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adventurous
funny
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
While reading The Children of Chaos, there was something scratching a nostalgic itch in my brain. It took me forver to place it, but I finally realized this book is reminsicent of one of my childhood favorites – the Pendragon series by DJ Machale. Just as Bobby Pendragon would leap from Territory to Territory trying to save the worlds from the villanous Great Dane, The Children of Chaos follows Kayl and Quen as they try to save Chime and the twelve other realms from Kayl’s unhinged twin sister. The Children of Chaos was like a nostalgia trip for me, indirectly returning me to one of my chilhood favorites series….just a whole lot hornier.
The Children of Chaos continued my infatuation with The Cruel Gods trilogy, a multi-POV gaslamp/steampunk mashup in a multiversal, morally grey world that never feels overly grim because of its loveable characters just trying to make sense of saving the world amidst the chaos strewn by unhinged gods, evil twins, interdimensional politics, queer angst, and the proper way of pronouncing the word “scone”. (Side note: as an American I wasn’t even aware there was more than one way to pronounce the word scone.)
There is so much going on in this world, and yet it all works. You will be shocked when the book ends because the pages just tick away until you are 700 pages in and wondering why the book was so “short”!
The Children of Chaos works not just because of Skies’ immense creativity (more on that in a bit), but because Skies has such a tight command of their three primary POV characters. Skies continues to use first-person POV for all of the POV characters, and it was much more successful here than it was in The Thirteenth Hour. In the first book, I was always thrown off whenever a new chapter would be begin and I had to figure out whose head we were in. Skies doesn’t follow any set “schedule” for when we switch POVs, adding to the challenge. However, in this sequel Skies has a much more powerful command of their characters and their voices. It was immediately clear if we were in the head of “headstrong to the point of reckless” Kayle or the more reserved and anxious Quen. And then, of course it was always clear when we were in the head of Jinx, Kayle’s “evil” twin sister whose POVs were some of my favorites because she was so wicked, sardonic, and self-centered. I was a bit concerned at first because a character like Jinx is best served in small doses, but Skies shows enough constraint to keep Jinx’s chapters fun (and suprisingly emotionally resonant at times) without them becoming grating. Jinx is my the best example of the “evil twin” archetype since Katherine from The Vampire Diaries!
Skies is also the master of making non-POV, secondary characters come alive. This is a BIG book with a huge cast of characters, and each of them had a clear sense of identity, voice, and perspective. I was never left wondering “who is that again” because each and every character just leaps from the page, whether it is the various gods (who are mostly all assholes except Mesmorpheus), their ambassadors, or any of the other wonderful people we meet along the way.
What makes all of the characters work is that they are all, in their own ways, dealing with the tension between structure (here represented by “time”) and chaos. In our Western understanding, time is a linear concept that cannot be escaped. It is constraining, whether it is how capitalism structures our time in the “9-5” workday, the cycle of the year, or the feeling that we are the inevitable escalator towards our death, something that will happen one way or the other and there is no jumping off. On the other hand, chaos is a powerful force. The entropy of the universe disrupts our simplistic notion of time and how the universe works. Chaos can be a metaphorical punch to the head, a unconquerable manifestation of ruined plans and unexpected consequences. But chaos can also be a force of good – a push outside of our comfort zones, an utter reorganization of society, and a source for creation. Both chaos and time are necesary for the workings of the universe, and it is this delicate balance that Skies weaves throughout the narrative.
The pacing for The Children of Chaos may not work for all readers because the book feels significantly more episodic than its predecessor. This has the consequence of slowing down the plot quite a bit, as Kayl and/or Quen visit most of the realms outside of Chime, but it has the added benefit of dramatically enriching the universe that Skies has created here. In The Thirteenth Hour we were introduced to a whole number of moral species, gods, and realms, but they all went like words on a page – ethnic or species-level differences for the sake of having them. The differences between the groups didn’t quite feel like they were “real” or important, outside of a few interactions. By having our main characters go to these different realms, Skies is able to expose readers to all of the ecological and cultural differences between the realms in all of their glory. From a predominantly underwater world to a world that seems like it is a massive crossover of the Universal monster movies, readers get to go on journeys to worlds beyond Chime. I can see how other reviewers weren’t feeling the whole “go to other realm, encounter major problem with their god, solve problem, rinse, and repeat”, but I was swept away by the adventure and exploration of it all. Despite this being a 700 page chonker of a book, I would have taken a whole lot more.
