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aster1123's review
4.0
meh, sweet enough but not great. also made a big old mistake in the epilogue that was really off putting considering how short this story is:
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a whole paragraph about how cody's father didn't like jason at first?! really?! in a 48 page story where you went out of your way to talk about how cody's parents died and how lonely he is for family and you just *forget* in the epilogue. what this tells me is that she decided to kill both parents off after the whole thing was written and she missed a paragraph. which is super lazy editing/writing.
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