Reviews

Unwrapped by Chantilly White

prationality's review against another edition

3.0

This wasn't a bad story, but I almost would have preferred if it wasn't a romance persay. White skimps on Mia and Derrick's relationship by having them tell us how much time has passed. Very little of the 'dating' the two commence with is shown. Instead we're told of the numerous things Derrick did to make Mia feel cherished. White focuses instead on the sexual frustration (unintentionally) reinforcing Derrick's belief that Mia only cares about the end result of sex.