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A book full of twists and turns, and you're not sure you can trust anyone! Evie Porter has it all--a rich boyfriend who's just asked her to move in with him, a peaceful life, a beautiful home.....but there's one catch. Evie Porter doesn't exist, it's an alias created by her boss, and her boyfriend is her mark. She works for the mysterious Mr Smith, who doles out information as needed, and assigned her to infiltrate Ryan's life. However the longer she's with Ryan, the more she starts to fall for him. To feel an ache for this to be real. Then one day at a party, she runs into a woman who looks startlingly like her....and has her birth name. Her REAL name, Luca, the identity she has always hoped to one day return to, and she's shaken to her core.

She investigates and reaches out to Mr Smith, who tells her its a test, and she better get it together and wrap up the mission. Evie invites the imposter Luca over for dinner with her boyfriend, and they have a lovely evening. The next day though, they wake up, and fake Luca and her boyfriend have died in a car crash. Obviously everyone is shaken up, and the cops take Evie and Ryan's statements. A few days later though, the cops come back to question Evie due to a warrant for her, tied to the death of a woman that happened on Evie's last job in Atlanta.

Evie is shattered but she keeps it together. The cops have a picture of her leaving the hotel where a woman she was assigned to on her lost job died. She quickly consults with a lawyer and secretly contacts her tech wizard best friend/ally, and they start to hatch a plan. Evie knows Mr Smith is after her and he wants something. He ends up contacting her and saying he needs what she got on her last mission. He has her on tape putting something in a security deposit box, and if she doesn't turn it over, he's giving everything incriminating over to the cops in Atlanta.

Evie is adamant she doesn't have anything in the security deposit box, but mr. Smith does not relent. So, Evie sets off on a trip to Atlanta. However, Ryan refuses to let her go alone. He says he will come with, and they'll both meet the lawyer in Atlanta friday morning. As they road trip, Evie and Ryan both seem on the precipice of telling the other something big, but they don't spill. Evie, working with her techy BFF, starts the ball rolling on an elaborate plan to figure out who Mr. Smith is, and flush out whatever he has on her. She visits former marks and bugs them, she connects with allies from her past, all while mr. smith gets increasingly upset.

Halfway through their trip, she overhears Ryan talking to George, who is Mr Smith's messenger of many years and is baffled. Why would Ryan be receiving information from Mr Smith? What does he know? Is RYAN mr smith? Evie ends up slipping away in the night, and finishing her mission on her own. She shows up Friday in Atlanta, ready to meet with the cops.

As a reader I was nervous at this point--what was going to happen? but when the cops showed up, Evie was cool as a cucumber. She simply said the woman in those photos/videos was Luca. Which....is the truth, since she is Luca, but she means it was imposter Luca who died! She herself has a rock solid alibi with a member of the Atlanta Falcons, who she facetimes right then and there. The cops are kind of like...huh, okay yeah, and she leaves, heading to the bank to confront Mr Smith.

At the bank it turns out Mr Smith is actually George!! Twist, but thank god it's not Ryan. She takes George/Mr Smith into the security deposit box room, where they open it up and....there's nothing in there. Just a white origami swan. Mr Smith is pissed as hell, and Evie reveals that she knows who he is and what he's been up to, and she has some friends outside who would like to see him. Those friends are in fact the mobsters Evie was supposed to be getting dirt on during her Atlanta mission, but it turns out Mr Smith was just skimming off of them. So Evie hands Mr Smith over to his enemies, and immediately gets on a plane to her techy BFF's house where it turns out, the "dead" woman from Atlanta has been, alive, the whole time! The dead woman was working WITH Evie and tech BFF, all to take Mr Smith down. Very satisfying.

We get a little bit of a flash forward, where Evie says she's going clean, but in a few months, she goes back to Ryan to confront him about what happened. They have a heart to heart and clarify the shady shit they've both been up to, but decide to be together. The final scenes are of the future, where Evie and thought-to-be-dead woman Hannah are now Ms Smith, taking over the business.

It was a very satisfying climax and ending! I like how it all played out, and the flashbacks were very effective story telling. It was a good application of not revealing everything to the reader at once; the characters always knew more than the reader did. Would recommend if you like books about messy lady protagonists!

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kelbs42's review

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adventurous mysterious fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? No
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.0

I worked at a 21c for awhile.

bookishrealm's review

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2.0

I'm going to be the unpopular opinion with this one. It just didn't work for me!

This was my first experience reading Ashley Elston although I'm aware of the work that she's done in young adult literature. First Lie Wins has received a lot of buzz this year and is listed by GR as one of the 2024 releases so far. Being chosen as a Reese Witherspoon book club pick seemingly helps as well. It follows main character, Evie Porter (alias), who has been given a job by the mysterious Mr. Smith that specifically deals with another character by the name Ryan. Unfortunately, this time around Evie is struggling with keeping her personal feelings separate from the job and may want more with Ryan than she anticipated.

Okay, this book was lowkey confusing af. It wasn't always told in a linear fashion and included flashbacks to Evie's previous jobs. There were so many different scenarios and characters that I often found it hard to keep with who was who. Additionally, I'm not exactly sure what this novel was supposed to be. It wasn't really a thriller, it didn't feel like a mystery, Evie felt like a spy, but I'm not sure if Elston was going for a espionage theme. Honestly, it just felt all over the place. The pacing wasn't good, the character development wasn't good, and the "reveal" of the story was underwhelming and even more confusing. I agree with reviewers who have stated that if you, as an author, have to explain everything via the main character to the readers, you did not do an affective job as a storyteller. By the time I made it to the end of the book, I honestly didn't care either way.

If you loved this book, that's great but it didn't work for me. I won't cross Elston off my list completely, but I don't think this was a strong step into the adult category as an author.

killer_queer's review against another edition

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adventurous mysterious tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? It's complicated
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.25

savagescholar's review against another edition

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adventurous hopeful mysterious reflective tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.75

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