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Melt With You by Jennifer Dugan

4 reviews

emily_mh's review against another edition

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tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

1.0

Fallon and Chloe are both awful and have such a crappy relationship. Let's get into it.

Why is Fallon awful? She literally expects Chloe to read her mind and gets pissed at her when she can’t. Fallon didn’t tell Chloe how much sex meant to her, so how was Chloe supposed to know that? Fallon said it was okay that Chloe couldn’t come to the diner, so how was Chloe supposed to know that it WASN’T okay?? On more of a craft note, I literally have no idea who Fallon is outside of her anger over Chloe. It occupies every SENTENCE of the book which is exhausting to read about, and also means we get no character construction.

Why is Chloe awful? When Fallon explicitly tells Chloe she doesn’t want to be around her, doesn’t want to talk, etc. Chloe does the exact opposite, constantly. It made my skin crawl. I’m not saying I agree with Fallon’s choices but oh my god leave the poor girl alone. Also, all the nice things she did for Fallon weren’t because she wanted to make Fallon feel good or whatever, but because she was trying to entice Fallon to being her best friend again. And then when Fallon was trying to explain her feelings, Chloe automatically assumes the worst of her and won’t let Fallon get a word in. Then later when they meet with Delilah, Chloe is grossly possessive and jealous, trying to dictate what Fallon does and being so mean to Delilah.

Why is their relationship crappy? Firstly, we aren’t actually shown how close Chloe and Fallon were, we’re just told about it, so I was utterly unconvinced by their connection platonically. There was also no romantic chemistry. There was some physical chemistry on Fallon’s part at least. But at 60% in the reader is still under the impression that Chloe hooked up with Fallon just for fun, which makes it hard to see her as the love interest, especially coupled with everything else. (And just to note, the reader never finds out when Chloe actually started having feelings. To me that makes it seem she developed them on the road trip and so it’s hard to believe she had any deep feelings for Fallon like Fallon had for her). Also, these two are just so mean to each other!! I genuinely cannot recall a time throughout the book when they said something nice about the other person to her face. But I especially hated how Chloe would roll her eyes whenever Fallon expressed her annoyance or anger over something. Gross!! They’re also both so passive aggressive and think the worst of each other. How are you supposed to root for them to be together, let alone as people? All their relationship ended up being was toxic and messy, with the characters and the author apparently believing it was cute as can be.


Yeah so I hated this read and it's honestly made me question whether I want to read anything by Dugan in the future. 

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modernmatilda's review against another edition

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emotional funny hopeful inspiring lighthearted medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

5.0

I will read anything Jennifer Dugan writes. But a story about friends-turned-lovers-turned-enemies-turned-?? set on a roadtrip in an icecream truck? Yup. Yup yup yup. 

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moonyreadsbystarlight's review against another edition

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adventurous funny lighthearted

3.0

After a post-hookup falling out, ex best friends still have to work at their mothers' ice cream truck. It's up to them to get it to an important event. So friends or no, they have to embark on a road trip that will make or break their friendship. 

There were lots of cute things about this. I loved the premise and the ice cream puns, and an opposites attract dynamic can be adorable. The writing style was quirky with little fourth wall breaks that were fun. I also think this book does a good job discussing consent. It is sex-positive and centers consent, but there isn't graphic sexual content, which I think makes it more accessible to some readers. 

However, a lot of this book hinged on miscommunication that just lasted way too long. I do think that *some* of that miscommunication would have made sense for the book, but it went on too long and was frustrating. I definitely think that it could work for some readers, but maybe not for me. 

If you're looking for a cute summer romance with discussion of friendship and ice cream puns, and are okay with/enjoy miscommunication in a romance plot, definitely pick it up. 

I received an ARC from the publisher in exchange for an honest review. 

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decklededgess's review against another edition

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emotional funny hopeful lighthearted reflective relaxing fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0

trigger warnings: divorce mention, car break in

I will preface this entire review with the fact that I have loved Jennifer Dugan's books through and through. This book is on par with her writing and storytelling in her previous releases and my opinion on the characters doesn't take away from the craft of the story. It's a heartfelt coming of age, figuring out the new dynamics of relationships in the face of distance and new life courses, and cherishing youth to its fullest.

I vibe with JD's books so much that this time I got sucked into Fallon's storytelling to the point where I wasn't able to parse out the story objectively and was ready to go to bat for her because of the dumb shit Chloe said. Honestly, their reactions were really age appropriate but I genuinely thought that some of the "I'm hurt so I'm saying literally anything" nonsense was out of pocket. There was an instance where someone was blamed for not disclosing that they were a virgin. Best friends or not, no one is privy to that information if the person in question doesn't want to share it. And over the course of the book Fallon got on my nerves too. But that's teenagers so this was perfectly written to reflect children being children, especially just adults. 

Frustrating but well done. 

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