3.77 AVERAGE

sleightholme's review

3.75
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
adventurous dark emotional tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

themaakie's review

3.0
adventurous slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

joabroda's review

3.5
adventurous fast-paced

 The second book in Feist's series The Serpent Saga, a subseries of The Rift Wars. Not one of my favorites by him. The story focuses on Rupert (Roo) from book 1 and his rise to fame, as merchant in Krondor. I had liked Roo a lot in the first book, but here he turns into a philandering husband and pretty bad father. After finishing the book I decided that all this, plus the story of his rise, needed to be told to continue the epic events to come . My favorite character Nakor has a few appearances and so that satisfied me and I enjoyed spending time with Jimmy The Hand and meeting his extended family. Seems like Jimmy has taught his grandsons a few of his tricks.

All in all a decent read and one more down in my mission to read Feist's entire catalog.
 

calypte's review

2.0

I bought this series in a book club deal back in 2000. This is the first time I've read it o_O

The key word in the title is 'merchant' - this is all about the economics of succeeding in business in Midkemia. It's slightly more interesting than it sounds! Only occasionally chapters are given over to the continued fight on t'other side of the world, until the final chapters jump back and forth between the two, now better tied together, story lines.

I might have liked it better if main character Roo wasn't actually a little unpleasant.

robertalllan's review

3.25
adventurous mysterious slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

For a book written in 1995 and republished in 2015, you'd think they'd have ironed out any spelling mistakes throughout. Apparently not. Misspelling the protagonist's name, using wrong words in sentences and leaving out quotation marks are generally not considered okay things to do when writing a novel.

Prior to reading this, I came across a review that claimed "I didn't think I'd enjoy a novel with the words 'merchant' and 'prince' in the title as much as I did" and after finishing Rise of a Merchant Prince, I agree with that statement. I enjoyed this book far more than I thought I would. It has its flaws, some of them bigger than others but for the first 60% of the book I had a blast. The back end was still enjoyable but the focus was taken away from Roo, going back to Erik and his elite army unit for more than I would have liked. What they got up to was fine but occasionally losing me mid sentence in its descriptions was a downside. The encounters they make in the final 50 pages are worth their inclusion, sans what felt like a drag with the Pantathians. The action that takes place throughout is well written for what it is, it's not groundbreaking or masterfully crafted, rather it works at conveying what is needed to the reader, though Feist's writing blooms with Roo's social interactions and attempts to make a name for himself in Krondor.

Speaking of which

For a book that primarily takes place in Midkemia, you'd think a map for that would be included rather than JUST Novindus, a location that takes up less than 1/5th of the book. Include both maps (like the previous book in the series) or none at all. I still got a good enough sense of direction when places were described in relation to Krondor, given that the majority of Roo's story takes place there.

Anyway.

The story finished with unresolved/unsatisfying plot points. Nothing was really done with
SpoilerKitty
after they were introduced into the story, they just kinda did nothing until they were mentioned again 3/5th into the book.
SpoilerThe Sylvia and Karli situation
is just kinda left there at the end, perhaps to be covered in the next book but certainly not in this one. What felt like a great point to finish on is somewhat diminished by the inclusion of the epilogue, basically
Spoilertime skipping two months to save the people trapped on the island, telling you everything that they were able to do to survive there over the course of 5 pages.
Yeah, I agree that as a reader you can feel better by knowing rather than waiting for the next book, but boy oh boy, were there a lot of
Spoilertime jumps
throughout as well. Yes, I get it.
SpoilerYou can't reasonably expect to chronicle Roo's amassing of such wealth without using them while trying to cover everything Erik and company do within 500 pages.


I've found Feist has a habit for learning about something and writing a lot about it in his books. It may not be what actually happens but it sure feels like it. War, horses, tides, politics and now the stock market! He wrote about this really well, namely about Roo learning the ups and downs along with the reader while keeping it interesting the whole time. Whether or not it's realistic, I think enough artistic liberties were given to keep the reader's interest. I especially loved the idea of Barrett's place, I had jazzy cafe music playing in my head whenever scenes were taking place there.

In conclusion:

It's an enjoyable book about someone trying to make a living after life gave them lemons in the first book. Worth the read if you read the first one, potentially works as a standalone with the clarifications and reminders Feist superbly throws in throughout without feeling cluttered or unnecessary (mostly).

Starts out slow for me, coming off the previous book that was even slower. This one did pick up the pace and interest toward the end. The jumping around did bring me out of the story a bit, and it felt very abrupt to me. I will continue this series and see how things come together. It seems that is how these books are, can drag and sometimes I don't see the point until he brings it all around together to make sense. This does end on somewhat a cliffhanger so there were many things left unsatisfied that I hope will have a worthwhile conclusion in the next couple books.


I have been Buddy-Reading this series over the last couple of months with a ‘book-club’ friend who had not read Raymond E. Feist’s work before. As I have been a long-time fan of his work, I have compared it to The Lord of the Rings books but have actually enjoyed this series more. When I mentioned this to my friend, she immediately wanted to read the series, and convinced me to read them with her- not that it was a big ask 😊.
It is an epic fantasy saga- with wonderful world building and scene setting, and dynamic, vivid and detailed descriptions that will transport you right into the story.
Take some time to explore Mr. Feist’s work, I’m sure you won’t be disappointed- and the best part is that all the books are available now to read- no waiting for books to be released! #WINNING
adventurous medium-paced