3.68 AVERAGE

reflective slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

I experienced such a roller coast of emotions about this, at one moment I was cheering on Sybylla as she stood up against the men around her, and at other times I was rolling my eyes at her indecision and her constant back and forward and self-pity.

When I began I thought it was wonderful; Sybylla was headstrong, she didn’t want to marry, she seemed like a feminist, she yelled at men who dared to touch her without permission when they thought they had the right. She knew what she wanted and didn’t let anyone dictate who she was or what she thought. However, as the book went on, it started to waver. You’d have moments where there’d be a spark and Sybylla would be fiery and independent again and you expected that her grand moment had arrived where she’d do something, but then it disappeared as soon as it had arrived. She goes on A LOT about her looks. A casual mention is all we’d need but it is filled with her lamenting her ugliness and while she says she can pity herself, she hates it when other people pity her. No one probably does but going on about herself as much as she does it looks like she wants someone to pity her.

If it was written today I would be interested to see the response because reading it now she seems like such a complainer and it drags on with her indecision. She is the typical teenager trope, she is selfish and complains about having to do anything, and from the ages of 17 to 19 acts the same and thinks the world is out to get her and everything anyone does is to upset her life intentionally. She hasn’t got the sense to see what is right in front of her, she plays the ‘poor me’ card far too often for it to retain any sympathy in the reader, and the fact that she can’t see the best choice for her is infuriating. I’m surprised those around her don’t do more to stop her moaning. Of course it’s evident her parents aren’t the best, her mother can be unfair and harsh, but Sybylla doesn’t help herself either.

The lack of clear conclusion in the novel makes it worse, Franklin makes the reader put up with all of Sybylla’s moping and carrying on but there’s no clear indication whether anything ever happened at the end. Surely a strong ending could have made up for the middle part where you wanted to yell at the girl and tell her to stop being such a whiner. Because I listened to the book as an audio I wasn’t sure how much longer it had to go and when it ended I actually said out loud, ‘is that it?’. I sat through all of that and wasn’t even granted a clear conclusion and instead given an unsatisfactory ending that is beyond tragic and just terrible.

For a classic of Australian literature that is so idolised, I am trying to see what all the fuss is about, considering it didn’t seem to have much in it. Is the fact that she didn’t want to marry? Or that she was headstrong and independent? Is that what it’s revered for, because she is a unique character of her time that goes against the grain of what everyone thinks she should do? Because she doesn’t do it very well, and it’s all very well being independent and headstrong, but if you don’t do anything with that, what’s the point? And if you do that you end up having a pretty unsatisfactory life and I’m pretty sure that’s where Sybylla has ended up.

A longer version of this review was published on my blog http://wp.me/p3x8rS-1ot

So, a 16-year-old girl living in the bush writes a story about a 16-year-old girl and the trials and tribulations of living in the bush: shocker. The opening chapters could be summarised as “I have no time for romance, and this book is all about me, so strap in!”. Franklin captures the mind of a teenaged girl (Sybylla) perfectly, but that’s really no significant achievement, seeing as she was one at the time of writing.

The main highlights of My Brilliant Career are the language and Franklin’s turn of phrase, which often made me think of my grandmother (makes sense, given the shared time period and geography). On the whole, though, I found writing this review a little tricky, as I didn’t develop a strong feeling about the book one way or another. It’s okay. I probably won’t read it again, but I wouldn’t tell anyone else that they shouldn’t bother. Just avoid giving it to your 16-year-old daughter: she’ll hate you for it and go back to looking at memes on Tumblr.

If you want to know more, I've reviewed the book in full over at www.keepingupwiththepenguins.com ;)
adventurous emotional reflective medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This might well be the finest Australian novel I’ve ever read. Franklin’s talent (she wrote this at 16!) is utterly prodigious and, given the substance of this work, what an extraordinary woman she must have been.

If you’re an Australian book lover and you’ve never read this, you absolutely must.
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
adventurous lighthearted reflective slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

 Well. I thought that this was going to be promising at the start - a perfectly good, possibly even feminist, story of one girl's life told in an interesting way. I couldn't have been more wrong. The two main things I hated about this were Sybylla and the plot. I thought I liked her but then 50 pages in she started going on about being ugly and it just went downhill from there because she described herself as the ugliest person ever and then literally every man who she came into contact with fell wildly in love with her - she was honestly the original pick-me girl. She was also just... a bad person? I completely sympathised with some of her selfish impulses, but the way she treated Harry was awful and it seemed to be marketed as something that was okay because the main character was doing it and it was #disruptingthepatriarchy when actually their relationship made no sense, both of them weren't good for each other and they had zero chemistry. I hated the plot because it was non-existent. It only really started about 2/3 in and even then not much was going on. It was literary without being good and half the plot points didn't make much sense at all. Wouldn't recommend.

 
adventurous emotional informative reflective medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Sybylla Melvin nació en la década equivocada, en el siglo inadecuado. Inquieta, inteligente y con una actitud en la vida extraña para la época que le tocó vivir, Sybylla soñará con libros, música, conversaciones interesantes e incluso con la escritura. Pero es mujer en el ocaso del s. XIX y es un modo de ver la vida inaceptable para una mujer. Incluso se plantea aprender un oficio para ser independiente y no tener que depender de un marido.
Con Sybylla conoceremos la Australia de la época, sus parajes, su pobreza y también su riqueza. Un país de contrastes en el que podías tenerlo todo o no tener absolutamente nada. Ni siquiera sueños o anhelos.
Una novela sobre la identidad femenina, sobre la autosuficiencia, sobre el amor propio, disfrazada de novela romántica. Pero con un buen puñado de valores que a más de una le faltan aún hoy en día.

3.5 stars - JUSTICE FOR HAROLD BEECHEM!!! The ending did not satisfy me at all but the rest was fun to read. I am very upset about the events that unfolded with Harold and will probably be bitter about that for a while.