What’s interesting about The Children of Chaos, and what I have been noticing among more and more longer indie fantasy books, is that they seemed to be paced like television shows more than “traditional” books. I made similar comments about Krystle Matar’s Legacy of the Brightwash, and what I mean by this is that the books are structured like you would find a 10-13 episode season of television. Rather than a more traditional (in Western-style storytelling) three act structure, these books have an ebb and a flow that seems more like they are thinking about the book in terms of discrete episodes, each with their own bounded story structure that contributes to the overal narrative. This does mean that sometimes you get the prose version of a “bottle episode” or something that feels akin to a side-quest, but Skies’ books are so full of imagination, wonder, and magic that I didn’t care at all. I would go on a million side quests with Kayle and Quen if it meant I got to explore more of this gaslamp/steampunk world.
If I have any criticisms of The Children of Chaos, it might only be that sometimes the sexual humor got to be just a bit too much for me. I’m not a prude, and I loved that Skies created a queer-norm world that feels so effortless and sexually liberated. Having said that, it seemed like characters became sexual-quip machines at times, sometimes even robbing moments of their dramatic heft. I would say that it was like the a very toned-down version of what Marvels do with their non-sexual humor – it becomes a bit of a narrative crutch to pull out a quip. I was on board when Skies had characters considering and exploring their own sexual identities, but the sexual humor was a couple of jokes too many for my tastes. If you are someone who doesn’t like any sexual content or dirty jokes in your reading material you may want to stay away, but otherwise they are pretty easy to pass right over.
The sexual humor doesn’t mar a book that merges everything I love about fantasy in one not-so-small package. It’s imaginative, chaotic, romantic, magical, and more. The final book is coming soon, and I will be first in line!
Concluding Thoughts: Trudie Skies dramatically expands the world of The Cruel Gods series with The Children of Chaos, sending Quen and Kayle on adventures that have them encountering new realms, vengeful gods, and a just a bit of romance. The pacing of this book is much different than its predecessor, feeling a bit more episodic but never slow. The worldbuilding remains as immaculate as ever, and readers will either love or love-to-hate all of Skies’ characters, new and old. This is an exciting and action-packed sequel that examines the tension between structure and chaos in our lives – and how the predominance of one is stifling. Highly recommend for readers looking for queer-norm worlds, wild imagination, and steampunk and/or gaslamp worlds. Highly recommended!
The Children of Chaos continued my infatuation with The Cruel Gods trilogy, a multi-POV gaslamp/steampunk mashup in a multiversal, morally grey world that never feels overly grim because of its loveable characters just trying to make sense of saving the world amidst the chaos strewn by unhinged gods, evil twins, interdimensional politics, queer angst, and the proper way of pronouncing the word “scone”. (Side note: as an American I wasn’t even aware there was more than one way to pronounce the word scone.)
There is so much going on in this world, and yet it all works. You will be shocked when the book ends because the pages just tick away until you are 700 pages in and wondering why the book was so “short”!
The Children of Chaos works not just because of Skies’ immense creativity (more on that in a bit), but because Skies has such a tight command of their three primary POV characters. Skies continues to use first-person POV for all of the POV characters, and it was much more successful here than it was in The Thirteenth Hour. In the first book, I was always thrown off whenever a new chapter would be begin and I had to figure out whose head we were in. Skies doesn’t follow any set “schedule” for when we switch POVs, adding to the challenge. However, in this sequel Skies has a much more powerful command of their characters and their voices. It was immediately clear if we were in the head of “headstrong to the point of reckless” Kayle or the more reserved and anxious Quen. And then, of course it was always clear when we were in the head of Jinx, Kayle’s “evil” twin sister whose POVs were some of my favorites because she was so wicked, sardonic, and self-centered. I was a bit concerned at first because a character like Jinx is best served in small doses, but Skies shows enough constraint to keep Jinx’s chapters fun (and suprisingly emotionally resonant at times) without them becoming grating. Jinx is my the best example of the “evil twin” archetype since Katherine from The Vampire Diaries!
Skies is also the master of making non-POV, secondary characters come alive. This is a BIG book with a huge cast of characters, and each of them had a clear sense of identity, voice, and perspective. I was never left wondering “who is that again” because each and every character just leaps from the page, whether it is the various gods (who are mostly all assholes except Mesmorpheus), their ambassadors, or any of the other wonderful people we meet along the way.
