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A Most Unusual Kidnapping by J.C. Long

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4.0

What happens if you're hired to kidnap someone, but your employer and your target turns out to be the same? This, apparently. I loved this m/m sci-fi adventure, as short as it was. I especially loved Cael and his confidence - he's the type of character I like, and he reminded me of one of my own OCs. I also liked that the rest of Dalen's crew were aliens, although uh, the space bunny was a little hard to visualise.

One annoying thing was that I noticed several typos, which happens to everyone of course, but in a story this short it's pretty visible.
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