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vj_thompson's review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
hopeful
lighthearted
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
1.0
This book was an emotional roller coaster that I did not need. I wasn’t a fan of Sam and Layla’s relationship. I thought it was very unhealthy. I also hated how every male character was written. Not every man constantly thinks about banging women…
Content Warnings
Graphic: Sexism, Cursing, Sexual content, Domestic abuse, and Misogyny
Moderate: Alcoholism, Gaslighting, Alcohol, Grief, Body shaming, Physical abuse, Emotional abuse, and Toxic relationship
Minor: Death, Vomit, Violence, Medical trauma, Injury/Injury detail, Medical content, and Car accident
harmonashleyn's review against another edition
Content Warnings
Moderate: Sexism, Misogyny, and Medical trauma
blackveilbeccy's review against another edition
emotional
funny
hopeful
inspiring
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
This started off slow but by the end I waa really invested. There was a great, diverse ensemble cast and I found the characters super loveable. Can’t wait to read the next one!
Content Warnings
Graphic: Domestic abuse, Medical content, Injury/Injury detail, Sexual content, Medical trauma, Alcoholism, and Toxic relationship
Moderate: Alcohol, Drug use, Gaslighting, Addiction, Violence, Emotional abuse, and Drug abuse
Minor: Panic attacks/disorders, Infidelity, Sexism, Abandonment, Death, Gun violence, Cursing, and Sexual harassment
valeria_gzz's review against another edition
emotional
funny
lighthearted
relaxing
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
3,75 Okay so I liked it and it was VERY FUNNY, and I loved all the Princess Bride talk and references, but there are buts to this. I didn’t like how overprotective Sam was of someone he literally just met, or how the book was full of sentences describing Layla’s butt or chest or literally any other part of her. When he was chill I liked it but I don’t really like the overprotective guy trope, it’s pretty creepy. I did like that Sam and Layla both actually had other things going on besides falling in love with each other AND I liked that this was sorta realistic with the timeline being 6 months.
And I wanted to add that I’m not Indian-American but this doesn’t seem completely accurate?? I can’t explain what specific parts but it just doesn’t feel ‘right’.
Long story short I did like this book but there were parts of it that made me roll my eyes, cringe a bit, and feel annoyed at Sam. And I liked the Dating Plan a lot more. I did like Layla she was cool.
And I wanted to add that I’m not Indian-American but this doesn’t seem completely accurate?? I can’t explain what specific parts but it just doesn’t feel ‘right’.
Long story short I did like this book but there were parts of it that made me roll my eyes, cringe a bit, and feel annoyed at Sam. And I liked the Dating Plan a lot more. I did like Layla she was cool.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Medical trauma
Moderate: Addiction, Alcoholism, Car accident, Death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, and Gaslighting
kayladaila's review against another edition
lighthearted
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
1.75
Content Warnings
Graphic: Sexual content
Moderate: Animal cruelty, Animal death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Physical abuse, Sexism, and Toxic relationship
Minor: Ableism, Alcoholism, Alcohol, Car accident, Vomit, Toxic friendship, Stalking, Medical content, Medical trauma, Injury/Injury detail, Infidelity, Grief, Gore, and Gaslighting
readwithde's review against another edition
emotional
funny
lighthearted
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
1.75
There are honestly very few positive things I have to say about The Marriage Game: it shown a spotlight on how death, tragedy, and abuse affect people, including years of bad decisions, failure to move forward, and crippling emotional ruin. It also had a clear through-line of relying on family/friends/a support system to get through tough times versus toughing it out alone.
These few positives count for next to nothing against the wave of messed up relationship drama that is supposed to showcase a real love and bond, strong enough to build a marriage and family. The majority of the book focuses on Sam and Layla's personal goals: Sam, to avenge his sister's injury and abuse by publicly outing her abuser, while Layla wants stability, through running her own business with the option to find a husband via arranged marriage (since she only chooses losers, a point repeated in the book).