What makes all of the characters work is that they are all, in their own ways, dealing with the tension between structure (here represented by “time”) and chaos. In our Western understanding, time is a linear concept that cannot be escaped. It is constraining, whether it is how capitalism structures our time in the “9-5” workday, the cycle of the year, or the feeling that we are the inevitable escalator towards our death, something that will happen one way or the other and there is no jumping off. On the other hand, chaos is a powerful force. The entropy of the universe disrupts our simplistic notion of time and how the universe works. Chaos can be a metaphorical punch to the head, a unconquerable manifestation of ruined plans and unexpected consequences. But chaos can also be a force of good – a push outside of our comfort zones, an utter reorganization of society, and a source for creation. Both chaos and time are necesary for the workings of the universe, and it is this delicate balance that Skies weaves throughout the narrative.
The pacing for The Children of Chaos may not work for all readers because the book feels significantly more episodic than its predecessor. This has the consequence of slowing down the plot quite a bit, as Kayl and/or Quen visit most of the realms outside of Chime, but it has the added benefit of dramatically enriching the universe that Skies has created here. In The Thirteenth Hour we were introduced to a whole number of moral species, gods, and realms, but they all went like words on a page – ethnic or species-level differences for the sake of having them. The differences between the groups didn’t quite feel like they were “real” or important, outside of a few interactions. By having our main characters go to these different realms, Skies is able to expose readers to all of the ecological and cultural differences between the realms in all of their glory. From a predominantly underwater world to a world that seems like it is a massive crossover of the Universal monster movies, readers get to go on journeys to worlds beyond Chime. I can see how other reviewers weren’t feeling the whole “go to other realm, encounter major problem with their god, solve problem, rinse, and repeat”, but I was swept away by the adventure and exploration of it all. Despite this being a 700 page chonker of a book, I would have taken a whole lot more.
What’s interesting about The Children of Chaos, and what I have been noticing among more and more longer indie fantasy books, is that they seemed to be paced like television shows more than “traditional” books. I made similar comments about Krystle Matar’s Legacy of the Brightwash, and what I mean by this is that the books are structured like you would find a 10-13 episode season of television. Rather than a more traditional (in Western-style storytelling) three act structure, these books have an ebb and a flow that seems more like they are thinking about the book in terms of discrete episodes, each with their own bounded story structure that contributes to the overal narrative. This does mean that sometimes you get the prose version of a “bottle episode” or something that feels akin to a side-quest, but Skies’ books are so full of imagination, wonder, and magic that I didn’t care at all. I would go on a million side quests with Kayle and Quen if it meant I got to explore more of this gaslamp/steampunk world.
If I have any criticisms of The Children of Chaos, it might only be that sometimes the sexual humor got to be just a bit too much for me. I’m not a prude, and I loved that Skies created a queer-norm world that feels so effortless and sexually liberated. Having said that, it seemed like characters became sexual-quip machines at times, sometimes even robbing moments of their dramatic heft. I would say that it was like the a very toned-down version of what Marvels do with their non-sexual humor – it becomes a bit of a narrative crutch to pull out a quip. I was on board when Skies had characters considering and exploring their own sexual identities, but the sexual humor was a couple of jokes too many for my tastes. If you are someone who doesn’t like any sexual content or dirty jokes in your reading material you may want to stay away, but otherwise they are pretty easy to pass right over.
The sexual humor doesn’t mar a book that merges everything I love about fantasy in one not-so-small package. It’s imaginative, chaotic, romantic, magical, and more. The final book is coming soon, and I will be first in line!
Concluding Thoughts: Trudie Skies dramatically expands the world of The Cruel Gods series with The Children of Chaos, sending Quen and Kayle on adventures that have them encountering new realms, vengeful gods, and a just a bit of romance. The pacing of this book is much different than its predecessor, feeling a bit more episodic but never slow. The worldbuilding remains as immaculate as ever, and readers will either love or love-to-hate all of Skies’ characters, new and old. This is an exciting and action-packed sequel that examines the tension between structure and chaos in our lives – and how the predominance of one is stifling. Highly recommend for readers looking for queer-norm worlds, wild imagination, and steampunk and/or gaslamp worlds. Highly recommended!
geethr75's review against another edition
5.0
I had finished this book in December, so I am very very late in reviewing it. Honestly, this book destroyed me in a good way. I loved everything about it, but my poor Kayl and Quen need to catch a break.
