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meat_muffin's review against another edition
fast-paced
3.5
I want to be obsessed with this one, I really do, but once the MMC fucking sold her - even if he had a fucking plan!! To get her back!! - my good opinion plummeted and there was just no redemption in my eyes 🤷♀️
Content Warnings
Graphic: Pregnancy, Sexual content, Kidnapping, Xenophobia, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Physical abuse, Misogyny, Confinement, Murder, and Death
Moderate: Colonisation, Blood, Violence, Infidelity, Toxic relationship, War, Infertility, Sexism, and Abortion
Minor: Death of parent, Rape, and Self harm
mburnsides's review
This is genuinely so bad. A lot of times poor quality is expected from self published books but BY GOD this is shit. The smut isn’t good, and it’s definitely not even passable enough to make up for the infuriating characters and horrible plot.
Grimarr and Jule are so toxic; they’re both terrible people who manipulate and lie, and they’re both constantly flip-flopping on what they want. One moment Grimarr is telling Jule he wants to protect her and will whatever she wants, the next he’s threatening to kill her and coercing her into sex. Jule can’t decide if she wants to bone the guy or if she wants to get away from him.
Theres some serious overuse of the words naught, prick (dick), and seed. A distracting and unsexy amount of the use of prick and seed. It’s gross and annoying to read. The way Fenn writes smut makes it sound painful and aggressive, and Grimarr is “culturally” kinky, but doesn’t ask Jule for permission ever.
The plot is so nonexistent. The only reason this book is 400 pages is because there’s a bad smut scene every few chapters. Grimarr and Jule spend so much time arguing back and forth over the SAME DAMN THINGS. They never get anywhere. And there’s so much focus on Jule being unable to have children with her husband, but Grimarr believing she can, she just needs the right guy. I hate that trope so much.
I was looking forward to this series because I like orc/human stories, but this is just toxicity with fantasy racism. Grimarr is so unattractive it’s hurts. Hes not charming or kind or protective. He’s all toxic masculinity. And Jule is just a huge idiot.
Don’t waste your time or money on this garbage.
DNF ~30%
Grimarr and Jule are so toxic; they’re both terrible people who manipulate and lie, and they’re both constantly flip-flopping on what they want. One moment Grimarr is telling Jule he wants to protect her and will whatever she wants, the next he’s threatening to kill her and coercing her into sex. Jule can’t decide if she wants to bone the guy or if she wants to get away from him.
Theres some serious overuse of the words naught, prick (dick), and seed. A distracting and unsexy amount of the use of prick and seed. It’s gross and annoying to read. The way Fenn writes smut makes it sound painful and aggressive, and Grimarr is “culturally” kinky, but doesn’t ask Jule for permission ever.
The plot is so nonexistent. The only reason this book is 400 pages is because there’s a bad smut scene every few chapters. Grimarr and Jule spend so much time arguing back and forth over the SAME DAMN THINGS. They never get anywhere. And there’s so much focus on Jule being unable to have children with her husband, but Grimarr believing she can, she just needs the right guy. I hate that trope so much.
I was looking forward to this series because I like orc/human stories, but this is just toxicity with fantasy racism. Grimarr is so unattractive it’s hurts. Hes not charming or kind or protective. He’s all toxic masculinity. And Jule is just a huge idiot.
Don’t waste your time or money on this garbage.
