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fmcfranny's review
3.0
I enjoyed this book, a lot in fact. I liked the bits of backstory showing us Colby and Remy's history and how it pertained to the present. I liked Cassius who was the most unusual alpha I have ever read about. The doctors and Alpha Jorge. The character line up was wonderful and the story a sweet second chance at love with intrigue and overcoming hardship and obstacles.
However, there were a few inconsistencies that made me twitch a bit and took away from the story. At first, they say Remy is 19, he hasn't been to the pack lands in 5 years, he was 14 when his mom dragged him away and he never saw Colby again before where this book picked up. Then later they talk about Remy punching an alpha from his old pack and getting arrested. His current packmate (a beta named Xavier) does not know about it but Colby does. If Remy hadn't been into the pack-lands or seen the packmates of his previous pack since 14 how did he punch one and get arrested at 16? How did he and Colby first kiss at 16 when it previously said 14? It just made the timeline...glitchy for want of a better word.
The book was good but the odd time jumps kept popping in and making things confusing. It also could have used an editor as sometimes the wrong word was used or extra letters were placed in a word as if the author tried to write two words and melded them together or hit an extra letter when typing and it was never edited out.
All in all good story and great characters but a few too many mistakes.
However, there were a few inconsistencies that made me twitch a bit and took away from the story. At first, they say Remy is 19, he hasn't been to the pack lands in 5 years, he was 14 when his mom dragged him away and he never saw Colby again before where this book picked up. Then later they talk about Remy punching an alpha from his old pack and getting arrested. His current packmate (a beta named Xavier) does not know about it but Colby does. If Remy hadn't been into the pack-lands or seen the packmates of his previous pack since 14 how did he punch one and get arrested at 16? How did he and Colby first kiss at 16 when it previously said 14? It just made the timeline...glitchy for want of a better word.
The book was good but the odd time jumps kept popping in and making things confusing. It also could have used an editor as sometimes the wrong word was used or extra letters were placed in a word as if the author tried to write two words and melded them together or hit an extra letter when typing and it was never edited out.
All in all good story and great characters but a few too many mistakes.
knrt_17's review
5.0
I’ve read this author before. This is set in the mpreg world of wolf shifters. The main characters are Alpha Colby and Omega Remy. Loved the world building. Can’t wait to read more from this author and series.
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