Dor is an a*hole and I want him unalive.
I don't want to spoil much. This one starts where Thirteenth Hour left off. Quen is back and is the Diviner ambassador now, and Kayl and the Godless are in hiding. Jinx is a PoV character in this book, and she's as chaotic as ever. Smart and ruthless, pragmatic about some things, but not others, she's a really interesting character.
I don't know what to feel about Penny yet, but I like her and Jinx's vibes together, lol. (May I ship them, pretty please?)
As always, this book is full of queer and neurodivergent rep which I love to see!
EVERYONE SHOULD READ THIS BOOK AND THIS SERIES.
That's all.
P.S. I wrote a fanfic, but don't read it till you've finished both the books!
Dor is an a*hole and I want him unalive.
I don't want to spoil much. This one starts where Thirteenth Hour left off. Quen is back and is the Diviner ambassador now, and Kayl and the Godless are in hiding. Jinx is a PoV character in this book, and she's as chaotic as ever. Smart and ruthless, pragmatic about some things, but not others, she's a really interesting character.
I don't know what to feel about Penny yet, but I like her and Jinx's vibes together, lol. (May I ship them, pretty please?)
As always, this book is full of queer and neurodivergent rep which I love to see!
EVERYONE SHOULD READ THIS BOOK AND THIS SERIES.
That's all.
P.S. I wrote a fanfic, but don't read it till you've finished both the books!
bani's review
adventurous
dark
funny
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.25
ellenareads's review
adventurous
dark
emotional
slow-paced
2.5
This book is just a complete step down compared to the first book.
I absolutely hate the Jinx character, and the fact that she got even more page time definitely didn't help my enjoyment. I was even procrastinating reading it at the start because I didn't want to read her chapters. And even Quan and Kayl didn't really get great development by the end of the book.
Plot had a really bad case of middle book syndrome. There was a lot of meandering. I felt like Quen's and Kayl's relationship suffered the most for it. The first book was focused so much more on those two. And even the plot point with her best friend at the end really rubbed me the wrong way. I just didn't find it believable. And most of the ending to be completely honest. I just think that the book completely broke my suspension of disbelief and the small fault I had with it kept pailing on and I just was able to take any of it seriously.
Also, I found the Gods communicating through the heads of the main characters less and less believable as the book when on. Throughout the whole book, I was questioning why a certain God was able to hear this thought but not some other one.
And at last, the writing. This is where most of my issues lie. It was just so juvenile at times while trying to deeply convey some very dark themes. All the swearing was so random, and the amount of time that Jinx said 'cunt' was just baffling. I don't remember that I minded swearing in the first book or if there was any, but the fact that I noticed in this one says something.
I really wish I liked it more. The first book in the series was a 5 star read for me. But this one was just such a disappointment that I don't know if I wanna continue with the series. I will probably wait to read some reviews for it before I decide.
I absolutely hate the Jinx character, and the fact that she got even more page time definitely didn't help my enjoyment. I was even procrastinating reading it at the start because I didn't want to read her chapters. And even Quan and Kayl didn't really get great development by the end of the book.
Plot had a really bad case of middle book syndrome. There was a lot of meandering. I felt like Quen's and Kayl's relationship suffered the most for it. The first book was focused so much more on those two. And even the plot point with her best friend at the end really rubbed me the wrong way. I just didn't find it believable. And most of the ending to be completely honest. I just think that the book completely broke my suspension of disbelief and the small fault I had with it kept pailing on and I just was able to take any of it seriously.
Also, I found the Gods communicating through the heads of the main characters less and less believable as the book when on. Throughout the whole book, I was questioning why a certain God was able to hear this thought but not some other one.
And at last, the writing. This is where most of my issues lie. It was just so juvenile at times while trying to deeply convey some very dark themes. All the swearing was so random, and the amount of time that Jinx said 'cunt' was just baffling. I don't remember that I minded swearing in the first book or if there was any, but the fact that I noticed in this one says something.
I really wish I liked it more. The first book in the series was a 5 star read for me. But this one was just such a disappointment that I don't know if I wanna continue with the series. I will probably wait to read some reviews for it before I decide.
bonriki's review
adventurous
challenging
dark
emotional
mysterious
sad
tense
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
bory's review
3.0
I wish I could say I liked this as much as The Thirteenth Hour, but I can't. Children of Chaos feel slow, and bloated, and like a series of episodes of a meandering TV show, instead of a coherent plot. Kayl and Queen go to a domain. Shenanigans ensue. Rinse and repeat for 600 hundred pages. Really, almost the entirety of this novel is set up for the grand finale in a classic middle book syndrome.
