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The Fortress at the End of Time by J.M. McDermott

joelevard's review against another edition

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4.0

What if a guy went to a remote space station on the outskirts of the galaxy and nothing happened?

xingev's review against another edition

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dark medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? N/A
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5

quiraang's review

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2.0

Dull. Stupid plot. Miserable characters. Expected more.

tfrohock's review

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4.0

This is dark military science fiction, and probably one of the most compelling stories that I've read in some time. It's the hallmark of an excellent story when I've read it in August and both the characters and the plot remain fresh in my mind months later.

The Fortress at the End of Time follows Captain Ronaldo Aldo's clone, who is stationed at the Citadel--a listening station at the edge of the human space. Humanity is connected by ansible and is spread across space in order to fight a mysterious enemy, but no one has seen or engaged with this enemy in many generations.

The Citadel is one of the worst postings a clone can receive--a desolate outback with a barely livable planet below. McDermott uses the bare surroundings to their best effect. He neatly switches the novella's atmosphere from the claustrophobia of working in the space station's confined quarters to the immensity of space without losing a beat. But it is the overwhelming futility of the crew's existence that dominates the story. Most of the crew members work within the system to better their own lives. They've accepted the status quo and see no reason to change it, except where it might profit them.

Aldo tries that route and finds himself unable to maneuver the space station's multiple intrigues. His only way out of the Citadel is to transcend his station and clone a piece of his soul somewhere new. Unable to work within the structure, Aldo makes a desperate plan for escape.

There is no happily ever after here, but that is okay, because the reader is expecting a tragedy. The highlight of this story is that the tragedy isn't necessarily the end, but perhaps the beginning of something new, something better for Aldo--at the very least it is acceptance. I found The Fortress at the End of Time to be an engaging and intellectually astute novella that leaves the reader to draw their own conclusions about whether Aldo's actions were right or wrong. And that is the kind of story that is worthy of discussion.

ruineleint's review

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1.0

A paper-thin, pointless, boring plot, an oddly religion and sin-obsessed story, boring characters, stilted unnatural dialogue, internal inconsistencies...this book is a litany of failures.

Also I don;t think the author knows how military ranks work

quirkycatsfatstacks's review against another edition

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4.0

The Fortress at the End of Time is a science fiction novel, without all the battles and intense moments. That makes it sound tedious, and to some it may be, but I found it to be a very enjoyable read. It's almost an introspective read on the psychological burden of living on the edge of space with no hope of going anywhere or upgrading your way of life.

Spoiler

I'll cover the warnings first: Suicide is talked about frequently in this novel. Many side characters commit suicide due to the desolation of their posting. While none of them are directly witnessed by the main character, a couple of them are described somewhat graphically.
Ronaldo Aldo is just a man from Earth wanting to do his job and fly spaceships, so it would see fortunate that these are one and the same. This desire results in him being cloned out onto an isolated superfluous post, the Citadel, where he will help them watch for the long gone enemy. You'll notice I mentioned he was cloned – candidates are picked on Earth for cloning, where their data/DNA/memories are then transported through ansible to their new location, leaving the original on Earth. I don't love clone stories, but we hardly ever hear from the original again, so that negates most of my complaints right there.
While on the Citadel Aldo finds himself immediately isolated and even despised. This is a survival technique for the crew apparently, as the suicide rate is as high as one in four. This slightly broke the immersion for a bit for me, as I couldn't understand why people thought isolation would help the suicide rate at all (I get that they were doing it to protect themselves as opposed to the newbie, but it was still a little upsetting and confusing for me to see). The best case scenario for any of the people on board is for them to retire (with a decent savings) to the local planet which is hosting a small colony. One can see why many become despondent with this situation.
The desperation leads Aldo to do something condemnable and slightly unbalanced, a fact he admits right off the bat, as the whole novel is sort of a retelling from his perspective. I have trouble not sympathizing with Aldo, even though I do not agree with some of his decisions. It was disorienting to see how many characters dislike him or found him arrogant, but then it occurred to me we were seeing everything from his eyes (or more accurately, from his words) so there's going to be some bias there. That being said – I enjoyed the steady and gradual build up to the reveal of what he did. Not only did it make the world feel more real, but it helped to show just how slowly time passes out there.
I was utterly enthralled with this read. I know I can be a bit of a snob when it comes to science fiction novels, so sometimes a good one for me is far and few between. Therefore I get insanely excited when I find one. It feels odd saying I got excited for a book with such a slow buildup, but it's true.
The details McDemott added in, such as the minimal resources and the political/religious system were really quite brilliant. It brought the world to life, and genuinely made you care about the conclusion. It makes you wonder how much of Aldo's plan was actually thought out. Clearly he didn't think about the events following his actions.
I haven't read anything by McDermott before this, his Goodreads profile doesn't list any other novels, but I can safely say I intend to follow his work from now on. I think he's an author worth watching.



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alexanderpaez's review

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2.0

Primera decepción del año. Flojísimo, con buenas ideas, pero muy flojo, sobre todo en contenido y ritmo.

calypte's review against another edition

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3.0

Have to agree with other reviewers, that very little actually happens in this book. On the other hand, I suspect that life at the end of the universe is likely to be highly unglamorous, and it's interesting to see a book that tackles that, plus raises the question of what it's like to be a clone, or spend your life training for your clone's life.

Full review, as ever, on my blog.

al_knave's review

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2.0

Unfortunately, the boredom of being stuck in a space station off in the proverbial boonies was all too accurately conveyed.

tome15's review

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3.0

A novel whose smooth style does not make up for its pretention. It would have made a good short story.