You need to sign in or sign up before continuing.
Scan barcode
carorath's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
mysterious
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Content Warnings
Graphic: Alcoholism and Self harm
phantasmaboo's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
2.5
A Broken Blade by Anonymous follows Keera, the King's Blade as she travels through the kingdom trying to hunt down a mysterious figure called "The Shadow". Throughout her journey, she forges new alliances, reevaluates her priorities, and ultimately has to decide who she is.
While ambitious, I didn't find it to be particularly well-written. There was also a general failure of world building. Overall, the writing meanders without clear point or purpose. The plot vacillates between being too fast and too slow with entire chapters being devoted to the minutiae of the characters' actions while other areas that should be more fleshed out are handled too quickly. Even at the end of the book, I didn't feel like I understood the world, its inhabitants, or the alliances. I almost wish that the ending of this book happened at the end of the first act of this book after a clear set up of the world. It would have been far more interesting.
I also thought there was a distinct lack of character building. For example, character's vices never truly affected the plot or their ability to complete their missions. I felt like the author was afraid to highlight or incapable of highlighting her characters' flaws and traumas and allowing them to affect the plot. To some degree, it felt like the flaws that were presented were simply there to offset the somewhat Mary-Sue-ness of the main protagonist. For example, Keera is portrayed as an assassin who turns to alcoholism after the death of her friend. However, with a quick potion, she is able to control it and it never affects her missions. This problem also disappears almost halfway through the book, as if alcoholism can be resolved in such a short period of time. The effect was that the cast felt very flat with little depth. The last 4-5 pages were more interesting than the preceding 75. Major plot points and reveals are never built up to. They just come out of nowhere or they reference proceedings from many chapters before.
As my final review, I gave this book 2.5 stars. I hope that the author continues to work on their writing, but I'm not sure I'm very interested in continuing to read the saga.
While ambitious, I didn't find it to be particularly well-written. There was also a general failure of world building. Overall, the writing meanders without clear point or purpose. The plot vacillates between being too fast and too slow with entire chapters being devoted to the minutiae of the characters' actions while other areas that should be more fleshed out are handled too quickly. Even at the end of the book, I didn't feel like I understood the world, its inhabitants, or the alliances. I almost wish that the ending of this book happened at the end of the first act of this book after a clear set up of the world. It would have been far more interesting.
I also thought there was a distinct lack of character building. For example, character's vices never truly affected the plot or their ability to complete their missions. I felt like the author was afraid to highlight or incapable of highlighting her characters' flaws and traumas and allowing them to affect the plot. To some degree, it felt like the flaws that were presented were simply there to offset the somewhat Mary-Sue-ness of the main protagonist. For example,
As my final review, I gave this book 2.5 stars. I hope that the author continues to work on their writing, but I'm not sure I'm very interested in continuing to read the saga.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Alcoholism, Self harm, Violence, Xenophobia, Grief, and Murder
queergoth_reads's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
This was a really wonderful book. I was glued to it as soon as I picked it up.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Alcoholism, Racism, Self harm, Violence, and Murder
Moderate: Suicidal thoughts and Alcohol
noellelovesbooks's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
mysterious
fast-paced
5.0
Content Warnings: Blood/gore, alcohol abuse/addiction, self-harm, suicidal ideations, depression, loss of a loved one, genocide, forced servitude/slavery, racism, and colonialism. Mention of assault, torture, and abuse.
6/3/2023
Did I stay up, when I have to work in 6 hours, to finish this book...even though I've already read it? Yes, yes I did. A fantastic book that was even better the second time around! I'm so excited I reread this so when I jump into book 2 [most likely tomorrow after work lol] I'm ready with all the info.
4/25/2022
If you’ve been on Booktok since at least last fall, you know that Melissa Blair had a chokehold on us, as everyone was desperate to read, and find out who wrote, this fantasy. From the moment the first video dropped we were all hooked on solving the mystery.
When the final reveal was announced Booktok was thrilled!
The way Melissa crafted Keera has me in awe. Keera is complex and feels broken, weighed down by the guilt of every innocent she’s been forced to kill. For years, as the King’s “Blade”, she’s been forced to hunt down countless Halflings, like herself, in order to appease the King’s quest to maintain power and control of the kingdom. A task she’s always hated but tries to use the little power she has to help, other halflings when she can.
