30 reviews for:

Alpha Bully

Sam Crescent

3.06 AVERAGE

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goblincrikit's review

3.0
medium-paced
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avidthethird's review

1.0

Erm...Erm...Erm...Erm...Erm...

Gosh, I never hated a heroine on the spot like this. She keeps saying "Erm...". YIKES !!

Merged review:

Erm...Erm...Erm...Erm...Erm...

Gosh, I never hated a heroine on the spot like this. She keeps saying "Erm...". YIKES !!
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kaylathekhaleesi's review

1.0

Yeah this definitely needs some editing. The first paragraph alone made me feel like I was reading an elementary book.
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marjola14's review

1.0

So dumb.

schoolnurserosie's review

4.0

I really enjoyed it but it needs better editing. The mistakes made it feel like I was reading fan fiction instead of a book that I purchased. Please get an editor!!!
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scarchitax's review

2.0

Pesimo pesimo

bridgetonowhere_'s review

3.0

The cover.

O.o

Dont let the cover mislead you. This is a story about an 18 year old boy ( ok, they do describe him as beefy) and his 17 year old (very chubby) girlfriend.


My only complaint really is, I wasn't expecting the story to stay in the high school setting. I just assumed since its SC and her works are more steamy, that it would start in high school, and then fast forward to them being adults. Which it doesn't.


But don't let the ages of the MCs fool you, this is not a young adult book. Its a classic SC, alpha possessive guy, shy smart chubby girl, hawt sex( only at the very end).

So, +18 only
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simply_caro's review

4.0

Surprisingly good. I didn't love the beginning, but the action matching the apology was great.

neverending_tbr's review

2.5
dark emotional lighthearted sad fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
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radioativaa's review

3.0
emotional fast-paced