3.31 AVERAGE

reflective fast-paced

Interesting buildup, but the final act ended so abruptly that it leaves one rather unsatisfied.
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krhe's review

3.5

No sé muy bien qué pensar
challenging dark hopeful reflective sad medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This short story engaged me in what I will call act 1 but then really lost me in act 2. For me the story became disjointed lost its way.

This was complicated to rate because I love the idea and message behind this story and the whole genetic engineering topic but I just could not connect with the writing for some reason :(

yerggggggg's review

3.0
challenging dark emotional reflective fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

I’m not much of a short story fan, but this was excellent. Looking forward to the author’s new collection.
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rustbeltredux's review

3.0

Is there supposed to be a slog in the middle of a short story collection?

This one never really got off the ground for me. It’s a fascinating take on the morality and feasibility of tailor-made baby making and there was a brief glimpse of what this story could be if it was taken out of the constraints of a short story.
reflective slow-paced