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My Government Means to Kill Me by Rasheed Newson

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brynalexa's review against another edition

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emotional informative inspiring reflective tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.75

I think I would have engaged more with this book in print. The story is great and it’s well researched but it came off a bit textbook-like at times. It didn’t quite feel wrapped up at the end, although the main character came into his own wonderfully. 

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jaynevam's review

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adventurous emotional funny informative fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.75


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naddl0r's review against another edition

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challenging emotional informative inspiring sad medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

I'm giving this 5 stars because everything I’ve read was absolutely amazing BUT this book is in desperate need of an epilogue because it ends on a cliffhanger of the sorts where you feel like a chapter is missing. It’s so abrupt, the story just isn’t over. Also- and this is highly subjective- some might say it lacks a little bit of emotion. And I can see it but disagree. I think an overly emotional, gut- wrenching, hightlighting-the-sad-and terrible-parts-of-AIDS writing style would do this particular story no good. 
I loved this book and can see myself re-reading it at some point. Well done, Rasheed Newson! 

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srobertson's review

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dark emotional funny hopeful informative reflective medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.75


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schopenhauers_poodle's review

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fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.25

Historical fiction is one of the hardest genres to pull off successfully, in my opinion. This book did not succeed. It was a struggle for me to finish reading and I came close to DNF'ing.

It's trendy now to blend fiction and non-fiction, besides "My Government...", Labatut's "When We Cease to Understand the World" springs to mind. But where Labatut does something challenging and slightly more novel by fusing the two, Newsom's book feels like the work of an amateur. I'd describe "My Government Means to Kill Me" as bad fanfic.

The footnotes bog down the narrative and I found them completely unnecessary. This is spoon-feeding the reader to the point of ridiculousness. It lends a condescending faux-academic tone to the book. If you feel your fiction needs this much exposition, something has gone wrong.

Trey is an unlikeable narrator. He's a teenage know-it-all and the frequency with which he emerges in every moment of historical importance as the savior or genius starts to become comedic. He's like an incredibly unlikeable, gay Forrest Gump. He also characterizes any unmarried woman over 30 as a lesbian which is vaguely misogynistic. So when we're introduced to his tragic background it's impossible to feel much for him or for that lore to expand the depth of his character. Additionally, the other characters feel very flat contributing to that bad fanfic feeling.

Adding to the patronizing tone of the novel is that each chapter is framed and titled as a "lesson." Each moral lesson is then neatly tied up at the end like an episode of a tv show, perhaps belying the author's profession as a tv writer. It’s Aesop's tales for baby queers.

As noted by others, despite Trey posturing as some kind of radical, it is completely at odds with the political sentiments expressed in "My Government...." which is dripping in liberalism. Trey laments that he simply didn't vote enough in elections! The (frequently wrong) footnotes describe the BPP's legacy as tainted by radicalism! Nonviolence is the highest, noblest form of protest! It feels very targeted towards a specific type of affluent liberal.

The writing is also not very good. On encountering someone only deceased for a few hours, Trey astutely remarks "He looked so lifelike." He just died? What else is he supposed to look like?  An extra from a Romero zombie film? Another closing sentence to a passage was pulled from the clichés of tv writing:

A risky idea occurred to me, and I bolted from the table, yelling, "I'll call you and explain later!" 

End scene. I actually found myself laughing.

If you need an introduction to queer history and the LGBTQIA+ movement in the US, make it something else.



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jkamler's review

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adventurous challenging funny hopeful informative inspiring fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

4.0


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anxiousnachos's review

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4.0


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