DNF ~30%
Content Warnings
Graphic: Kidnapping, Infertility, Pregnancy, Toxic relationship, War, Confinement, Gaslighting, Rape, Sexual content, and Emotional abuse
doahdancer's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
Content Warnings
Graphic: Violence, Sexual assault, Blood, Death of parent, Infertility, Kidnapping, Murder, Pregnancy, Racism, Rape, Confinement, Injury/Injury detail, Sexual content, Death, and Physical abuse
goldensisyphus's review against another edition
adventurous
challenging
dark
emotional
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.0
This book is repeated miscommunication tropes and repeated bid-d*ck breeding smut. It was too repetitive for my taste and I was so bored. The MMC is a gaslighting, lying self-admitted rapist (and we are somehow supposed to excuse these previous rapes just because he admits they "weren't successful" and he's going to do better?!). The most interesting part was the mysteriously scrawny, unblemished, shy orcs within the mountain. That's pretty much the only part I'd want to know more about.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Infertility, Infidelity, Misogyny, Sexual violence, Toxic relationship, Gaslighting, Pregnancy, Rape, Kidnapping, Murder, Physical abuse, and Sexual assault
hariboreads's review against another edition
Didn’t like the way the mmc treated the fmc like a brood mare and justified making her saying ‘yes’ to happy fun times via magical coercion by saying he is so ugly and their species is dying. Just yuck
Content Warnings
Graphic: Sexual content and Rape
isitcake's review against another edition
dark
emotional
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Ok wow I was not expecting to like this book so much. Pretty good writing, good plot with intense emotional struggles for both characters. It was like Pride and Prejudice but with orcs.
Lady Jule is married to an abusive man, Lord Astin Norr. He leaves her in their undefended castle when its well-known orcs are pillaging around. Orcs attack and she sacrifices herself to protect her servants. She is taken to be the mate for Captain Grimarr, an orc who has quickly risen to lead all orcs.
We learn that human woman are unnaturally attracted to orcs in this universe; by their smell, huge orc dicks, and their sweet "honey tasting" buckets of semen. This was the grossest part of this book/series lol. The orcs drip semen when aroused nonstop and by the time they cum, the woman has GEYERS of cum coming out of her. So gross lol.
Jule finds herself attracted to Grimarr and craves him even as she tries to resist, and tries to think how she can plot revenge. However, Grimarr constantly publicly humiliates her and degrades her, treats her like a servant (forcing her to cook for hours nonstop) and then afterwards he threatens to take away her clothes permanently to humiliate her. This is her breaking point and she mentally disassociates from her body. There's a really sad scene where he takes her, and while she bodily gets pleasure from it she is mentally shutdown. This is the breaking point for Grimarr too. He wants a wife who loves him. And this is when he reveals she's 1 week pregnant. Jule realizes the power she has now over them and threatens to self-abort. Grimarr makes her a deal to give him 40 days to do a complete turnaround and treat her like a mate should be treated.
Again, this is erotica so the world building was unexpected. There are only like 1000 orcs left in the realm. I guess all orcs are male?? I guess they need human woman to reproduce. I also didn't fully understand the orc's physical appearances. They had a lot of different races. Some were almost like gray humans, these were the scholars. Some seemed to have shamanic power? Lots of miners. Oh yea they all live underneath this mountain in dark tunnels. That's a point of contention between Jule and Grimarr, she demands to see the sun, to go outside.
Finally we learn Grimarr's backstory. His dad used to lead the orcs but after Grimarr was born he got greedy and started stealing other orc's women. None of his sons survived. There was lots of violence that divided the orcs. Finally Grimarr murdered him for the greater good. Grimarr's goal is to have peace between orcs and men, that's the only way they'll survive. He sends letters to meet with the 3 nearby Lords to broker peace. They sign a treaty but part of the deal is that Lord Norr wants his wife back, Jule. Even though Jule and Grimarr are in love, even though she's obviously pregnant with his orc-son, even though he knows Norr will kill his son and abuse Jule, he agrees (again, the greater good).
Lord Norr immediately horsewhips her in front of ~50 men. But once they're in the carriage, he threatens to stab her in the stomach right there, she stands up to him and asks to let her do it herself and instead kills him. As she's about to be murdered for her cousin Otto to get her land now, Grimarr she's up with a band of orcs to rescue her. They also enforce the peace treaty.
The book ends with 2 human woman have also moved in (the next books in the series) and Jule gives birth to their son, Tenjil, who is prophesized to be an orc king.
