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The slow build-up to Jordan's and Pike's relationship was intense; you could feel their attraction from the start. However, when they finally got together, the story became a tad dull and repetitive; if they had communicated, they would have caused less heartache, especially for Jordan.

Also, I had a problem with how Pike was described as "one of the good ones" because he was not. He referred to Jordan as a "toy" and treated her like a child; if you think of someone as a child and too young, don't get into a relationship with them when you are a fully grown adult, it's creepy. He was over-controlling too. So, my point is, should he really be described as "one of the good ones"? Because, in all honesty, Jordan deserved better.

That being said, Pike did, at times, reflect on his controlling behaviour towards Jordan, but although he gave a good apology, he should have looked to change that behaviour. In the end, we saw some change, but there needed to be more to show that type of behaviour is never acceptable in any relationship and that there should never be a power imbalance.

While on the topic of men's behaviour towards women, Cole needed to be called out for his toxic behaviour. He may not have been violent like Jordan's ex, Jay, but Cole still treated Jordan like dirt. I don't recall him ever owning up or apologising to Jordan about his actions and behaviour; he ignored her for months and thought he had a right to be mad at her for moving on from that toxic relationship.

All that said, Birthday Girl was an enjoyable read, and the references to the song "Guys My Age" were a fun touch. Plus, Jordan's character development was good to read. She took back her power from all those men that treated her like dirt. It was good seeing Jordan taking control and proving to everyone that she is stronger and more capable than Pike and everyone else believes her to be.

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adventurous emotional funny inspiring medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? No

4.25

Although the age gap will remain taboo, I couldn't help rooting for them. I think this was expertly paced and beautifully written. I love how Douglas took the time to subtly build the tension. It's not erotica, it's a love story, albeit unconventional

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