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zrwright's review against another edition
adventurous
challenging
emotional
mysterious
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
I fell in love by the second page. The world building is very immersive. It felt very reminiscent of Howl's Moving Castle and The Enchanted Forest Chronicles. It was very easy to empathize with the characters, whether you liked them or not.
Ophelia's journey does seem dark at times, but her character keeps you invested, even when things seem tense or impossible.
Ophelia's journey does seem dark at times, but her character keeps you invested, even when things seem tense or impossible.
Content Warnings
Moderate: Physical abuse and Confinement
rowanrelph's review
challenging
dark
mysterious
reflective
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.75
Content Warnings
Moderate: Confinement
Minor: Gaslighting, Injury/Injury detail, Pregnancy, Physical abuse, Police brutality, Animal death, Blood, Death, Death of parent, Emotional abuse, and Miscarriage
cbp743's review
adventurous
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.0
Content Warnings
Minor: Physical abuse, Pregnancy, Confinement, and Murder
saoreads's review against another edition
adventurous
challenging
dark
emotional
hopeful
lighthearted
mysterious
reflective
relaxing
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
It's an easy read and the world building is also easy to follow, from the prologue till the next chapters, how the metaphors are used is essential and pleasing when it evokes a play to create the figment world. This is really more plot driven and if you're looking for romance it's basically just a sublot since Book One focuses on introducing how the system functions and the characters which serve a purpose throughout the story. I'm excited to read the second book and want to see more of Gail and Mother Hildegarde, even some of Ophelia's siblings.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Abandonment, Animal death, Blood, Bullying, Child abuse, Confinement, Death, Hate crime, Pregnancy, Torture, and Violence
ahobbitslibrary's review against another edition
adventurous
funny
mysterious
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.75
Content Warnings
Graphic: Physical abuse and Murder
Moderate: Blood, Confinement, and Toxic relationship
Minor: Dysphoria
emgulph's review
adventurous
challenging
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
As lyrical and confusing the world building could be at times, I powered through with absolute delight because I just know this dude is going to be dreamy soon. Jokes aside, I ate this up
Content Warnings
Graphic: Confinement
Moderate: Bullying, Police brutality, Sexism, and Xenophobia
anitaxlit's review against another edition
adventurous
fast-paced
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
1.0
I'm so sad to say that this book was definitely not for me, and I'm so disappointed because I wanted to love it!
On the first hundred pages I thought it was bad, but that perhaps it was simply due to poor translation work. By page 200 I concluded that sadly, both the translation and the writing were poor. The translation reads stunted and awkward on every page. The writing was bad because of... everything else.
First off, it was sexist. Slut-shaming abounds. Women are treated like shit. There is one comment — completely out of the blue, with no reason whatsoever — about a miscarriage that I found triggering even if the topic isn't normally triggering for me. I found the book generally insensitive toward women.
I've seen other reviews mention this and I must repeat it myself: the author gives each character a defining trait and mentions it every chance she gets. The fact that Ophelia, the MC, is clumsy and sickly is repeated non-stop thorughout the book. Whenever Thorn is mentioned, there is a remark on how tall he is. With Berenilde, it's her golden curls and beauty. With Rosaline, the horse's teeth. With Gail, the black hair. With Fox, the red moustache. These things are mentioned every single time one of the characters does something.
They are also completely devoid of any personality, sense or emotion. Berenilde was so confusing, I really couldn't understand her. Archibald was the most consistent of all? I think?
Ophelia has no emotional reactions to the horrible things that happen to her, and there's a lot of those! She encounters things which should be a complete cultural shock and barely reacts. Also, she can "read" objects to know things about their previous owners and travel through mirrors (which is so, so cool!!), but she never takes any advantage of that. I totally forgot about the mirror thing for like a hundred pages, and the saga is called The Mirror Visitor!
And the "romance"... Thorn says he's getting used to her and immediately Ophelia deduces that he's in love with her.
Girl what.
You need to sit down.
You need to take several seats.
And this is not simply the character being naive, the author seems to be pointing us in that direction! How can I believe he loves her when they haven't had any meaningful interactions at all?
What's most frustrating is that this had the potential to be great! The premise is amazing! The world it presents is cool! The plot is intriguing and it has one (1) twist that I liked! But the execution was done poorly, and it took away from the enjoyment I might have found in these things. So yeah, I'm sad about this.
