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meghan_is_reading's review against another edition
I didn't like this, if only because it dwells on thoughts I think when I'm in a shitty mental place and I much prefer not to dwell.
glitterandtwang's review
2.0
i'm not sure what other people saw in this. there were two or three interesting images and turns of phrase, but it otherwise read a lot like some relatively well-written livejournal entries. a line break and lack of punctuation do not in themselves make a poem.
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