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London urban fantasy with four warring magical families as the setting for a detective plot. A very nice idea with some intriguing characters, which manages to set up a world and a bunch of future plot elements without overwhelming the current story. Lovely cover, too.
Lots of good stuff, but sadly let down by inadequate editing. (If I had a quid for every time I wrote that...) There are plot holes, clunky phrasing with repeated names, grammar errors, stray punctuation marks to the point where I'm wondering if someone uploaded the wrong file. It's a shame because in the highly crowded field of London fantasy this is offering something a bit different, fresh, and entertaining, and I'd have liked to recommend it more wholeheartedly.
Lots of good stuff, but sadly let down by inadequate editing. (If I had a quid for every time I wrote that...) There are plot holes, clunky phrasing with repeated names, grammar errors, stray punctuation marks to the point where I'm wondering if someone uploaded the wrong file. It's a shame because in the highly crowded field of London fantasy this is offering something a bit different, fresh, and entertaining, and I'd have liked to recommend it more wholeheartedly.