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Normally I do not enjoy even remotely vague messaging about a character's moral compass or whether they are "good" or "bad." Despite moral greyness -- or really, characters doing both good and evil, participating in manipulation or enacting violence but for righteous reasons, etc. -- I still really enjoyed it.
I look forward to reading the next book in this series.
Graphic: Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Violence, Gaslighting, Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Confinement, Physical abuse, Sexual assault, Sexual content, Sexual violence, Torture, Medical content, War
Minor: Pedophilia, Suicidal thoughts, Pregnancy, Alcohol
Graphic: Confinement, Cursing, Emotional abuse, Misogyny, Sexism, Toxic relationship, Medical content, Grief, War, Injury/Injury detail, Classism
Moderate: Emotional abuse, Sexual content, Death of parent, Pregnancy, Gaslighting
i also really liked all the plot twists scattered throughout this book. they had me gasping and having to pause because i was shocked. the pacing as well was great, and it felt like everything was moving at a realistic speed.
Graphic: Chronic illness, Confinement, Death, Terminal illness, Blood, Medical content, Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Sexual content, Pregnancy
Minor: Miscarriage, Abortion
Graphic: Mental illness, Rape, Violence, War
Moderate: Alcoholism, Body horror, Confinement, Blood, Death of parent, Classism
Minor: Addiction, Drug abuse, Emotional abuse, Genocide, Gore, Racial slurs, Toxic relationship, Police brutality, Grief, Murder, Fire/Fire injury, Gaslighting, Toxic friendship, Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Chronic illness, Confinement, Death, Gore, Sexual content, Terminal illness, Toxic relationship, Murder, Alcohol, War
Minor: Child abuse
Also if SA/rape is a trigger for you, read my spoilers:
If forced pregnancy is a trigger for you, read these spoilers:
Graphic: Misogyny, Sexism, Sexual content, Toxic relationship
Moderate: Body shaming, Confinement, Cursing, Domestic abuse, Blood, Medical content, Grief, Pregnancy, Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Miscarriage, Suicide attempt
Graphic: Confinement, Death, Misogyny, Sexism, Toxic relationship, Violence, Medical trauma, Gaslighting, Colonisation, War, Classism
Moderate: Child abuse, Physical abuse, Rape, Sexual assault, Sexual content, Sexual violence, Torture, Forced institutionalization, Blood, Police brutality, Grief, Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Gore, Pregnancy, Fire/Fire injury, Colonisation
Maybe it's biggest issue is the sheer length. It was so torturously boring. There is so much time taken up in this book where Zetian is in recovery, and then learning, and then plotting and so much of this could be cut out or made more interesting. It was horribly done. This book felt like it wasn't thought out at all, almost like it was written in a stream of consciousness and never edited or condensed and certainly not carefully planned out.
The political parts feel written for the comprehension of a seven year old. You really don't have to hold my hand and tell me all the ways that women deserve rights, I'm already there with you. The writing in these sections (and there were SO MANY of these sections) was fucking dreadful. The pacing was a disaster, the internal dialogue was unbearable, and it felt both patronizing to the reader and also to the main character.
The characters are fucking awful and I hate them all. Congrats, you even made me hate Zetian, who was previously one of my favourite characters I had ever read. How do you take a character with the power and fortitude that she had in the first book and just make her into a complete doormat in the sequel? Controlled by men at every turn, never fighting against them and even willingly submitting to them IN EVERY WAY. Zetian from the first book would have rathered die than end up as Zetian in the second book and I'm furious on her behalf. Awful writing.
I don't understand why all of the "intimate" scenes in the first book, involving pairings who actually liked each other, were fade-to-black but in the sequel, the pairing who viciously hate each other have far more mature, detailed sex scenes. I can't help but question why it was more acceptable to write several fairly graphic scenes of what I would consider violent sexual assault, coercion and rape than it was to write graphic scenes of consensual sex. I do not care that they had safe words, Zetian felt obliged to say yes to him in the first place because of the immense power he had over her even if she's "using him" to preserve her own safety. That is an incredible power imbalance that is not rectified just by having trite little safe words. It is coercive at best and rape at worst. She was only with this man because she was threatened into it. There is no undoing that. You can't go back on that and suddenly make these scenes "sexy" instead of Zetian getting dubious sexual pleasure from being raped.
The massive disappointment of this sequel has changed how I view the first book in some ways. There was a lot of clumsiness and heavy-handedness in Iron Widow that I forgave/passed off as being camp and intentionally over the top but I think maybe the author just isn't a very good writer after reading this. Maybe the first book was a fluke. I wish it had ended differently and been a standalone because this was such an unbelievable flop.
If you loved Iron Widow, do yourself a HUGE favour and don't touch this book. I am not someone who buys new books without reading a library copy first but I loved the first book so much that I bought this sequel without hesitation and I regret it so much. I will be reselling it ASAP, I don't even want this thing in my house. I will be reading all of the spoilers and reviews of the next book before I consider even signing it out from the library, I don't know if it's possible for the author to fix the havoc they wreaked here.
Graphic: Body horror, Confinement, Domestic abuse, Eating disorder, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Rape, Self harm, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Medical trauma, Sexual harassment
I did really miss the other
Graphic: Ableism, Body horror, Confinement, Death, Emotional abuse, Genocide, Misogyny, Sexism, Sexual content, Sexual violence, Toxic relationship, Violence, Medical content, Grief, Medical trauma, Murder, War, Classism
Minor: Miscarriage, Pregnancy
Graphic: Child abuse, War, Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Confinement, Misogyny, Sexism, Violence, Medical content, Grief
Minor: Drug use, Sexual content, Pregnancy, Alcohol, Colonisation, Classism