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The Lady and the Orc by Finley Fenn

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shelfgremlin's review against another edition

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dark emotional sad medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.0

2 ★’s — this book gave me a lot of big feelings, and not always in a good way. 

the premise of this book is that jule, our lovely human mc, is left home unguarded and gets kidnapped by orcs when they attack her home. grimarr, our especially lovely orc mc, decides to take her as his mate in an act of political revenge and whisks her away to orc mountain. 

i know this was supposed to be an enemies-to-lovers story but it’s more of an enemies-to-abused-and-abuser story. i’m not at all averse to dark romance, kink, kidnapping, whatever. i’ve read and quite enjoyed books where one mc tortured the other and then they got to know each other and fell in love afterwards. i say this to mean that there’s very little that i think an mc can’t come back from, but abusing someone that you are in a relationship with or have already professed to love is one of those things.

grimarr had a bad habit of saying one thing and doing another. he would whisper sweet promises into her ear about being the best mate for her and how he’s so much better than her husband but then he would turn around and act heinously. he thought that because he didn’t physically hit her like her husband did that he was better, but then he’d say shit like this - 

“I will bind you and gag you,” his menacing voice said. “I will starve you. I will keep you from the sun for the rest of your days. I swear this, woman.”

they were constantly going around and around in circles. he’d say something horribly messed up, apologize or make an excuse, jule would forgive him (of course,) and then he’d do something again. his mistakes always stemmed from mistreating jule because she didn’t do what he wanted or lying/withholding important information from her. it happened again and again and again. and my issue with that is that he did these things AFTER he claimed to love her and care about her and that's where this crossed the line from dark romance to stockholm syndrome/toxic relationship for me.

and that isn’t even the worst of it. grimarr was far more concerned with maintaining his position of power over the orcs than he was about her happiness and wellbeing. he showed this to be true repeatedly, punishing her for speaking out against him in front of others, making a group punishment when she “dishonors” the orcs,
willingly trading her and her unborn son back to her husband in exchange for a peace treaty. all this despite jule confessing her love for him, showing her loyalty by NEGOTIATING THE TREATY ON HIS BEHALF, and willingly complying even knowing she would be going back to a man who would beat her for the rest of her life, kill her unborn child, and probably kill her too. yet grimarr said nothing and sent her and his son off to die when the men came for them.
 

some of this is explained away with “he had a plan” and apparently jule just didn’t know it, but putting her in a situation where she would feel that distress and didn’t know it wasn’t real is equally bad when he’s continuing to repeat the same mistakes over and over. even through to the end of the book he doesn’t learn.
he could have easily told her the full plan but instead he let her sit there for days crying and grieving the loss of her unborn child.


and that’s not to say that jule is perfect, not by any means. i can sympathize with her actions a lot more because i’m sure she was traumatized to all hell at this point, but she grated on my nerves. there were some elements i loved about her, but she was so inconsistent as a character. she was not particularly brave (which is fine) but she would have these moments that felt out-of-character, like
when she killed astin, her ex-husband. out of nowhere she suddenly got the bravery to kill him and escape her abuser, but she failed to recognize that grimarr was equally as abusive, just in a different way.
one minute she would hate grimarr and the next she’d be sucking him off under the table. it was incredibly frustrating trying to like her as a character when she acted so erratically.
and she was willing to sacrifice her son to save the orcs that turned their backs on her. she was just gonna go along with it. she made no sense.


their relationship was nothing but toxic from beginning to end and i don’t think it was intentional. i think i was meant to be hoping for a happily-ever-after at the end, but i was just hoping she’d escape to themyscira and never have to deal with men or orcs again. where’s wonder woman when you need her?

the writing was pretty good. i picked up a few words i was unfamiliar with and that’s always a welcome bonus. there was a good arc, though the ending was a bit too fast compared to the rest of the novel. some of the language, though, was very repetitive. i’ll be very happy to never hear anyone described as “hale” or “lusty” ever again.

if this book had been sold as a stockholm syndrome trope i probably would have liked it, but i went in expecting a true romance and didn’t get it. i’m not sure if i’m going to continue the series. i’m interested in some of the other orcs but i’m not sure i wanna read a repeat if it’s similar to this one.

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christyjoreads's review

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5.0

Hot damn.

One, that was the spiciest book I've ever read.

Two, the political machinations were insane and heartbreaking. Oh that betrayal was a kick in the heart, but I totally understand what was going on......oh boy!

I am not a fan of enemies to lovers, but this was more two people from two totally different cultures trying to figure it out.

Grimarr had been betrayed before so he didn't count on any support from Jule. Jule had been used by all her family members. Trust was almost impossible. This was SO FRICKIN GOOD.

Thank god for the HEA or I think I would have curled up in a ball and died from heartbreak!

This is the best book I have read in a long time!!!!


Finley Finn - you made me feel the feels with this one! I applaud you! Wow!

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isitcake's review against another edition

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dark emotional fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

Ok wow I was not expecting to like this book so much. Pretty good writing, good plot with intense emotional struggles for both characters. It was like Pride and Prejudice but with orcs.
Lady Jule is married to an abusive man, Lord Astin Norr. He leaves her in their undefended castle when its well-known orcs are pillaging around. Orcs attack and she sacrifices herself to protect her servants. She is taken to be the mate for Captain Grimarr, an orc who has quickly risen to lead all orcs.

