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dnf 48%, i just can't.

this was such a disappointment, i wanted to love this so bad but the fmc was pissing me off and while i did kinda love the mmc, he also got on my nerves when he was describing her.

you would think they would both be giving scary, feared, strong main characters but all i got were immature, stupid, slow, and definitely not feared.

she's supposed to be getting revenge for her family so she's pretending to be a man in the military (God knows how) to find out who ordered the attack. now, you would think she would become a hacker or something better and easier, but no ! she decided to make her life, and mine, harder by pretending to be a man.

she threw herself to get shot instead of throwing her gun !!!!! is she the stupidest person possible? yes.

this is how she disguised herself- short hair, bandaged chest, and a "masculine" voice. how ugly can you be for these highly trained military men to actually, wholeheartedly, believe you're a man ? and it's said multiple times that she's the smallest one there. not only that, but the mmc keeps saying she has soft features. on top of that, he was 99% sure she was a she, and he still called her a he in his inner monologue, like what the fuck for ??

honestly, i don't mind kirill, the mmc, but he can be annoying sometimes. mostly when he's describing her "softness" like shut up

'I’m struck by the sheer softness of the fucker, especially when he’s not being rigid and going through all the motions to appear tougher than he actually is.'

'No fucking kidding, he actually moans. The sound is soft, too, like…'

his character was so wasted, this is not how he's supposed to be talking and carrying himself.

'Despite her short brown hair, she looks more feminine than most women.'

wtf does that even mean? not him saying we're ugly when she was believed to be a man with her ugly ass face please.

she acts too immature to be getting revenge for her family. she needs to be put in daycare because this is unbelievable. she's crying and talking about her problems with him for absolutely no reason like who said this wasn't the man that ordered ur family to be killed babes or are u just so naive? go kys please. she got too comfortable too fast.

"I just can’t stop thinking about how it’s all because of me… Everyone dies because I exist in their lives…”

she makes everything about herself. she was supposed to die too LMAOOOO like you were not spared, they just thought you were away, get over yourself.

all in all, the mmc was wasted, the writing was atrocious, the fmc was absolute ratty garbage, and this entire mulan idea was not ideaing because nothing about it made sense.

screams2331's review against another edition

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dark mysterious tense fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? It's complicated
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.5

r_maree's review against another edition

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dark mysterious tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

saphyr65's review against another edition

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challenging dark emotional mysterious sad tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix

4.5

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