We learn that human woman are unnaturally attracted to orcs in this universe; by their smell, huge orc dicks, and their sweet "honey tasting" buckets of semen. This was the grossest part of this book/series lol. The orcs drip semen when aroused nonstop and by the time they cum, the woman has GEYERS of cum coming out of her. So gross lol.
Jule finds herself attracted to Grimarr and craves him even as she tries to resist, and tries to think how she can plot revenge. However, Grimarr constantly publicly humiliates her and degrades her, treats her like a servant (forcing her to cook for hours nonstop) and then afterwards he threatens to take away her clothes permanently to humiliate her. This is her breaking point and she mentally disassociates from her body. There's a really sad scene where he takes her, and while she bodily gets pleasure from it she is mentally shutdown. This is the breaking point for Grimarr too. He wants a wife who loves him. And this is when he reveals she's 1 week pregnant. Jule realizes the power she has now over them and threatens to self-abort. Grimarr makes her a deal to give him 40 days to do a complete turnaround and treat her like a mate should be treated.
Again, this is erotica so the world building was unexpected. There are only like 1000 orcs left in the realm. I guess all orcs are male?? I guess they need human woman to reproduce. I also didn't fully understand the orc's physical appearances. They had a lot of different races. Some were almost like gray humans, these were the scholars. Some seemed to have shamanic power? Lots of miners. Oh yea they all live underneath this mountain in dark tunnels. That's a point of contention between Jule and Grimarr, she demands to see the sun, to go outside.
Finally we learn Grimarr's backstory. His dad used to lead the orcs but after Grimarr was born he got greedy and started stealing other orc's women. None of his sons survived. There was lots of violence that divided the orcs. Finally Grimarr murdered him for the greater good. Grimarr's goal is to have peace between orcs and men, that's the only way they'll survive. He sends letters to meet with the 3 nearby Lords to broker peace. They sign a treaty but part of the deal is that Lord Norr wants his wife back, Jule. Even though Jule and Grimarr are in love, even though she's obviously pregnant with his orc-son, even though he knows Norr will kill his son and abuse Jule, he agrees (again, the greater good).
Lord Norr immediately horsewhips her in front of ~50 men. But once they're in the carriage, he threatens to stab her in the stomach right there, she stands up to him and asks to let her do it herself and instead kills him. As she's about to be murdered for her cousin Otto to get her land now, Grimarr she's up with a band of orcs to rescue her. They also enforce the peace treaty.
The book ends with 2 human woman have also moved in (the next books in the series) and Jule gives birth to their son, Tenjil, who is prophesized to be an orc king.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Domestic abuse, Sexual assault, and Sexual content
Moderate: Kidnapping
Minor: Violence, Rape, War, Torture, and Murder
jburson's review
DNF'd this earlier this year then picked it back up because it kept showing up on so many monster romance lists. Annnnd DNF'd it again. Maybe if this were pure erotica it would work for me but it's too long and dragging to be trying to be anything but romance & I just couldn't get invested in round after round of humiliation and abuse of the MC with the assumption that at some point I'm supposed to root for her to fall in love with her abuser?? No thanks.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Rape, Emotional abuse, Physical abuse, Gaslighting, Torture, Sexual assault, Confinement, Sexual violence, Kidnapping, Sexual harassment, Pregnancy, Domestic abuse, Slavery, and Bullying
letboburnhamburnem's review
Book was sold to me as a love story but it was more like romanticized rape scenes with cut scenes of the woman being miserable. Just upsetting even if the smut was spicey
Content Warnings
Graphic: Rape and Kidnapping
qace90's review
Setting it aside cuz miscommunication is starting to feel more repetitive than furthering the relationship development so feeling bored. Planning/hoping to pick this up again.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Violence
Moderate: Rape, Infertility, and Pregnancy
dobromira's review
adventurous
dark
emotional
inspiring
tense
fast-paced
4.5
Content Warnings
Graphic: Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Physical abuse, Infertility, Pregnancy, Kidnapping, Toxic relationship, and Sexism
Moderate: Rape
Minor: Body shaming, Child abuse, and Sexual violence
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