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ellelainey's review against another edition
5.0
I absolutely LOVED everything about this story. But, I do have to admit that Scott, Paul and Brian tugged at my heartstrings.
The story is amazing. I loved every one and every thing about it. I was like the start of Brian and Scott's relationship when I read this: giggly, fidgety, gasping, oohing and aahing, hand clamped over my mouth at 2am to keep myself quiet.
The story is amazing. I loved every one and every thing about it. I was like the start of Brian and Scott's relationship when I read this: giggly, fidgety, gasping, oohing and aahing, hand clamped over my mouth at 2am to keep myself quiet.
colleen_m's review against another edition
Way too many grammatical errors, over the top cheesy, no development... just not for me.
michaeljpdx's review against another edition
3.0
Although a light read, this story is not as frivolous as it may seem, with some unexpected depth. For a full review of Golidlocks and His Three Bears, see my web site.
tiggers_hate_acorns's review against another edition
3.0
A quick read that improved as the story went on. Initially I thought it was going to be PWP but then we actually got a pretty good tale. There is a sequel but not sure if I will read it.
3 stars
3 stars
sans's review against another edition
3.0
Thanks to a very kind friend, Christmas came early for me and I recently found myself in possession of a crapton of m/m ebooks. Yea, the angels did sing a chorus of hallelujahs and I squeed like a rabid fangirl. This was the first story I read out of the plethora of reads. Please keep in mind that while I love me some m/m action, I've got girl cooties and this review is from the viewpoint of someone with a kitty.
This was a fun little story about a cute little twink named Brian who has a fascination for, you guessed it, bears. Brian meets Paul, his ideal leather Daddy, at the local bar/club and they fall into a relationship of sorts. Until Daddy leaves on a business trip for his chopper business that will keep him on the road for several months. Then the withdrawals from fantastic sex kick in (don't you hate it when that happens?). Brian is wandering, lonely as a cloud, when he meets Momma Bear.
Yes, Jim is called Momma Bear. A very large, very hairy bear with a gentle, caring way about him and a cock that's as wide as a soda can. *blinks* I'm not sure I want to go there. Anyway. They hook up in Jim's van a few times and then Momma Bear finally takes our twink back to his place. And guess what? It's the same house Daddy lives in. Yep, these bears are roomies. Niiiiice. Things are going swimmingly when suddenly, Momma takes off for parts unknown, asking Brian to water his pot garden while he's away.
And that's when we meet the third bear, Scott. I don't think he had a nickname, so I'm gonna call him Sweetie. He's a shorter bisexual Southern gent with an oral fixation who loves to bottom. It was nice to mix things up a bit for Brian. And guess what? Sweetie is the third roomie in Daddy and Momma's house! Daddy and Momma finally come home, catch Brian in bed with Sweetie and things progress from there. Yummy.
Back story sorted. While this could easily be the plot of a cheap porn, there was, in fact, a lovely story and character development. Not so much with our main character though. That's not to say Brian and Paul are just your stereotypical twink and daddy couple. They have their conflicts and growth (other than that kind) and end up being better with each other than they were alone. But Jim and Scott kinda stole the story half way through. The past issues Jim has and Scott's loneliness and concern (even fright) about the direction Paul and Brian's relationship takes move this from a simple work of erotic fiction to a nice little bit of erotic romance.
Why only 3 stars? While some of the play sounded fun, I'm just not one for bears (though some hair is always a good thing) or a daddy complex. When I say "Daddy" I think about the man my mother married. And there's no faster way to kill a sexual buzz than to think about your own parents. *shudders*
This was a fast, fun read and I'll be picking up more books by Riley.
This was a fun little story about a cute little twink named Brian who has a fascination for, you guessed it, bears. Brian meets Paul, his ideal leather Daddy, at the local bar/club and they fall into a relationship of sorts. Until Daddy leaves on a business trip for his chopper business that will keep him on the road for several months. Then the withdrawals from fantastic sex kick in (don't you hate it when that happens?). Brian is wandering, lonely as a cloud, when he meets Momma Bear.
Yes, Jim is called Momma Bear. A very large, very hairy bear with a gentle, caring way about him and a cock that's as wide as a soda can. *blinks* I'm not sure I want to go there. Anyway. They hook up in Jim's van a few times and then Momma Bear finally takes our twink back to his place. And guess what? It's the same house Daddy lives in. Yep, these bears are roomies. Niiiiice. Things are going swimmingly when suddenly, Momma takes off for parts unknown, asking Brian to water his pot garden while he's away.
And that's when we meet the third bear, Scott. I don't think he had a nickname, so I'm gonna call him Sweetie. He's a shorter bisexual Southern gent with an oral fixation who loves to bottom. It was nice to mix things up a bit for Brian. And guess what? Sweetie is the third roomie in Daddy and Momma's house! Daddy and Momma finally come home, catch Brian in bed with Sweetie and things progress from there. Yummy.
Back story sorted. While this could easily be the plot of a cheap porn, there was, in fact, a lovely story and character development. Not so much with our main character though. That's not to say Brian and Paul are just your stereotypical twink and daddy couple. They have their conflicts and growth (other than that kind) and end up being better with each other than they were alone. But Jim and Scott kinda stole the story half way through. The past issues Jim has and Scott's loneliness and concern (even fright) about the direction Paul and Brian's relationship takes move this from a simple work of erotic fiction to a nice little bit of erotic romance.
Why only 3 stars? While some of the play sounded fun, I'm just not one for bears (though some hair is always a good thing) or a daddy complex. When I say "Daddy" I think about the man my mother married. And there's no faster way to kill a sexual buzz than to think about your own parents. *shudders*
This was a fast, fun read and I'll be picking up more books by Riley.
lauraadriana78's review
4.0
Brian and was adorable and OH SO slutty! Cute and hot and LOTS OF BEARS!!
pauliree's review
3.0
OK but a bit annoying. I lot of the misunderstandings could have been sorted with a conversation, and I found the sub a little too sub. Meh, it was ok
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