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3mmers's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
In other words, you need to be down with reading a book about people you are not supposed to like even a little. I saw a reviewer on Instagram say that they hadn’t enjoyed the book because the characters were xenophobic and it blew my mind because the xenophobia is there to indicate that these are terrible people, and also because they do straight up murder an innocent guy, which might possibly be worse. It’s like Keeping Up with the Kardashians, the entertainment is in the things that only the obscenely wealthy and morally decrepit people would do. Fortunately, I’ve always been fascinated in affluential decrepitude (as evidenced by a penchant for business memoirs and Knives Out) and I already liked Donna Tartt from The Goldfinch.
The second problem with reviewing The Secret History is that it’s genuinely very very good. I don’t think you have to like it even a little to acknowledge that it’s excellently written. But the trouble is that things that are good are way harder to talk about than things that are bad, especially in this case. There’s the adage from Anna Karenina that ‘happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way’ which applies just as well to novels as it does to personal relationships. Just about all good novels (excepting obvious outliers like House of Leaves) are good for mostly the same reasons. Bad novels, on the other hand, can be bad for all sorts of bizarre and unforeseen reasons because there is infinite variation among things that don’t work. When I think about the reasons that TSH is good they feel either self-evident (plot good) or ephemeral (plot good because compelling). A huge part of the reason that this book is so good is in its subtlety and effortlessness; in the moment it is very hard to tell that it is doing anything. The best parts of TSH only become apparent in comparison.Fortunately, TSH was also sufficiently definitive that it has some genre peers that it can be very effectively compared to.
In case you haven’t been on Instagram or TikTok recently and missed the first hand experience of this whole phenomenon, The Secret History is the definitive text for a whole literary and aesthetic sub-genre: dark academia. In literature this is characterized by a higher education setting, pronounced class tension between a comparatively poorer protagonist and the wealth and excess of their peers and of the learning establishment itself, and finally the juxtaposition between the staid calm of old and rich universities and an act of violence. Most of these books are technically academic thrillers. I’ll be calling upon Bunny by Mona Awad and If We Were Villains by M. L. Rio, both of which include direct comparisons to TSH in their back cover reviews. They’ve invited this comparison, so let’s compare, and hopefully thereby unravel why TSH looms so far above them.
The Secret History is a reverse thriller that opens with the revelation that a cohort of six Greek students attending an elite liberal arts school kill one of their peers and then attempt to hide the evidence. The thriller is in how they come to murder one of their own and how this violence permanently changes them. The most obvious, and in my mind most significant, difference between this and the general structure of the rest of the genre is that TSH has comparatively a much longer exposition. Most of the first third of book is dedicated to the good times, to what it was like before things spiralled out of control. It is comparatively slow-paced and low-tension but this long period of lightness is the crucial ingredient to the compelling plot that starts up later. Without much action or tension the primary draw of this section is aesthetic enjoyment. The appeal is the vibes of it. Remember how I mentioned dark academia is an aesthetic sub-genre in addition to a literary one? This is where that comes from. The audience can engage in vicarious enjoyment of the ease and affluence of going to your friend’s castle for the weekend. I compared TSH to Keeping Up with the Kardashians in the introduction because a part of the appeal of this sub-genre is a kind of wealth tourism. These works star blank protagonists amid the sort of eccentricity that is only tolerated in the ultra-rich because that is the experience it intends to present to the audience. We are also here to be swept into the kind of eccentricity that is only tolerated in the ultra-rich. There’s a lot more studying in this novel than there is in its two peers, more than there is in most novels with set in a school of some sort (with the exception of A Deadly Education by Naomi Novik). It is aesthetically entertaining in the way of a Studio Ghibli movie; think of the many scenes in Whisper of the Heart spent watching Shizuku write. Ghibli director Hayao Miyazaki used moments like these intentionally to create ‘ma’, or stillness, and it is this concept of stillness that I think of when reflecting on the slow exposition of TSH. Miyazaki used ‘ma’ to create tension. The contrast between the quiet moments made the tension and action of the dramatic moments resonate much more strongly. The technique works the same way here.
It would be a mistake to imagine that just because people enjoy The Secret History for aesthetic reasons, that it or even any of its parts have nothing to offer but aesthetic entertainment. The purpose of its slow opening is to lay the groundwork for the thriller plot at its end. Its action is compelling thanks to the strength of the set-up through inaction. The expository chapters establish fun jaunts out to the castle but they are important because these fun jaunts demonstrate the relationship between the characters and these relationships are what define and motivate the characters’ actions once they get into the thriller section. Relationships need to be very strong and effectively communicated for them to restrain behaviour in a way that feels organic rather than either contrived or random. This is most obvious in comparison. The trouble with organic storytelling elements is they can be hard to recognize in isolation. Fortunately, the biggest difference between TSH and IWWV (which otherwise have vary similar premises and character dynamics) is that IWWV doesn’t have the same long exposition and begins much closer to its action. As a consequence its characters feel artificial and unmotivated. At a fundamental level we have no reason why they should be friends if they’re all so unstable and suspicious of each other. We’ve never seen them in normal times so their relationships are unknown to us. TSH, in contrast, leans very heavily on its character dynamics so takes a very long time to establish them. It is essential for the audience to understand not only that
An important and, in my opinion under appreciated, contributing factor to the strength of the overall plot is its verisimilitude. Verisimilitude is a weird concept in fiction because basically every story needs it to be successful regardless of how realistic it is. These two qualities are similar but not synonyms. Verisimilitude is the degree to which something seems like it could be true, regardless of the likelihood of it being so. It’s relevant even in speculative fiction. As an example, Game of Thrones succeeds in a large part thanks to its verisimilitude. It may have ice zombies and dragons and magic, but all the characters still behave in a way that feels accurate, including when interacting with the fantasy elements. The Secret History is a masterful demonstration of the benefits of strong verisimilitude, though, as before, its impact on the story as a whole can only really be appreciated in its absence. It is not uncommon for this sub-genre to have unnatural or supernatural material, and while TSH is very reserved in its use of them it does feature fantastical elements. Or element.