Having had rebellious thoughts in her youth countless years of being forced to do the King’s bidding have led to Keera feeling hopeless and no longer holding regard for her own life. Every time she closes her eyes she sees visions of the countless people she’s murdered in the name of the King.
This book is so beautifully crafted I cannot wait to find out what happens next. I’m so excited to see that Melissa was given a 3 book contract with a publisher so she’ll be able to continue to craft this amazing story. I’m only sad because with the re-release of this book in August, through Union Square publishing, I’m not sure how long I’ll have to wait until we’re able to devour book two.
If you’re looking for a well-crafted Fantasy with a complex main character, of unknown origin, who will do whatever it takes to protect those under her care…I highly recommend picking this book up. This book was written, and dedicated, to Booktok and has so many tropes that we know and love along with a beautiful story that I can’t wait to delve deeper into!
6/3/2023
Did I stay up, when I have to work in 6 hours, to finish this book...even though I've already read it? Yes, yes I did. A fantastic book that was even better the second time around! I'm so excited I reread this so when I jump into book 2 [most likely tomorrow after work lol] I'm ready with all the info.
4/25/2022
If you’ve been on Booktok since at least last fall, you know that Melissa Blair had a chokehold on us, as everyone was desperate to read, and find out who wrote, this fantasy. From the moment the first video dropped we were all hooked on solving the mystery.
When the final reveal was announced Booktok was thrilled!
The way Melissa crafted Keera has me in awe. Keera is complex and feels broken, weighed down by the guilt of every innocent she’s been forced to kill. For years, as the King’s “Blade”, she’s been forced to hunt down countless Halflings, like herself, in order to appease the King’s quest to maintain power and control of the kingdom. A task she’s always hated but tries to use the little power she has to help, other halflings when she can.
Having had rebellious thoughts in her youth countless years of being forced to do the King’s bidding have led to Keera feeling hopeless and no longer holding regard for her own life. Every time she closes her eyes she sees visions of the countless people she’s murdered in the name of the King.
This book is so beautifully crafted I cannot wait to find out what happens next. I’m so excited to see that Melissa was given a 3 book contract with a publisher so she’ll be able to continue to craft this amazing story. I’m only sad because with the re-release of this book in August, through Union Square publishing, I’m not sure how long I’ll have to wait until we’re able to devour book two.
If you’re looking for a well-crafted Fantasy with a complex main character, of unknown origin, who will do whatever it takes to protect those under her care…I highly recommend picking this book up. This book was written, and dedicated, to Booktok and has so many tropes that we know and love along with a beautiful story that I can’t wait to delve deeper into!
Content Warnings
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Racism, Self harm, Suicidal thoughts, and Colonisation
Minor: Emotional abuse, Physical abuse, and Torture
maxinesf's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
Content Warnings
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Self harm, Murder, Colonisation, and Injury/Injury detail
betsy_spell's review against another edition
adventurous
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Content Warnings
Moderate: Addiction, Alcoholism, Self harm, and Suicidal thoughts
fthepatriarchy's review against another edition
adventurous
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
a good book but it’s very obviously written by a booktok author and is a very stereotypical fantasy. appreciated the bisexual mc and related to her a lot, her struggles w mental health were well written and relatable. will definitely be reading the sequel
Content Warnings
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Death, Self harm, and Sexual content
ali_k0's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
funny
inspiring
reflective
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
There were 2 (count em! 2!) instances in which there was only one bed. Need I say more? (Okay but seriously this is a beautiful book with an amazing plot that does a great job at integrating all your favorite tropes.)
Content Warnings
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Cursing, Death, Mental illness, Racism, Self harm, Sexual content, Slavery, Suicidal thoughts, Violence, Blood, Grief, Murder, Alcohol, and Colonisation
Moderate: Sexual harassment
soniajoy98's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
inspiring
mysterious
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
Content Warnings
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Body horror, Child abuse, Cursing, Death, Genocide, Gore, Hate crime, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Self harm, Sexual content, Slavery, Suicidal thoughts, Violence, Blood, Kidnapping, Grief, Murder, Fire/Fire injury, Alcohol, Sexual harassment, Colonisation, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Sexual assault and Sexual violence
cemeterygay's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
I adored this book and I think it as an absolutely refreshing take on colonialism in a genre that so heavily promotes and plays into colonial thinking.
