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miagic_tome's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Sexism, Torture, Violence, and Death
Moderate: Death of parent
Minor: Rape
sreddous's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.75
The pacing is overall a bit slow. This is sometimes a really good and interesting thing -- I do like that this book clearly tried to do something different with its structure. I think a lot of potential authors (including myself darnit!) feel pressured to fit books into 'boxes', like: [INCITING INCIDENT] MUST HAPPEN ON PAGE 5!! [ROMANTIC ARC] MUST HIT [SPECIFIC BEATS]!! etc. So it's cool to see a book try something different.
The slow pacing lends itself to some fantastic, immersive worldbuilding. The worldbuilding is EXCELLENT here. Oh, man, you can FEEL this weather and TASTE these spices and such. It's really easy to imagine yourself in this weather and in these settings.
Additionally, the plot has some super cool twists. The villain characters are very interesting here. I wasn't able to predict the reveals that happened near the end, but none of the twists felt unrealistic either. Really cool villains, and there's just enough violence to keep the threats simmering.
The place where I think the slow pacing didn't help this book is with the protagonists' character arcs and interactions. It almost felt like they were... on purpose, stubbornly, trying to avoid becoming friends, and while that makes sense in the beginning of their journey, it got annoying by the middle. Both POV characters feel a romantic connection, but IMO it wasn't built up to well. As late as like 3/4ths of the way into the book, they're still denying their feelings for each other, and other characters call them out on it, and we get some description that shows how conflicted the POV character is, and this happens.... a lot. There's slow-burn, and then....... there's stuff that feels unnecessarily repetitive.
I also don't really see WHY they like each other. There's an internal thought from Nasir in act 2 that implies he likes Zafira because she "saw him as human," but... that's not unique to her. Altair never treated him with any actual pomp and was constantly talking casually around him. I don't think it's well-built-enough, whatever is special about Zafira that changes him. I also think characters like Deen were... almost hilariously useless. I actually scoff-chuckled out loud during some of the scenes with him.
Some of the interactions and connections after the Lion shows up and reveals some twists are more emotional and believable and added some cool depth to some characters, but the Lion doesn't show up until after page 350. The slow pacing in and of itself isn't a bad thing -- what I'm saying is, I wish that slow pacing was used to actually build character connections and chemistry so that their interactions and decisions make more sense. And that's not what it's used for, IMO.
Overall, I wouldn't recommend this book if you're looking for a "emotional teamwork connection, great chemistry," type of story. I WOULD recommend it if you're looking for a "the world is full of so much magic to uncover under every rock it's dizzying!! Oh, another Weird Cool Magical Being to fight! Ahhh so much to discover!" type. There's value in both!!
So yeah. Super immersive worldbuilding, pretty overall writing style, interesting magic, interesting diverse creatures. Not-as-great character arcs and romance.
Moderate: Violence
bootsmom3's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Death, Confinement, Emotional abuse, Death of parent, Grief, Murder, Torture, Violence, and Blood
Moderate: Animal death and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Sexual content
issed's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.5
- We love a strong woman with personality
Nasir is so confusing ?? He doesn’t know what he wants never communicate, it would’ve been more accurate if he was 17 as well but he is 20 - I like the team but I’ve wish they were a little bit closer
- Love the mysterious world
- The first half is SO SLOW
- The ennemies to lovers made sense but wasn’t that intense and they quickly became lovers
Graphic: Death, Sexism, and Violence
gardens_and_dragons's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.5
Moderate: Xenophobia and Violence
joensign's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Graphic: Blood, Sexism, Death, Murder, and Violence
Moderate: Misogyny, Torture, Child abuse, Domestic abuse, Toxic relationship, Death of parent, Gore, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Body horror, Kidnapping, and Child death
justagirlwithbooks's review against another edition
4.0
“Love is for children, said the girl.
Death is for fools, said the shadow.
Darkness is my destiny, said the boy.
Allegiance is my undoing, said the eagle.
Suffering is our fate, said the beauty.
And they were all horribly wrong.”
So... I can't review this book in one single line. There's too much to say:
Lowkey wasn't expecting to get so invested into this world and enjoy this book as much as I did! Maybe I'm just a romance girl at heart. The way I absolutely ATE it up. I was here for this book lol. Solid plot, solid worldbuilding, solid writing (lots of great quotes), the yearning, the unintentionally funny moments that made me laugh out loud, great characters, great dynamics... I had a fun time reading this book, which I haven't had in a really long time! This book goes from 0 to 100 real quick, and it's around about after the 100 pages mark.
I was also re-reading certain bits to get a better grasp on the world and the characters and the plot. There is a few little nuggets of foreshadowing that I really enjoyed, as well as the plot twists. I was in this weird state where I enjoyed it so much that I didn't want it to end but I also wanted to know what would happen next. Books are weird like that.
Was the romance a little rushed but also kind of not? Yes.
Was the pacing all over the place? Yes.
Could some of the characters have been developed more? Yes.
But I still had a great time!!
Graphic: Torture, Violence, and Death
Moderate: Misogyny
chai_and_books's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Overall, was it the best fantasy book the market has to offer? No. It had its flaws, however I would highly recommend it to people who are new to the fantasy genre and want a wholesome (for the most part) story with a romance subplot that will make you scream, cry and punch the air.
Graphic: Kidnapping, Emotional abuse, Child abuse, and Death
Moderate: Violence and War
cozyreader9752's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
Graphic: Injury/Injury detail, Child abuse, Death, Death of parent, Fire/Fire injury, Genocide, Torture, Grief, Physical abuse, Murder, and Violence
Minor: Child death
a10a's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
Graphic: Blood, Violence, and Death
Moderate: Child abuse and Torture