They meet, they fight, they come up with a wager over the office they both have claim to: if Sam can help get Layla a husband, he can keep the office; if not, he leaves. At this point, there was so much potential for a solidly built romance, but the two continue to fight and bicker, judge each other, assume the worst repeatedly, and (in Sam's case) act possessively and violently towards every suitor; he literally gets into a massive bar fight with one of his friends over her, for no good reason. The couple jumps in and out of bed, based on the random fight of the day (or lack thereof) before Sam finally goes out on a limb and states he wants to be with Layla. This means they should start growing up, right?
With 30% of the book left, Sam instead torpedos his growth and chance to be with Layla so he can try to fire and out his sister's abuser (through a DIY strip club, complete with drugs, alcohol, and trashing their joint office). When Layla finds him there, he's alone in a room with a handsy stripper and fully disheveled, but two chapters later were supposed to believe he only wants to be with Layla? He never explains, never even pushes the woman off of him, but instead expects Layla to understand this is a necessary part of his job so he can enact his revenge. But two days later, he never wants any woman except Layla?
In under a week, we're lead to believe he's a different man with different priorities, that he's changed and will be a good man and husband, and somehow (off page) got the approval of her entire family? That all his years of trauma and vengeance can be healed and dismissed within a week because he lost her and missed her?
It takes until the end of the book for Layla to develop any backbone and personal growth, but NOW everyone trusts that she can choose a proper man? That she is "saving herself" by marrying Sam? Even when they have separated, she still plays games to make him jealous, and he still reacts with anger.
It's an emotional train wreck, their personalities flip and change on a whim, even the side characters change their minds based on whatever emotions fit that day. (Royce is a sociopathic jerk, until he randomly cares? Daisy hates Sam until he spends 2 days trying to undo the mess he made?) There is nothing real or meaningful, despite the characters repeating it. IMO, it's not worth the read.
These few positives count for next to nothing against the wave of messed up relationship drama that is supposed to showcase a real love and bond, strong enough to build a marriage and family. The majority of the book focuses on Sam and Layla's personal goals: Sam, to avenge his sister's injury and abuse by publicly outing her abuser, while Layla wants stability, through running her own business with the option to find a husband via arranged marriage (since she only chooses losers, a point repeated in the book).
They meet, they fight, they come up with a wager over the office they both have claim to: if Sam can help get Layla a husband, he can keep the office; if not, he leaves.
With 30% of the book left, Sam instead torpedos his growth
In under a week, we're lead to believe he's a different man with different priorities, that he's changed and will be a good man and husband, and somehow (off page) got the approval of her entire family? That all his years of trauma and vengeance can be healed and dismissed within a week
It takes until the end of the book for Layla to develop any backbone and personal growth, but NOW everyone trusts that she can choose a proper man? That she is "saving herself" by marrying Sam? Even when they have separated, she still plays games to make him jealous, and he still reacts with anger.
It's an emotional train wreck, their personalities flip and change on a whim, even the side characters change their minds based on whatever emotions fit that day.
Content Warnings
Moderate: Alcohol, Bullying, Misogyny, Sexism, Sexual content, and Toxic relationship
Minor: Domestic abuse, Drug use, Emotional abuse, Gaslighting, Medical trauma, and Violence
allyhoo811's review
funny
inspiring
lighthearted
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
Rating: 2.5 rounded down to a 2
I read this book because I picked up the sequel through Book of the Month and, even though I know it isn't usually required in romance series, I like to read my books in publication order. Contemporary romance is rarely my thing, so fans of this genre should take my review with a grain of salt.
Basically this book is a slightly spicier version of a Hallmark movie. Tropey characters, contrived plot that brings the two love interests together -- it wasn't anything special or revolutionary. The overall story was entertaining in a cheesy sort of way, and I didn't hate reading it, but I did have some major issues with the characterization of the two leads:
1) The instanta-attraction/lust/whatever you want to call it was ridiculous. These two people were supposed to be irritated/annoyed/pissed-off with each other, but their internal dialogue in the first conversation was just cringe-worthy objectification of each other's bodies. That's fine at a bar, but these two people were in an office, it didn't make sense in that scenario.
2) These 2 people were supposed to be late-20's, early-30's age adults. The conflict they had over the office was like 2 middle schoolers fighting over a seat in class. In real life, this one have been a non-issue: Layla would have realized she didn't have a legal right to be in the office or Sam would have been compassionate because her father was in the hospital or they would have just agreed to share until her father was on the mend and things could be worked out. The whole thing made them both look petty and ridiculous.
