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When the Moon Hatched by Sarah A. Parker

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adventurous medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

My favorite review of this book from reddit is "When the Moon Hatched is not Sarah A Parker's WORSE book..." 

I have so much to say. Romantasy novels have completely flooded the market with predictable story telling mixed in with middle-grade level writing and the illusion of complexity and this book is no exception. I really don't want to yuck anyone's yum but this book makes me mad. Actually mad. 

So I have three points I want to bring up that you shouldn't ignore. 

  1. If you read the other reviews on this book DO NOT IGNORE the warnings about the writing style- the author throws in all these buzz word adjectives and metaphors and similes over and over again to try and make it seem poetic- it's just repetitive and uninsightful and a waste of paper. 
  2. If you want to read porn get on Wattpad. It's free and the writing is just as good if not better. At least don't waste your money on this.  SPOILER TW : SA
    I lived in constant fear I was going to read that main character or a different female character was going to assaulted, the author also definitely wrote this with some sort of breeding infatuation
  3. I mean this so genuinely...I love the dragon lore, LOVE the dragon lore. I think it is so cool and so interesting but not worth the read unfortunately. It's heartbreaking that the rest of the story is such a flop. The characters don't motivate me to read and there just isn't enough for me to ever recommend it. 



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Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

When the thesaurus was snatched. 

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Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

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Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

Maybe this wasn't for me, but i feel like I spent 20 hours of this book desperate for it to go somewhere. It felt like 3/100 secrets were solved here. I LOVE the world building. The dragons, the paper larks. Its so cool. But the fmc drives me batty with her recklessness especially when she's supposed to be a top assassin and the mmc is hot. I like how he talks to her but bro, barely any actual movement in their misunderstandings. This book should have been half as long. Probably won't keep going which is a bummer. 

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Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This book treats people like animals by putting them into vulnerable situations then coercing them into submission with basic needs and calling it love. The protagonist is groomed like a feral cat TWICE by a man who claims to love her more than anyone.

Also it reads like a fanfiction. The sentence structure is so bad; how can there be page long sentences and one word paragraphs in the same chapter? I get that this is a first person narrative, but the tone of voice gets real confusing when the narration includes personal thoughts by the protagonist with no change in punctuation or font. I’m drawn away from the world every time I have to hear this feral woman’s insane thought process. 

The dragons were cool, though. Two stars for the dragons.

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Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

The love and care that has gone into this book is second to none. 
I was looking for a fantasy book for a long time that caught me like When The Moon Hatched did. 

I was too bored with the classic YA fantasy books promoted by Booktok. Or the older Highfantasy books that are slowly becoming outdated and deep with sexism. 

When the moon hatched really surprised me in that sense. 
Of course it still uses the typical tropes. But there's a fine line between skillfully incorporating them and having a whole world and story on top of them.
When a scene happened that I would describe as tropey, it made me smile rather than being annoyed by it. 

The beautiful cover gives a false impression. I was really expecting a typical YA fantasy story as it has been written a thousand times before. 
The brutality, "spicyness" and vulgar language almost surprised me in a positive way.

The magic system is great. I love elemental magic!

But where the book really shines is in the description of the lascivious, colorful world built with attention to detail. 
Anyone who liked looking for aesthetic images of fantasy worlds on Pinterest in 2019 will feel right at home here. 
Everytime I started reading, I saw a beautiful, cinematic scene in my head. It was so easy so visualise the lush and diverse world. 

The highest praise goes to the illustrator, who really does a great job. The chapter illustrations are the most beautiful I have ever seen. They motivated me to continue reading with every chapter. 
 
I also love how pictures were used to represent magical items or letters. 

There is so much love in this book! I forget that the protagonist Raeve sometimes annoyed me with her stubbornness. The same goes for Kaan and other characters, who were a bit too similar to the familiar character constellations for me. (Huge man, protective, controlling. Just a "Rhys" variant that you can't quite get away from since SJM's Acotar).

So I would say, the only draw back was that I would've liked to see more facets of each characters. Yes, we got deep insights. Yes, we got emotional scenes. But some small thing was missing, which I can't put my finger on atm. 
Maybe I would've liked to see more calmer scenes. But I get that the plot has so go on, especially in such a long book. 

The Enemies to Lovers trope, as obligatory and overdone as it feels by now, worked very well. 

The mystery surrounding Elluin etc was also great. The story in general was very engaging and original. 
I would love to return to this world. But I'm curious to see what happens in the next volume. In theory, the story could almost be finished for me. Even if there are still some mysteries left open. Maybe I'm just tired of long fantasy series that are repetitive. 

All in all, it was an amazing reading experience. It still can't compete with my all-time-favourites, but it was exactly what I was craving for. 


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Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

The world building in this book was amazing, it was so detailed and packed with sensory information that made me feel really immersed into their world. The way it was written was so beautiful too. The overall plot and concept was also so good! 

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I’ve fallen in love with yet another fictional world. This book is so beautifully written and the descriptive details are magical! Kaan and Raeve are definitely two of my new favorite characters. The emotions that I felt while reading this were intense! The love that Kaan has for Raeve is completely unmatched and the heartbreak of watching her push her feelings down because she thought herself so unworthy of love just hit my soul so deeply. I wish I had read it sooner and I can’t wait for the next book release!

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