But worse, Quen's behaviour was frustrating for most of the story, and Jinx has transformed from an enjoyable sarcastic misanthrope, to an irredeemable madwoman.
IT really is the last 80 pages or so that save the story. The action and character beats hit all the right notes. The villains have been established as villainous, and I do find myself anticipating how they are going to get their comeuppance. The stakes are raised sufficiently high, and I do like this world and its characters enough to be invested in how the story is going to conclude.
Overall, a step down from The Thirteenth Hour, but I will be reading the next book when it comes out.
But worse, Quen's behaviour was frustrating for most of the story, and Jinx has transformed from an enjoyable sarcastic misanthrope, to an irredeemable madwoman.
IT really is the last 80 pages or so that save the story. The action and character beats hit all the right notes. The villains have been established as villainous, and I do find myself anticipating how they are going to get their comeuppance. The stakes are raised sufficiently high, and I do like this world and its characters enough to be invested in how the story is going to conclude.
Overall, a step down from The Thirteenth Hour, but I will be reading the next book when it comes out.
vinjii's review
adventurous
dark
funny
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.75
I was a beta-reader for this book, and I'm friends with the author. That, however, doesn't change or influence how much I love this series.
Besides, my gf bought The Children of Chaos on release day, and is now spamming me with live commentary while reading it. She's loving it.
This book does not suffer from middle-book syndrome and that is all you really need to know, so if you like steampunk/gaslamp and British things like biscuits and tea, go ahead, buy it now, and read this series because it's worth it. I swear.
The world-building. Seriously. The world-building...
Skies created twelve domains, ruled by twelve gods, and inhabited by twelve mortal races. And in this book we get to explore the domains.
I could just see Netflix pick this one up and set each episode in a different domain and I wouldn't care if they just strolled along a path for forty-five minutes because the domains are just THAT interesting.
Each domain is its own little world, worthy of its own stories. They are incredibly developed, original, and display Skies' endless imagination.
The Children of Chaos is a tad darker, definitely dirtier, and is filled with a lot more explicit language.
And that fits the development of the story.
Personally, I don't like Jinx (that's not to say she's not an excellent character), but Kayl and Quen continue to steal the show and my heart.
And then there is Ben, a Diviner that works for Quen, and of all the new characters Skies introduced in this sequel, Ben is my favourite. Why? Read it and find out. Just kidding. It's Ben's relationship with his god that made him so interesting.
The writing is incredibly...British. It's devilishly charming and witty. I adore Skies' prose.
I cannot wait for the next book and as I said further above, give this one a chance, especially now that the first book is a finalist in 2022's SPFBO competition.
You're not mispronouncing scone, are you?
Besides, my gf bought The Children of Chaos on release day, and is now spamming me with live commentary while reading it. She's loving it.
This book does not suffer from middle-book syndrome and that is all you really need to know, so if you like steampunk/gaslamp and British things like biscuits and tea, go ahead, buy it now, and read this series because it's worth it. I swear.
The world-building. Seriously. The world-building...
Skies created twelve domains, ruled by twelve gods, and inhabited by twelve mortal races. And in this book we get to explore the domains.
I could just see Netflix pick this one up and set each episode in a different domain and I wouldn't care if they just strolled along a path for forty-five minutes because the domains are just THAT interesting.
Each domain is its own little world, worthy of its own stories. They are incredibly developed, original, and display Skies' endless imagination.
The Children of Chaos is a tad darker, definitely dirtier, and is filled with a lot more explicit language.
And that fits the development of the story.
Personally, I don't like Jinx (that's not to say she's not an excellent character), but Kayl and Quen continue to steal the show and my heart.
And then there is Ben, a Diviner that works for Quen, and of all the new characters Skies introduced in this sequel, Ben is my favourite. Why? Read it and find out. Just kidding. It's Ben's relationship with his god that made him so interesting.
The writing is incredibly...British. It's devilishly charming and witty. I adore Skies' prose.
I cannot wait for the next book and as I said further above, give this one a chance, especially now that the first book is a finalist in 2022's SPFBO competition.
You're not mispronouncing scone, are you?
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