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elfaz's review
lighthearted
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
1.5
Badly written fanfic that’s 100 pages too long
Content Warnings
Graphic: Panic attacks/disorders, Bullying, Child abuse, Sexual content, and Emotional abuse
Moderate: Dysphoria, Xenophobia, and Mental illness
bookcasey's review against another edition
adventurous
funny
hopeful
lighthearted
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Minor nitpick: There is a throwaway comment that makes no sense, and I would encourage the author to learn more about ADHD. It’s pretty ridiculous to have a character explicitly say they don’t have ADHD and then give said character a whole slate of neurodivergent traits - including a lot of the signs of ADHD.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Toxic relationship and Emotional abuse
Minor: Death of parent and Xenophobia
The toxic relationships are between
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