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khaleesimod93's review
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
5.0
This was perfect! Finn drove me bananas throughout the story. I was so ready for him to get over himself and realize that he loves Phoebe! It took him so long. I love reading the back and forth between those two. It really was fireworks. The friendship that Phoebe had with Hannah and Alex was amazing. I love how Alex is not afraid to show his love for fashion. I'm just glad Finn finally accepted all of him instead of thinking the worst. I'm so worried about Bellas story but looking forward to it as well.
kirstennelson8's review
adventurous
lighthearted
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
emlickliter's review
4.0
So I enjoyed this Kindle Unlimited book, but I'm starting to see a rather annoying trend. Rather than bring criminals to justice, the people in this novel just sweep things under the rug to avoid scandal. Their wretched cousin who killed two girls got off scott-free. The person who pushed Phoebe down the stairs gets to hide in the country with the option to push other unsuspecting people down the stairs. I did really enjoy the rest of this novel though! Phoebe and Finn are a lot of fun! I love the Worrell family, and I am hoping that we are going to get more time with them! But I think the best part of this story is the business that Hannah, Phoebe, and Alex open. Women owning a business is pretty unusual, but you have to love the improbable cuteness of all those men supporting their female family members' dreams!
emilylouisef's review
3.0
I didn’t enjoy this one as much as the previous. Felt a bit rushed in comparison, there was quite a few spelling errors, grammatical errors and the like. Whilst it’s obviously not the end of the world it is quite off-putting and definitely distracted me from the story a couple of times.
I liked Phoebe and Finn together, a bit frustrating they didn’t get together till right until the end of the story, but I understand why. I get it.
Wendy Vella’s world and character building is still good, however, not as detailed as the previous/first book in the series.
I really, really did not like Finn at first. He was controlling, arrogant, an arsehole and frankly a bit of a dick. However, he slowly won me over as the story went on and I understand why he comes across that way. Could’ve been done without an immediate dislike of him, and could’ve been done a bit better.
I liked Phoebe and Finn together, a bit frustrating they didn’t get together till right until the end of the story, but I understand why. I get it.
Wendy Vella’s world and character building is still good, however, not as detailed as the previous/first book in the series.
I really, really did not like Finn at first. He was controlling, arrogant, an arsehole and frankly a bit of a dick. However, he slowly won me over as the story went on and I understand why he comes across that way. Could’ve been done without an immediate dislike of him, and could’ve been done a bit better.
mousegoddess's review
3.0
2.5 stars for a couple reasons. 1- you will never convince me that a woman who rode horses like that had an intact hymen. 2- the character wasn't abusive but the author kept putting textbook abuser lines in the male lead's mouth like they were romantic and I winced every time.
Oh! Also, it's FLOUT not FLAUNT
Oh! Also, it's FLOUT not FLAUNT
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