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rachelkays's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Graphic: Domestic abuse, Toxic relationship, Physical abuse, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Blood, Body shaming, Car accident, Vomit, Ableism, Death, Emotional abuse, and Sexual content
mypatronusisajedi's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.0
Graphic: Cursing
Moderate: Body shaming, Bullying, Child death, Domestic abuse, Alcohol, Alcoholism, Vomit, Toxic relationship, Sexual content, and Physical abuse
Minor: Car accident
kayladaila's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
1.75
Graphic: Sexual content
Moderate: Animal cruelty, Animal death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Physical abuse, Sexism, and Toxic relationship
Minor: Ableism, Alcoholism, Alcohol, Car accident, Vomit, Toxic friendship, Stalking, Medical content, Medical trauma, Injury/Injury detail, Infidelity, Grief, Gore, and Gaslighting
readwithde's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
1.75
These few positives count for next to nothing against the wave of messed up relationship drama that is supposed to showcase a real love and bond, strong enough to build a marriage and family. The majority of the book focuses on Sam and Layla's personal goals: Sam, to avenge his sister's injury and abuse by publicly outing her abuser, while Layla wants stability, through running her own business with the option to find a husband via arranged marriage (since she only chooses losers, a point repeated in the book).
They meet, they fight, they come up with a wager over the office they both have claim to: if Sam can help get Layla a husband, he can keep the office; if not, he leaves.
With 30% of the book left, Sam instead torpedos his growth
In under a week, we're lead to believe he's a different man with different priorities, that he's changed and will be a good man and husband, and somehow (off page) got the approval of her entire family? That all his years of trauma and vengeance can be healed and dismissed within a week
It takes until the end of the book for Layla to develop any backbone and personal growth, but NOW everyone trusts that she can choose a proper man? That she is "saving herself" by marrying Sam? Even when they have separated, she still plays games to make him jealous, and he still reacts with anger.
It's an emotional train wreck, their personalities flip and change on a whim, even the side characters change their minds based on whatever emotions fit that day.
Moderate: Alcohol, Bullying, Misogyny, Sexism, Sexual content, and Toxic relationship
Minor: Domestic abuse, Drug use, Emotional abuse, Gaslighting, Medical trauma, and Violence
gm_vak's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
1.0
Graphic: Ableism, Car accident, Domestic abuse, Drug use, Emotional abuse, Grief, Infidelity, Medical content, Sexism, Sexual content, Sexual harassment, Toxic friendship, Toxic relationship, and Vomit
allyhoo811's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
I read this book because I picked up the sequel through Book of the Month and, even though I know it isn't usually required in romance series, I like to read my books in publication order. Contemporary romance is rarely my thing, so fans of this genre should take my review with a grain of salt.
Basically this book is a slightly spicier version of a Hallmark movie. Tropey characters, contrived plot that brings the two love interests together -- it wasn't anything special or revolutionary. The overall story was entertaining in a cheesy sort of way, and I didn't hate reading it, but I did have some major issues with the characterization of the two leads:
1) The instanta-attraction/lust/whatever you want to call it was ridiculous. These two people were supposed to be irritated/annoyed/pissed-off with each other, but their internal dialogue in the first conversation was just cringe-worthy objectification of each other's bodies. That's fine at a bar, but these two people were in an office, it didn't make sense in that scenario.
2) These 2 people were supposed to be late-20's, early-30's age adults. The conflict they had over the office was like 2 middle schoolers fighting over a seat in class. In real life, this one have been a non-issue: Layla would have realized she didn't have a legal right to be in the office or Sam would have been compassionate because her father was in the hospital or they would have just agreed to share until her father was on the mend and things could be worked out. The whole thing made them both look petty and ridiculous.
3) Sam's possessiveness (right off the bat to boot) was not attractive...It was weird at best and controlling at worst. I don't care what happened to his sister, he doesn't need to try to beat up every guy that talks to a woman he just met. He harped on how the men on Layla's list were all creeps who leered at her backside and yet his entire inner-monologue was about how hot she was. Hypocritical-much?
(Edited to add) 2 Additional Problematic Elements (for me):
The continuous portrayal of Sam's job in corporate restructuring/downsizing as evil and a reflection of his character flaws. It's fine to show someone not loving their job and leaving for something more fulfilling to them personally. It's also fine to portray characters who have lost their job as angry at the people who made the decision. It's not okay to portray corporate restructuring and those who work in that industry as evil SOBs out to get everyone. If a company is going bankrupt, cuts have to be made or the whole ship goes under. In a similar vein, it's not cool to portray every person who works in HR as mustache twirling, sex-crazed villains, who get their kicks by making people cry.
I did think the author wrote well and the second half of the book was much better than the first. The interactions the 2 main characters had with their families really saved this one for me. I did find this one entertaining enough, especially with it being a debut, that I will be still be reading the second installment in the series.
Moderate: Alcohol, Body shaming, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Sexism, and Sexual content
Minor: Animal cruelty, Animal death, Car accident, Grief, Medical content, Medical trauma, Toxic relationship, and Vomit
irisheyz77's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
Moderate: Body shaming, Chronic illness, Misogyny, Sexism, and Sexual content
Minor: Toxic relationship, Domestic abuse, Medical content, and Medical trauma
plumpaperbacks's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
My favorite characters were Layla, Daisy, Nisha, and Max. John also ended up being a good guy. My least favorite characters were Sam and Royce. I won’t even get into how much of an awful person Royce was, or Sam’s tendency to threaten Layla’s other potential suitors. More on that in a minute.
I feel like Layla and Sam had no chemistry. They thought the other person was hot, and that’s about it. I kept reading in hopes that I’d end up invested in their relationship, but that unfortunately didn’t happen. I wasn’t really invested in any part of this book; I just kept reading because I was curious and didn’t have anything better to do.
Honestly, I think that some of the guys Layla went on blind dates with would’ve been better for her than Sam. Sunny seemed decent, as did one or two others whose names I can’t remember. Only a couple of them were actually bad. All the others, in my opinion, had one trait or hobby that was overly exaggerated, likely to try and make sure you know that Layla is *only* compatible with Sam. Can’t have anyone outshining the love interest. Gotta make them weirdos to make sure that doesn’t happen, because it would be too easy otherwise.
I thought about giving this two stars, but decided on two and a half because of the few characters I did like. I liked the scenes in the Patel family restaurant, and when Layla and Nisha went clothes shopping. Oh, and the adorable little doggo, Max. What a good boy.
The Marriage Game definitely wasn’t my cup of tea, but I didn’t hate it and I do think some people might enjoy it. I eventually plan to read another book from Desai, which will hopefully be more enjoyable and less frustrating than this one.
Representation
- Indian protagonist, love interest, and side characters
- Indian side character in a wheelchair
Graphic: Sexual content, Emotional abuse, Medical content, Misogyny, Sexism, and Toxic relationship
Moderate: Ableism, Alcoholism, Domestic abuse, Physical abuse, and Grief
Minor: Death, Car accident, Violence, and Body shaming
The abuse, alcoholism, toxic relationship, violence, and death are referring to incidents that occurred prior to the story and are mentioned on-page.madamepincers's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Violence, Toxic relationship, Misogyny, Medical content, Emotional abuse, Sexism, and Sexual content
Moderate: Ableism, Car accident, and Grief
Minor: Death
Male MC has a tendency towards physical violence and gets in physical altercations multiple times. Side character unable to walk after falling/being pushed down stairs.