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DID NOT FINISH: 46%

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Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

This wasn't bad and I will read book 2, but many of the things that happened made me uncomfortable. If I had known they would happen, I wouldn't have started it. 
I changed my mind and did not read book 2. She is an 18 year old but supposed to be almost as good as someone with 50 years experience in sword fighting, when she only gets to practice in secret. She is also annoying and whiney. I got 8% into book 2 before realizing the only reason I finished #1 was it was an audiobook so someone else did the heavy lifting. Disappointing and not great writing. 

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Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

The book started slow but it just got better as I read. The FMC has flaws but she's also strong, feisty and intelligent. The MMC is morally grey. There's some touch her and die, if you know what I mean. There are a few betrayals, good banters... The world is setted and I can't wait to read more.

For those with triggers, check them before you start. Otherwise, enjoy! 

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Diverse cast of characters: Yes
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Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

I became intrigued in the last chapter, up until then I wasn’t going to read the next book, so the author did a good job there. The book moved too slow, it felt like things were happening but also weren’t idk how to explain it. 

I also don’t find the main character to be very strong vs the male. She immediately slept with him and is even still angry about her assuming he faked his feelings and he gets off easy.

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Kind of a slow start with lots of world building that didn't make a lot of sense to have right at the beginning. The slow burn was enticing and the multiple twists at the end were entertaining.
The betrayal sequence was very similar to a scene I thought up in my head years ago and it was done better than I ever could have.

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Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

From Blood and Ash had so much promise: a fierce girl with a blade, a seductive, brooding immortal prince, and a dark fantasy world full of political intrigue and secrets. But what could have been a gripping, steamy epic instead got bogged down in repetitive inner monologues, a glacially paced first half, and a romance that asked me to suspend disbelief just a bit too much.

I’ll give Jennifer L. Armentrout this: the lore is dense and detailed. Vampiric castes, culty kingdoms, and magical bloodlines. I actually enjoyed unraveling the hierarchy of Atlantians, Ascended, Craven, and Wolven. The problem? It takes over 300 pages for the story to do anything with all that setup. I could’ve skipped straight to page 313 and missed nothing of importance except Poppy’s self-indulgent thoughts and a dozen lectures disguised as dialogue.

Poppy, our “Maiden,” was raised in isolation by a religious cult and spends the majority of the book
ping-ponging between being a sheltered, naive narrator and a total badass with a dagger.
The latter was great. The former? Painfully frustrating. I understood her confusion and repression, but wow, the girl’s curiosity rarely translated into actual intelligence. Still, I appreciated the subtle realism in how abuse, gaslighting, and captivity have shaped her. She’s learning, even if slowly.

Now let’s talk Hawke.
Or Casteel. Or “The Dark One.” Or Mr. Sex Scene Monologue. He’s a 200+ year old prince-turned-rogue who somehow falls for this cult-brainwashed teenager because she holds his hand a couple of times and says sassy things. Their chemistry was hot, I’ll admit. The sex scenes were the best part of the book; detailed, consensual, and actually sexy. Casteel talks her through pleasure, praises her fighting spirit, and treats her like an equal (once you ignore the kidnapping and marriage plans, minor details, right?). But the insta-love was a big eye-roll, especially considering his age, experience, and mission.

There were some solid twists, but I called most of them chapters before they happened.
Hawke being an Atlantian? Obvious. The Ascended lying about the gods? Called it. Poppy being half-Atlantian? I mean… come on.
If this had been a tighter, better-paced 250-page book, it could’ve really landed. But slogging through Poppy’s repetitive veil-wearing monologues and everyone avoiding direct answers wore me out.

I won’t be continuing the series,
though I’ll miss Hawke whispering filth in the snow and praising Poppy’s stabby side. A man who admires your violence and talks you through an orgasm? Unmatched.
But not enough to save the book for me.

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