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beebliobibuli's review
2.0
The story started awesome and developed in a good way, it was easy enough finding out who "that person is too shady for my taste" was, but in the last pages, it felt like the author wanted to finish quickly, so it spoiled the whole thing.
chewdigestbooks's review
3.0
It is safe to say that I wanted to like this much more than I did after reading the beginning. Short stories tend to be the bain of my existence. I'm truly picky and if there isn't real depth of character or an actual resolution to the story that I can point to, I get grumpy and unsatisfied.
There is no resolution to any of my questions, whether I had them going into the story or as they popped into my mind while reading. It didn't make me angry, just unfulfilled, which is a personal problem that I often have with shorts. It isn't them, it's me and my expectations.
Still, there are things that should have been known here that were never explained and things that I didn't really even care about that were left hanging. It wasn't a neat package with a bow.
There is no resolution to any of my questions, whether I had them going into the story or as they popped into my mind while reading. It didn't make me angry, just unfulfilled, which is a personal problem that I often have with shorts. It isn't them, it's me and my expectations.
Still, there are things that should have been known here that were never explained and things that I didn't really even care about that were left hanging. It wasn't a neat package with a bow.
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