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One Dark Window by Rachel Gillig

157 reviews

leasasaa's review against another edition

3.75

dark tense fast-paced

Plot or Character Driven: Plot

Strong character development: Complicated

Loveable characters: Yes

Diverse cast of characters: No

Flaws of characters a main focus: No

The atmosphere, the storyline, the magic system and the writing (mostly) were all great; where the book failed for me was the romance plot unfortunately. It felt really flat and rushed and was just not really believable. And i had a tiny problem with the writing and that is just the overuse of some phrases that stuck out like a thorn in your eye.
But overall still a good story and I will definitely be reading the second book.

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scarlett_librarian's review against another edition

4.5

adventurous dark emotional hopeful mysterious sad tense medium-paced

Plot or Character Driven: A mix

Strong character development: Yes

Loveable characters: Yes

Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

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howboutjane's review against another edition

4.0

dark mysterious tense medium-paced

Plot or Character Driven: A mix

Strong character development: Yes

Loveable characters: Yes

Diverse cast of characters: No

Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

Dr. Seuss for adults that like dark fantasy. Really interesting magic system, solid plot and a cute slow burn romance. Great read!

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janieboucher's review against another edition

4.5

dark emotional mysterious medium-paced

Plot or Character Driven: A mix

Strong character development: Yes

Loveable characters: Yes

Diverse cast of characters: No

Flaws of characters a main focus: No

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mtorma13's review against another edition

4.0

dark mysterious fast-paced

Plot or Character Driven: Plot

Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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not_another_ana's review against another edition

3.25

adventurous dark mysterious tense medium-paced

Plot or Character Driven: A mix

Strong character development: Yes

Loveable characters: Yes

Diverse cast of characters: N/A

Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

"The girl, the King..." I breathed. The Nightmare's voice burned through my mind. And the monster they became.

The city of Blunder is cursed. Not only is it surrounded by a mist that drives people mad, but its inhabitants also have to contend with "the fever", an ailment that either kills the child that contracts it or bestows upon them magic. However, all magic has a price, and anyone who survives this is bound to "degenerate" in violent or fatal ways. For this reason, all magic is forbidden, except for the use of these magic cards (in possession of the nobles) that keep the user safe from degeneration, and any survivor of the fever must be executed.

Elspeth Spindle survived this illness and managed to hide this fact from the public. She now lives a mostly normal life and is seemingly powerless, except for the Nightmare, a shadowy monster that lives in her head and lends her his strength in times of need. One day she runs into the king's nephew and, when her secret partially gets out, is dragged into a mission that could potentially cure her as long as she manages to collect all the magic cards before the solstice. But magic always comes with a price and the degeneration might find her first.

Is this book good? Debatable. Did it keep me reading? Yes, I will give it that. The action in this is very compelling and something is always happening, forcing the reader to keep turning the pages. At the same time it's a plot that is both contained and empty. If I had to describe this book in one word, I would say it's serviceable, it knows exactly what it is and executes it in a sufficient way. The plot is a vehicle for the romance so a lot of world building and interesting ideas get sidelined in favor of the relationship between Elspeth and Ravyn. This brings me to my first point: everyone's names were soooo bad, I wrote "unmoanable" in my notes. Is this a petty grievance? Yes, but it did bother me.

Now to my biggest gripe: the world building. As I mentioned before, the author didn't put any care into weaving the setting of this book. I have no idea what Blunder looked like or its geography, somehow they were able to quickly travel from the King's castle to any other place on the map by riding a horse really fast. It seems like the setting is vaguely medieval, at least culturally, yet Elspeth (the oldest daughter of a noble) walks alone in the middle of the night, stays at her suitor's estate without any sort of maid or chaperone, and spends time alone with men who aren't related to her, with no damage to her honor. We see almost nothing of the average citizen's experience, it's all from the noble's point of view, and this makes the environment feel fake like a Hollywood set. I also find it odd that in a place with magic and superstition there doesn't seem to be any kind of organized religion around either the providence cards or the spirit of the woods.

The romance was fine, a bit instalove-y but not the worst thing I've come across. Ravyn is a bit of a generic dark haired love interest, but I did like their interactions and at least they had something in common.

Ngl I kinda thought the Nightmare and Elspeth had chemistry LMAO. I blame reading too many Venom fics for this ok, but I genuinely thought they had something going on and then Ravyn turned up and I was like ah. Curse my active imagination!

The other characters were there, the only one I felt got a bit more depth was Elm and it still was quite superficial.

Was the prose flat? Yes. Did the rhymes suck? Absolutely. Is the author quite heavy handed with what she's trying to say? Correct. And yet I read this whole thing in like a week, and I just started reading book two, so she won and I'm a fool.

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amy14's review against another edition

4.0

adventurous fast-paced

Plot or Character Driven: Plot

Strong character development: No

Loveable characters: No

Diverse cast of characters: No

Flaws of characters a main focus: No

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alba_1994's review against another edition

2.5

adventurous dark mysterious fast-paced

Plot or Character Driven: A mix

Strong character development: No

Loveable characters: Complicated

Diverse cast of characters: Yes

Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This had a great premise. I just felt the character design was very shallow which resulted in inconsistent actions and undeep relationships.

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notbambi's review against another edition

4.0

adventurous dark emotional mysterious tense medium-paced

Plot or Character Driven: A mix

Strong character development: Yes

Loveable characters: No

Diverse cast of characters: No

Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

I liked a lot about this book - the atmosphere, the creepy nursery rhymes, the relationship between Elspeth and Nightmare, the magic system. It started slow, but after a few chapters, I was hooked. It wasn't quite a five star for me, in part because the plot and worldbuilding lacked depth and the romance didn't come together in a satisfying way for me.

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abbyweber's review against another edition

5.0

adventurous dark emotional funny inspiring mysterious tense fast-paced

Plot or Character Driven: A mix

Strong character development: Yes

Loveable characters: Complicated

Diverse cast of characters: Yes

Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This was a great start to the duology. The world building was clear and the characters so well developed. I’m just glad I don’t have to wait for the second book to come out because that was quite the cliffhanger! I can tell the author took the time to develop this story. The care and attention she gave to the characters and their roles to the story is evident and I really appreciate that. This, my friends, is how you write a gothic fantasy romance.

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