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daemonad's review
1.0
Miss Payes cannot write. When a book is published I at least expect a smooth ride. From words like "bombshell" to the cringe-worthy beginning when Payes has her heroine freeze before a coach just so the dashing hero can rescue her, this ride rattled from the very start, and got so bad I had to walk away.
You don't just poop out bunch of sticks and make them react to the whims of a childish plot. You don't tell the reader that your heroine is smart and decent then have her act like a stupid trollop.
A note to ALL writers: IT'S OK FOR A 16 YEAR OLD HEROINE TO BE STUPID. We have all been there.
You don't just poop out bunch of sticks and make them react to the whims of a childish plot. You don't tell the reader that your heroine is smart and decent then have her act like a stupid trollop.
A note to ALL writers: IT'S OK FOR A 16 YEAR OLD HEROINE TO BE STUPID. We have all been there.
yulannu's review
1.0
Miss Payes cannot write. When a book is published I at least expect a smooth ride. From words like "bombshell" to the cringe-worthy beginning when Payes has her heroine freeze before a coach just so the dashing hero can rescue her, this ride rattled from the very start, and got so bad I had to walk away.
You don't just poop out bunch of sticks and make them react to the whims of a childish plot. You don't tell the reader that your heroine is smart and decent then have her act like a stupid trollop.
A note to ALL writers: IT'S OK FOR A 16 YEAR OLD HEROINE TO BE STUPID. We have all been there.
You don't just poop out bunch of sticks and make them react to the whims of a childish plot. You don't tell the reader that your heroine is smart and decent then have her act like a stupid trollop.
A note to ALL writers: IT'S OK FOR A 16 YEAR OLD HEROINE TO BE STUPID. We have all been there.
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