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Crawl by Edward Lorn

waynewaynus's review against another edition

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3.0

An interesting story that grabs you from the start but i felt the ending leaves the reader a little flat.

avoraciousreader68's review against another edition

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4.0

*Book source ~ Many thanks to the author for providing a review copy in exchange for an honest review.

Colton is driving Juliet to her mom’s house, so she can have some space away from her cheating idiot of a husband and decide whether their years together make it worth staying with him or if she should just cut-n-run. Apparently Colton felt Juliet wasn’t ‘”there for him”, so he decided to do the dog sitter, most likely doggy style, because she was available. However, before they get to their destination they’re in a terrible car crash and Juliet’s world abruptly changes.

Ok, I have to take a deep breath here and remain calm because this book freaked me the fuck out. I’m just riding along loving Juliet’s inner monologue and narrowing my eyes at Colton and then there’s the Mercury with the screwed up plate and bumper sticker. Woah. Dafuq kind of weirdo is driving that thing? Uneasy feeling number 1 intrudes in my enjoyment of Juliet’s thoughts. Rest stop makes me all jumpy, the uneasy feelings multiply like compound interest and now I’m wishing they’d hurry up and get to Juliet’s mom’s place. Foggy night, lonely highway? Umm…can we turn around, go home and work things out? Guys? Hello? Oh, shit…the car crashes and afterwards Juliet passes out. Then wakes up. Wait. Sweet Baby Jane. I cannot relive those moments after she wakes up. The stomach in knots, the tense shoulders, the biting of the fingernails, the crawling skin, the cringing, no, no, no. I’m not going back there and you can’t make me. I’m still checking my feet, just to make sure and that’s bad enough.

The only reason this story didn’t get a 5 from me is the ending. I didn’t understand it. I am in no way blaming the author. I *feel* as if I should get it, that I’m the only one not getting it and it’s frustrating me. It’s Chemistry class all over again. I fully believe I will wake up from a sound sleep in the not-so-distant future and say, “Holy fucking shit! I get it!” Before I curl into a ball and sob.

caidyn's review against another edition

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4.0

Okay, so this was a book that I've had on my radar forever. Way before I started following E. more. The description interested me and I finally bought it for myself when he was doing a sale. The story follows a married couple on a car ride. She's going to stay somewhere else because her husband cheated on her and he's driving her there. Awkward ride. Then, they run into someone and shit hits the fan.

I really enjoyed the paranormal angle to it, but I was left wanting more. I wanted a longer story! I wanted to read more about the relationship, about the weird people and things going on. That's always the thing I hate about short stories. Most of the time, I'm left wanting more. It was a great story, don't get me wrong. I'm so glad that I've finally read it. But, I wanted more.
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