A final note, and one I returned to a lot while reading other books both in the dark academia sub-genre and in others, is the thematic final message of The Secret History. I really like the way the novel ends.
I’m struggling to summarize why I like The Secret History so much. It’s not just that the most impressive success of the book is in the subtlety of is execution, it’s also that basically every element of the book is so good that it’s hard to pick any one out. In the end it comes down to the creation of the perfect vibes. I think this is why it has been so popular as an aesthetic movement; the vibes are simply impeccable.
Graphic: Death and Toxic friendship
Moderate: Xenophobia, Misogyny, and Incest
clarathromycin's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.0
Graphic: Antisemitism, Cursing, Incest, Physical abuse, Racial slurs, Vomit, Death, Gaslighting, Injury/Injury detail, Violence, Domestic abuse, Drug abuse, Drug use, Gun violence, Addiction, Alcoholism, Panic attacks/disorders, Self harm, Stalking, Suicide, Toxic friendship, Alcohol, Gore, Grief, Homophobia, Misogyny, Murder, Religious bigotry, Sexual harassment, Xenophobia, Blood, Emotional abuse, Kidnapping, Medical content, Racism, Schizophrenia/Psychosis , Sexual violence, Suicide attempt, Body horror, Classism, Medical trauma, Mental illness, Suicidal thoughts, and Torture
Moderate: Animal cruelty, Infidelity, and Animal death
lindsayerin's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.25
Graphic: Animal cruelty, Gun violence, Suicide attempt, Death, Suicide, Suicidal thoughts, Racism, Self harm, Alcoholism, Drug abuse, Drug use, Animal death, Homophobia, Murder, Racial slurs, and Alcohol
Moderate: Toxic friendship, Incest, Classism, Xenophobia, and Mental illness
Minor: Medical trauma, Panic attacks/disorders, Antisemitism, and Blood
afion's review against another edition
3.25
Graphic: Addiction, Gun violence, Suicide, Incest, Domestic abuse, Misogyny, Racial slurs, Antisemitism, Xenophobia, Homophobia, Alcohol, Murder, Racism, and Drug use
Moderate: Classism
Minor: Rape
hannaelisab's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Violence, Alcoholism, and Murder
Moderate: Incest, Xenophobia, and Suicide attempt
stelladafloresta's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Death, Toxic relationship, Schizophrenia/Psychosis , Violence, Mental illness, Drug use, Incest, Toxic friendship, Suicide, Murder, and Emotional abuse
Minor: Xenophobia, Classism, Homophobia, and Misogyny
gretag's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Panic attacks/disorders, Suicidal thoughts, Suicide, Emotional abuse, Gun violence, Child abuse, Death, Drug use, Incest, Injury/Injury detail, Murder, Addiction, Alcohol, Alcoholism, Antisemitism, Bullying, Car accident, Classism, Drug abuse, Toxic friendship, Toxic relationship, Xenophobia, Outing, Homophobia, and Gaslighting
Moderate: Medical content and Vomit
robi_locksley's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
1.5
Unfortunately, this book is also packed full of bigotry. There is racism, homophobia, and misogyny all over the place. And it isn't simply down to the characters being jerks. An actual line from the text, during Richard's first class with Julian: "He poured the tea as solemnly as a mandarin." The only times that bigotry is ever challenged by the narrative is when the bigotry is cartoonishly overt and hostile.
The following is not a spoiler, and serves as an example of the bigotry in this book and the filler.
There is a full page dedicated to discussing a fictional Middle Eastern country which is named Isram. ISRAM. This fictional Middle Eastern country, with only one letter changed from the dominant religion of the Middle East, is described as a terrorist state and is said to have a jihad against the main character's Greek/Classics professor.
This is all pure filler, too. There's absolutely no reason for it to be there. But there it is. Isram.
There is no convincing me that Tartt isn't a horribly bigoted person after reading that.
Graphic: Addiction, Suicide, Misogyny, Islamophobia, Murder, Racism, Rape, Xenophobia, Violence, Toxic relationship, Toxic friendship, and Sexism
nialiversuch's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Drug abuse, Gaslighting, Grief, Mental illness, Classism, Cursing, Drug use, Gun violence, Incest, Vomit, Car accident, Death, Death of parent, Emotional abuse, Infidelity, Suicide, Suicide attempt, Toxic friendship, Toxic relationship, Alcoholism, Antisemitism, Blood, Bullying, Murder, Panic attacks/disorders, Religious bigotry, Self harm, Sexism, Violence, Addiction, Alcohol, Homophobia, Injury/Injury detail, Medical content, Misogyny, Sexual assault, Suicidal thoughts, and Xenophobia
Minor: Domestic abuse
autumngk's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Drug use, Alcoholism, Death, Xenophobia, Gaslighting, Incest, Injury/Injury detail, Ableism, Addiction, Alcohol, Grief, and Gun violence
Moderate: Suicide attempt, Rape, and Panic attacks/disorders