We learn that human woman are unnaturally attracted to orcs in this universe; by their smell, huge orc dicks, and their sweet "honey tasting" buckets of semen. This was the grossest part of this book/series lol. The orcs drip semen when aroused nonstop and by the time they cum, the woman has GEYERS of cum coming out of her. So gross lol.

Jule finds herself attracted to Grimarr and craves him even as she tries to resist, and tries to think how she can plot revenge. However, Grimarr constantly publicly humiliates her and degrades her, treats her like a servant (forcing her to cook for hours nonstop) and then afterwards he threatens to take away her clothes permanently to humiliate her. This is her breaking point and she mentally disassociates from her body. There's a really sad scene where he takes her, and while she bodily gets pleasure from it she is mentally shutdown. This is the breaking point for Grimarr too. He wants a wife who loves him. And this is when he reveals she's 1 week pregnant. Jule realizes the power she has now over them and threatens to self-abort. Grimarr makes her a deal to give him 40 days to do a complete turnaround and treat her like a mate should be treated.

Again, this is erotica so the world building was unexpected. There are only like 1000 orcs left in the realm. I guess all orcs are male?? I guess they need human woman to reproduce. I also didn't fully understand the orc's physical appearances. They had a lot of different races. Some were almost like gray humans, these were the scholars. Some seemed to have shamanic power? Lots of miners. Oh yea they all live underneath this mountain in dark tunnels. That's a point of contention between Jule and Grimarr, she demands to see the sun, to go outside.

Finally we learn Grimarr's backstory. His dad used to lead the orcs but after Grimarr was born he got greedy and started stealing other orc's women. None of his sons survived. There was lots of violence that divided the orcs. Finally Grimarr murdered him for the greater good. Grimarr's goal is to have peace between orcs and men, that's the only way they'll survive. He sends letters to meet with the 3 nearby Lords to broker peace. They sign a treaty but part of the deal is that Lord Norr wants his wife back, Jule. Even though Jule and Grimarr are in love, even though she's obviously pregnant with his orc-son, even though he knows Norr will kill his son and abuse Jule, he agrees (again, the greater good).
Lord Norr immediately horsewhips her in front of ~50 men. But once they're in the carriage, he threatens to stab her in the stomach right there, she stands up to him and asks to let her do it herself and instead kills him. As she's about to be murdered for her cousin Otto to get her land now, Grimarr she's up with a band of orcs to rescue her. They also enforce the peace treaty.

The book ends with 2 human woman have also moved in (the next books in the series) and Jule gives birth to their son, Tenjil, who is prophesized to be an orc king.

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unusablebooklore's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional lighthearted medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Loveable characters? Yes

4.0

This was my first Orc book. I was heavily influenced via social media. I cannot be mad. This book lived up to all the hype. 

Kidnapping of a headstrong Lady MC, sexy mate magic, an unusual take on forced proximity; not to mention the spice. This book excelled in a lot of ways. I appreciated the level of emotion used to help the reader really commit to the cause of the Orc's, not too heavy but just enough to make me want to read the remainder of the series. 

My biggest issue was that the MC seemed utterly irrational the first half of the book. It made it difficult to really dig in and like her until the second half. However, her Orc Grimarr was truly excellent. 

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grilledcheesd's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.5

i'm gonna be honest i almost dnf'd this book about 30% in. i'm glad i finished it, but also i kinda wanna smack grimarr up the side of his damn head. but i'll probably continue the series

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ludetorrance's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional funny hopeful tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.75

Whatever you’re expecting from this book, i promise you, it’s not gonna be it. This left me speechless and I have never wanted to write a review so much.

Jule is a decent lady and is married to Lord Norr. She loves him very much and lives happy with him on his state. All of this is mostly true, but Lord Norr is not know kind and Jule suffers because of him. One day, with the threat of the horrible orcs looming, he makes the weong decision and leaves his state, and Jule, unprotected. She is taken by the Captain of the orcs and his terrible companions to Orc Mountain. And there, Jule realized that maybe, just maybe, the real monsters are men and that maybe, just maybe, the Captain of the orcs is not as horrible as she first thought.

⭐️- World building and background characters
⭐️- Plot
⭐️- Main Character
0.75- Love interest
⭐️- Tension

🌶🌶🌶 / 3 

Oh my fucking god, this book. I have never been so grateful for my rating system ever, because otherwise I wouldn’t know how to rate it. I loved it so much but what the fuck. The world building and the background characters: chef’s kiss. A simple, but solid plot that wasn’t predictable at all. A main character that was a) curvy, b) strong, and c) was relatable. This book should be the blueprint for monster-lover romances because Finley Fenn served it as it should. 

I couldn’t, with good conscience give Grimarr a whole star because he did stuff I didn’t like too much. But as a monster, he was perfect. exactly as a monster should be. He changed through the book and learnt from Jule and Jule from him, but he still remained monster-y. Their relationship is not perfect by far (you will see) but their tension: unmatched. And don’t even get me started on the spice, kinky and abundant and good.

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authorrubyduvall's review

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challenging dark emotional slow-paced

2.0

Every time the orc hero, Grimarr, had a chance NOT to betray/humiliate the human heroine, Jule, he always chose to betray her. Even after a very convincing grovel. I'd give it one star, but the writing is otherwise pretty good, although the narrative sometimes lost its medieval vibe with overly modern-sounding language.

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adventurous dark emotional sad tense fast-paced

5.0


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