On the first hundred pages I thought it was bad, but that perhaps it was simply due to poor translation work. By page 200 I concluded that sadly, both the translation and the writing were poor. The translation reads stunted and awkward on every page. The writing was bad because of... everything else.
First off, it was sexist. Slut-shaming abounds. Women are treated like shit. There is one comment — completely out of the blue, with no reason whatsoever — about a miscarriage that I found triggering even if the topic isn't normally triggering for me. I found the book generally insensitive toward women.
I've seen other reviews mention this and I must repeat it myself: the author gives each character a defining trait and mentions it every chance she gets. The fact that Ophelia, the MC, is clumsy and sickly is repeated non-stop thorughout the book. Whenever Thorn is mentioned, there is a remark on how tall he is. With Berenilde, it's her golden curls and beauty. With Rosaline, the horse's teeth. With Gail, the black hair. With Fox, the red moustache. These things are mentioned every single time one of the characters does something.
They are also completely devoid of any personality, sense or emotion. Berenilde was so confusing, I really couldn't understand her. Archibald was the most consistent of all? I think?
Ophelia has no emotional reactions to the horrible things that happen to her, and there's a lot of those! She encounters things which should be a complete cultural shock and barely reacts. Also, she can "read" objects to know things about their previous owners and travel through mirrors (which is so, so cool!!), but she never takes any advantage of that. I totally forgot about the mirror thing for like a hundred pages, and the saga is called The Mirror Visitor!
And the "romance"... Thorn says he's getting used to her and immediately Ophelia deduces that he's in love with her.
Girl what.
You need to sit down.
You need to take several seats.
And this is not simply the character being naive, the author seems to be pointing us in that direction! How can I believe he loves her when they haven't had any meaningful interactions at all?
What's most frustrating is that this had the potential to be great! The premise is amazing! The world it presents is cool! The plot is intriguing and it has one (1) twist that I liked! But the execution was done poorly, and it took away from the enjoyment I might have found in these things. So yeah, I'm sad about this.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Confinement, Infidelity, Misogyny, and Torture
Moderate: Miscarriage and Sexism
ghiblies's review against another edition
adventurous
mysterious
tense
slow-paced
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
I enjoyed this a lot. The world building and magic system are seriously cool and I finished the book wishing we had gotten more of this. For me this is 3 stars because I found the ending somewhat underwhelming. I suppose a nicer way to put it is that we’re left with one hell of a cliffhanger, but in short you wouldn’t be able to read this as a stand-alone, which is a shame since the universe itself is such a strong selling point for this book.
As for our protagonists, I really like them, but oh boy, they really do put the slow in slow burn. Ophelia wasn't my favourite of the two but I found her blossoming love and respect for her aunt very heart-warming and I hope this relationship doesn’t fade into the background. I was personally more intrigued by Thorn, who was left as a very enigmatic character even by the end of the book. I will say, their relationship jumped back and forth quite dramatically which I am... scratching my head at a little... The reason for their conflict perhaps feels a little weak considering how pragmatic they both are, but hopefully as they get to know each other better these misunderstandings will be cleared up. (And do I love me some miscommunication and misunderstandings in my stories *rubs hands together gleefully*)
To close, I am looking forward to reading the sequel. I am equally as invested in uncovering the fate of our protagonists as I am in learning more about this universe and its magics!
As for our protagonists, I really like them, but oh boy, they really do put the slow in slow burn. Ophelia wasn't my favourite of the two but I found her blossoming love and respect for her aunt very heart-warming and I hope this relationship doesn’t fade into the background. I was personally more intrigued by Thorn, who was left as a very enigmatic character even by the end of the book. I will say, their relationship jumped back and forth quite dramatically which I am... scratching my head at a little... The reason for their conflict perhaps feels a little weak considering how pragmatic they both are, but hopefully as they get to know each other better these misunderstandings will be cleared up. (And do I love me some miscommunication and misunderstandings in my stories *rubs hands together gleefully*)
To close, I am looking forward to reading the sequel. I am equally as invested in uncovering the fate of our protagonists as I am in learning more about this universe and its magics!
Content Warnings
Moderate: Bullying, Confinement, Misogyny, Physical abuse, and Violence
Minor: Child death and Infidelity
peachani's review against another edition
tense
medium-paced
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.0
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death
Moderate: Violence, Child death, Bullying, Physical abuse, Grief, and Confinement
Minor: Blood, Toxic relationship, and Torture
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