely blown away by her morning-type beauty. It was altogether different from her evening-type beauty. I don’t know. Mad had many beauties, and some of them were time-sensitive. And all of them made me want to do things I’d never done before.


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The thing about uniquely pretty girls is that their prettiness cares nothing for time or place. It cannot be rescheduled or relocated. They are pretty wherever they go, whenever they get there. It can be quite distracting. For example: right now, instead of thinking about the best way to hang my dead father from a chandelier, I was thinking about the best way to keep Mad’s hair out of our mouths should we ever kiss. Actually—yeah, never mind. I’d rather her hair get in on the action. Not like it would ever actually happen. Not like someone like her would kiss someone like me.


And now, behold one of the rare passages where Vic focuses on her personality, who would have thought she has one, considering the abovementioned quotations:

Mad spent the next ten minutes talking about The Outsiders. No theories or analytics. Just pure, unadulterated fangirling. In the moonlight, I stared at her lips as they moved in succinct elegance, praising story and character and setting. Apparently, the best characters in The Outsiders valued loyalty above all. And I remembered what Coco said, that if Mad’s “thing” was leaving, her other thing was coming back. I thought maybe loyalty, for Mad, was in the coming back. She recited her favorite quotes, and one of them was something about being so real that you scared people. Mad said she wanted to be that kind of real. I thought I understood. In our many conversations about art, Dad always challenged me to look past “the pretty,” as he called it. He taught me that what really mattered wasn’t beauty, but what drove that beauty, the stuff that bubbled just below the surface. Don’t look at the colors that are there, V, he used to say, pointing to various prints in my Matisse book. Look at the colors that aren’t.
As she continued, hair splashing, lips crashing, heart singing, she spoke of the joys of fiction, and about sinking into fiction, and I imagined sinking with her. I wanted to be part of all things if they were her things.
I wanted to go to Singapore and take her with me.
. . .
And I wanted her lips.


Ooops, Notice how it doesn’t last more than half a page, whilst there are never-ending passages about her physical appearance.

I might be nitpicking but the term she fangirls about the Outsiders is a thorn in my eye. She started talking about her interests, why can’t she get the same level of respect as Vic has from her about his love for art.

Vic is giving me creepy vibes

The events are happening in the duration of a week. A week. 7 days.

Vic manages to fall in love, invade her personal space, stalk her, ask for her picture after 4/5 days of knowing her, etc.

There was a scene where she gives it to him straight:

Well, you don’t really know me.”
Even though the phrase cut like a knife, I found myself entirely content. Mad’s speech was so intentional, I could almost hear the functionality of it, her lips and tongue and teeth operating as one. She spoke so quietly, all these little sentences just for me. The eyes, the sentences, the hair—these pieces that composed the single unit called Mad were astounding. They walked inside my brain, pulled up comfy chairs, and made themselves at home.
“Mad, I know you well enough to know you wouldn’t make out with anyone on impulse.”


Ladies and gentlemen, there’s nothing as powerful as a man and his illusions about a woman.
He knows her for 5 days, how the fuck does he know her as a person?? Baffles me.

Let’s talk about the appeal of this book

It has a lot of passages that are appealing to teens. A diverse cast. A love story. It reads fast. It was oriented on the chosen family – friend group. But because of the abovementioned, I really couldn’t enjoy this book.

The only thing that this book did for me is made me interested in reading [b:The Outsiders|231804|The Outsiders|S.E. Hinton|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1442129426l/231804._SY75_.jpg|1426690] and that’s the tea.

rachelbookdragon's review

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4.0

This was a solid contemporary story with a great cast of eclectic characters, an unexpected through thread, and interesting prose, using repetition, strong word choice, and good duel perspectives. It’s the story of a bunch of kids, the kids of appetite, and how this found family, and its periphery characters came to be. Found family is such a great center of a story, but Vic’s Mom and Dad and all of their relationships are so powerful. I think Vic’s Dad and his mourning process are such a strong tenant of this story. Vic’s genetic differences, and how he grows through it and finds love and strength are also powerful. There is a lot to love about this hard to describe story but I’m glad I got to read this book and meet the author.

amandakmoser's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging emotional funny hopeful inspiring reflective fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

alizalondon's review

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5.0

It's rare that I finish a book in so little time, simply because nowadays I'm always preoccupied with something else. However, the fact that I neglected all worldly matters to keep reading is a pretty big deal these days.

I won an ARC of this book at Barnes and Noble's B-Fest Trivia Challenge (Not to toot my own horn, but I won rather easily, probably due to my unfair advantage of having a blog). I didn't plan on reading it immediately, but I opened to the first page out of curiosity. Then I flipped to the second page, the third page, and the next thing I knew I was lying on my bed full of philosophical and happy thoughts with 5 hours of my day missing.

Suffice to say, Kids of Appetite was a beautiful novel that unexpectedly turned out to be poignant, poetic, moving and infinite. It is about acceptance and love and grief and more, and I can say with absolute certainty that it is probably my favorite novel of this year.

Finally, onto the actual review. Kids of Appetite is about Vic, a teenager with Moebius Syndrome, a rare neurological condition that causes facial paralysis, and Mad, a teenager struggling to find herself under an abusive uncle. However, these personal struggles are not what the book is primarily about. The story is about Vic's quest to scatter his father's ashes (Who'd died two years prior) according to a coded message written by his father before he died. In order to fulfill his father's dying wish, he, with the help of Baz, Nzuzi, Coco, and Mad, a quirky and fun group that later becomes the Kids of Appetite, travel around the state spreading ashes.

The characters were quite possibly the strongest point in this novel. They were brilliantly written, and each had their own personality and struggles, despite the novel only being told from Vic's and Mad's point of views. The book covers very real issues as well, and along with the obvious message about Moebius and discrimination, there is also addressing of the 1997-1999 conflict in the Republic of the Congo, and the struggles those refugees went through. I applaud Arnold for bringing both these more obscure issues to light with his work here.

This book is very philosophical, touching, and beautifully written. I loved how I was presented with these ideals in a manner that their presence in the story seemed natural, and not like the author's beliefs were being shoved down my throat under the guise of "character beliefs." The flipping between the past and present tied together the story very nicely as well.

If I absolutely have to point out a flaw, it would be that there is some insta-infatuation going on in the very beginning, in the sense that Vic is pretty obsessed with Mad when he first sees her (and yes, this attraction is mostly physical). But hey, it's not insta-love if it doesn't go both ways, and Vic's infatuation is quickly overshadowed by his quest, so it didn't affect my reading experience in any way.

Overall, Kids of Appetite is a highly recommended read that everyone should scramble to purchase as soon as it is released in September, because I assure you, this book is something special.

Thanks to the publisher and Barnes and Noble for providing this ARC
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erinld2005's review

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1.0

I received a free ebook copy in exchange for an honest review via FirstToRead. DNF @ about 10%. This just isn't for me. I don't know why, but I was bored. I've never read this author before and the writing wasn't bad. Just not for me I guess.

lilyellyn's review

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5.0

I thought this was great. Of course it has the extreme emotions, somewhat unrealistic dialogue, and extreme scenarios characteristic to YA, but overall I thought it did a beautiful job of weaving together so many raw and real and honest stories.