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Utopia, LOL? by Rachel Kahn, Jamie Wahls

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3.0

This story didn't really connect for me. The POV character of "Kit" was a little too jumpy and kept breaking the narration for me to truly get immersed in this story. Some of the concepts of this were very cool, like the "U"s and the VRs/simulators and what not, but at the end of the day it was a story that didn't jive with me. The prose itself was pretty tight, if not a little unclear in places.
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