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baileyk113's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
1.) It felt like I was speed running the entire book. Every change of scenery and situations felt very abrupt and not fully explored. For example, I was so confused when Baghra told Alina to run. Perhaps this is a reflection of Alina’s life: never constant and always changing. I can get that, but this just felt too abrupt.
2.) Like some plot points, I thought some characters were underdeveloped. I wish we got more insight to Genya’s life, maybe a dramatic betrayal of trust/allegiance. Her losing her servant status just felt half-assed. I also think, if there were a betrayal, it would further Alina’s complexity as a character. Anyway, I also felt Mal was so underdeveloped. Like one minute he’s a playboy and the next he’s described as brooding. He gives the reader a tiny glimpse of what happened but I was just waiting for more. Also wish there was more indication that the Darkling was going to be evil—I wanted to guess and not just read dialogue from Baghra that he was evil. I guess I did connect Baghra to be his mother, but I could foresee him being evil from that.
3.) Alina’s powers are cool but I wanted them to be more badass. I was very happy when she managed to do The Cut at the end.
4.) I was expecting Alina to be more important in the last scene of the fold??? Like, she was used to create a path and then the Darkling just manipulated The Fold on his own???
5.) also, I didn’t like how long it took for the world building to happen, specifically around the explanation of the magic. Maybe I was missing it or forgetting details between my sporadic reading, but I felt like it took forever to understand all the different types of Grisha. I had to look up an article to fully understand who was in what group of Grisha and why.
Interesting story, not the best executed. Hoping the next books are a bit better.
Moderate: Violence and Murder
Minor: Bullying, Emotional abuse, and Toxic relationship
aliyachaudhry's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.0
Graphic: Animal death, Death, Emotional abuse, Genocide, Gore, Toxic relationship, Violence, Blood, Murder, War, Injury/Injury detail, and Classism
Moderate: Sexual assault
Minor: Death of parent
bentobookdragon11's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Moderate: Genocide, Toxic relationship, Violence, and War
Minor: Animal death and Cursing
*kissing*fa1ry_222's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Graphic: Emotional abuse, Sexual assault, Toxic relationship, Death of parent, Murder, and Gaslighting
liminalnotes's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.75
Moderate: Animal death, Slavery, Toxic relationship, Violence, and War
wickedgrumpy's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.0
The world building and magic system is interesting (if not semi-lazy with the quasi-Russian culture) but the characters are flat and one dimensional. I was waffling on whether or not to continue the series but the idea of what comes next from the main character's POV doesn't thrill me so I'll probably look up what happens instead.
It's bizarre that the main character starts out as an orphan from war (roughly 8 years old), and seems mature beyond her 17 years by the time the main story arc starts (she is an apprentice cartographer in the army), and then regresses into angsty teenager drama full of petty, juvenile, and shallow plot points because of a chosen one trope?
Lastly, the romance was bad. Both dudes are controlling and manipulative, want to possess her, don't actually care what she wants. Think of any high school romance drama and you will understand the tropes thrown in this book. There's literally a glow up/makeover scene (multiple times actually because they want to emphasize how much she's changed from the 'skinny-but-not-in-a-hot-way' person she was before).
Minor: Adult/minor relationship, Animal death, Body shaming, Bullying, Eating disorder, Misogyny, Sexism, Sexual assault, Slavery, Toxic relationship, Violence, Blood, Stalking, Murder, Gaslighting, Toxic friendship, Alcohol, Sexual harassment, Dysphoria, War, and Classism
thesecretsapphic's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
3.25
Graphic: Adult/minor relationship, Bullying, Death, Physical abuse, Toxic relationship, Violence, Blood, Death of parent, Murder, Gaslighting, War, Injury/Injury detail, and Classism
Minor: Rape, Sexual assault, and Forced institutionalization
jupitermond's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
Graphic: Animal death, Death, Toxic relationship, and Violence
Minor: Sexual assault and Death of parent
saradasarkar's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
2.5
Graphic: Animal death and Violence
Moderate: Adult/minor relationship and War
Minor: Confinement, Toxic relationship, Death of parent, Abandonment, Alcohol, and Sexual harassment
chaoticreadingclub's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.0
Moderate: Animal death, Sexual content, and Toxic relationship