Before I get into why I adored this book so deeply, I need to start with the critiques I have the book. This book needed I think just another round of editing there are some issues with repetition that could have been easily fixed with just one more round of edits. I do also wish there had been a tad bit more rep of darker skinned characters in the main cast but that's about it. This book also just needed more character descriptions in general. There was also an antisemitic description in the book that has been removed after speaking to a Jewish reviewer for future editions but is still important to point out.
I think this book does a phenomenal job of portraying the struggles of those who have been forcibly culturally disconnected under colonialism and how colonized people survive under these systems while trying to work to tear them down. I especially adore the lack of judgement given to characters like Keera who did what they needed to survive under colonial systems. I love how the author made a big point of that and very intentionally balances both the harm that has been done and why that harm was done in the first place.
While not a major aspect of the novel, I really enjoyed the romance between Riven and Keera and I really liked that there were genuine conversations about consent in this book that are missing in so many books similar to this. While we only get a quick look at some of these side characters I'm really looking forward to seeing them grown in future books and to learn more about them. I especially adored Nikolai and I am looking forward to seeing more of him.
I adore Keera as a main character and her struggles with colonialism resonated so deeply with me. I was happy to see her stick up for herself consistently and could understand were her choices were coming from. I look forward to seeing more of how she came to the point on colonialism that she was at the beginning of the novel. I think this book definitely focuses more on how Keera moves forward with the understanding the harms of colonialism than how Keera comes to understand the horrors of colonialism which is not necessarily for everyone.
I really like the world Melissa Blair built and I'm looking forward to see more of it but as it exists now we just haven't been able to see to much of it.
The villains in this story are incredibly well-done and instantly inspire the appropriate amount of hatred.
I really liked the way the realities of war and revolution are handled in this book and I enjoyed the plot and pacing as a whole. I also really like the humor in this book and love the interactions between character.
Spoiler for most of the book: I also appreciate the amount of casual queer rep and the rep of non-white characters. I especially appreciate that Keera was allowed to talk about her queerness without it either just being completely forgotten in favor of her relationship with a man. I just love that Keera is allowed to be both unapologetically queer and in a relationship with a man.
If you are looking for a book that tackles the colonialism inherent in SJM books and books similar like that while still featuring a highly skilled woman as a primary protagonist, this is the book for you.
Before I get into why I adored this book so deeply, I need to start with the critiques I have the book. This book needed I think just another round of editing there are some issues with repetition that could have been easily fixed with just one more round of edits. I do also wish there had been a tad bit more rep of darker skinned characters in the main cast but that's about it. This book also just needed more character descriptions in general. There was also an antisemitic description in the book that has been removed after speaking to a Jewish reviewer for future editions but is still important to point out.
I think this book does a phenomenal job of portraying the struggles of those who have been forcibly culturally disconnected under colonialism and how colonized people survive under these systems while trying to work to tear them down. I especially adore the lack of judgement given to characters like Keera who did what they needed to survive under colonial systems. I love how the author made a big point of that and very intentionally balances both the harm that has been done and why that harm was done in the first place.
While not a major aspect of the novel, I really enjoyed the romance
I adore Keera as a main character and her struggles with colonialism resonated so deeply with me. I was happy to see her stick up for herself consistently and could understand were her choices were coming from. I look forward to seeing more of how she came to the point on colonialism that she was at the beginning of the novel. I think this book definitely focuses more on how Keera moves forward with the understanding the harms of colonialism than how Keera comes to understand the horrors of colonialism which is not necessarily for everyone.
I really like the world Melissa Blair built and I'm looking forward to see more of it but as it exists now we just haven't been able to see to much of it.
The villains in this story are incredibly well-done and instantly inspire the appropriate amount of hatred.
I really liked the way the realities of war and revolution are handled in this book and I enjoyed the plot and pacing as a whole. I also really like the humor in this book and love the interactions between character.
Spoiler for most of the book:
If you are looking for a book that tackles the colonialism inherent in SJM books and books similar like that while still featuring a highly skilled woman as a primary protagonist, this is the book for you.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Alcoholism, Self harm, Violence, Murder, and Colonisation
Moderate: Mental illness and Suicidal thoughts
CW: Systemic violence, depression