3) Sam's possessiveness (right off the bat to boot) was not attractive...It was weird at best and controlling at worst. I don't care what happened to his sister, he doesn't need to try to beat up every guy that talks to a woman he just met. He harped on how the men on Layla's list were all creeps who leered at her backside and yet his entire inner-monologue was about how hot she was. Hypocritical-much?
(Edited to add) 2 Additional Problematic Elements (for me):
The continuous portrayal of Sam's job in corporate restructuring/downsizing as evil and a reflection of his character flaws. It's fine to show someone not loving their job and leaving for something more fulfilling to them personally. It's also fine to portray characters who have lost their job as angry at the people who made the decision. It's not okay to portray corporate restructuring and those who work in that industry as evil SOBs out to get everyone. If a company is going bankrupt, cuts have to be made or the whole ship goes under. In a similar vein, it's not cool to portray every person who works in HR as mustache twirling, sex-crazed villains, who get their kicks by making people cry.
I did think the author wrote well and the second half of the book was much better than the first. The interactions the 2 main characters had with their families really saved this one for me. I did find this one entertaining enough, especially with it being a debut, that I will be still be reading the second installment in the series.
I read this book because I picked up the sequel through Book of the Month and, even though I know it isn't usually required in romance series, I like to read my books in publication order. Contemporary romance is rarely my thing, so fans of this genre should take my review with a grain of salt.
Basically this book is a slightly spicier version of a Hallmark movie. Tropey characters, contrived plot that brings the two love interests together -- it wasn't anything special or revolutionary. The overall story was entertaining in a cheesy sort of way, and I didn't hate reading it, but I did have some major issues with the characterization of the two leads:
1) The instanta-attraction/lust/whatever you want to call it was ridiculous. These two people were supposed to be irritated/annoyed/pissed-off with each other, but their internal dialogue in the first conversation was just cringe-worthy objectification of each other's bodies. That's fine at a bar, but these two people were in an office, it didn't make sense in that scenario.
2) These 2 people were supposed to be late-20's, early-30's age adults. The conflict they had over the office was like 2 middle schoolers fighting over a seat in class. In real life, this one have been a non-issue: Layla would have realized she didn't have a legal right to be in the office or Sam would have been compassionate because her father was in the hospital or they would have just agreed to share until her father was on the mend and things could be worked out. The whole thing made them both look petty and ridiculous.
3) Sam's possessiveness (right off the bat to boot) was not attractive...It was weird at best and controlling at worst. I don't care what happened to his sister, he doesn't need to try to beat up every guy that talks to a woman he just met. He harped on how the men on Layla's list were all creeps who leered at her backside and yet his entire inner-monologue was about how hot she was. Hypocritical-much?
(Edited to add) 2 Additional Problematic Elements (for me):
The continuous portrayal of Sam's job in corporate restructuring/downsizing as evil and a reflection of his character flaws. It's fine to show someone not loving their job and leaving for something more fulfilling to them personally. It's also fine to portray characters who have lost their job as angry at the people who made the decision. It's not okay to portray corporate restructuring and those who work in that industry as evil SOBs out to get everyone. If a company is going bankrupt, cuts have to be made or the whole ship goes under. In a similar vein, it's not cool to portray every person who works in HR as mustache twirling, sex-crazed villains, who get their kicks by making people cry.
I did think the author wrote well and the second half of the book was much better than the first. The interactions the 2 main characters had with their families really saved this one for me. I did find this one entertaining enough, especially with it being a debut, that I will be still be reading the second installment in the series.
Content Warnings
Moderate: Alcohol, Body shaming, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Sexism, and Sexual content
Minor: Animal cruelty, Animal death, Car accident, Grief, Medical content, Medical trauma, Toxic relationship, and Vomit
irisheyz77's review
emotional
funny
hopeful
lighthearted
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
Content Warnings
Moderate: Body shaming, Chronic illness, Misogyny, Sexism, and Sexual content
Minor: Toxic relationship, Domestic abuse, Medical content, and Medical trauma
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