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tashiea's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.0
Rating: 3/5 Stars
When I say there's so much wrong with it, I'm not talking about the actual subject matter (which is super dark and fucking creepy as hell), I'm talking about the PLOT HOLES.
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Unfortunately for those who haven't read it, much of this book is gonna be discussed in spoilers because this book is very plot based and obviously if I point out issues, it's gonna be spoilery. So let's get her going...
I think the writing exercise is also unlikely to ever be real (like who the fuck would every suggest writing shit like that? That's not something a normal person could write and be okay with. I think if it was just fantasy stories, it'd be fine, but once you start basing it on your family and your life, that crosses the line.
Also, why the fuck was this manuscript just laying out? Obviously Verity did not try hiding it very well, I'm surprised Jeremy didn't stumble on it while she was writing it, it probably was just chilling on the desk the entire time. It just felt sooooo off.
Also you can't convince me that the kid was smart enough to not say something to the Dad. He would have let it slip. Still don't understand the knife scene and what that was supposed to mean. Doesn't she actually like the son? Maybe it's been too long and I forgot about her hatred to him too.
A non-spoilery (well it's a super mild spoiler) discussion finally! (The spoiler was really long for those who don't want to open it) The cheating. The fucking cheating. I hate cheating, but like in this case it really didn't make sense to me. This man is married, his wife is literally upstairs, and he has a kid who is constantly wandering around. How stupid and shitty are you to cheat like that? Are you a fucking teenager with raging hormones? Keep it in your fucking pants. Like a damn adult. God. I skipped through the sex scenes mostly, but the ones that involve biting the headboard made me laugh. It's gross and stupid.
Anyway now that I'm angry about that, I should say that it wasn't a terrible book. I actually enjoyed the writing style and I get how it sucks people in. I finished the book in one day, so it was good. I just can't stand the plot holes and the cheating. I will most likely not be reading any other Colleen Hoover books.
Rating System:
★ - Avoid at all costs. Don't even look at it.
★★ - I would recommend for people not to read it.
★★★ - It was okay. I might recommend for certain people.
★★★★ - I'd recommend it to most people.
★★★★★ - I'd literally gift this to someone. Must read.
Graphic: Child abuse, Child death, Death, Miscarriage, Physical abuse, Self harm, Car accident, Abortion, Murder, and Pregnancy
anastasiak's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Graphic: Child abuse, Child death, Physical abuse, Toxic relationship, Grief, Abortion, Death of parent, and Murder
Moderate: Terminal illness, Vomit, Pregnancy, and Gaslighting
Minor: Infidelity, Miscarriage, Self harm, and Suicidal thoughts
jody_08's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Child abuse, Child death, Death, Mental illness, Self harm, Sexual content, Toxic relationship, Violence, Grief, Abortion, and Murder
kimveach's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Graphic: Child abuse, Child death, Cursing, Death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Gore, Infidelity, Mental illness, Panic attacks/disorders, Self harm, Sexual content, Suicidal thoughts, Suicide, Violence, Blood, Vomit, Medical content, Grief, Medical trauma, Stalking, Car accident, Abortion, Suicide attempt, Death of parent, Murder, Pregnancy, Gaslighting, and Injury/Injury detail
glens's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.0
Graphic: Child abuse, Child death, Sexual content, and Car accident
Moderate: Medical content
Minor: Self harm and Death of parent
martini666's review against another edition
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Graphic: Body shaming, Child abuse, Child death, Chronic illness, Death, Emotional abuse, Mental illness, Physical abuse, Self harm, Sexual content, Suicidal thoughts, Toxic relationship, Violence, Blood, Vomit, Medical content, Grief, Car accident, Abortion, Suicide attempt, Death of parent, Murder, Schizophrenia/Psychosis , Pregnancy, Gaslighting, and Injury/Injury detail
smkelly1997's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Child abuse, Child death, Death, Emotional abuse, Mental illness, Self harm, Sexual content, Blood, Grief, Stalking, Car accident, Murder, Pregnancy, Gaslighting, Abandonment, and Injury/Injury detail
dahliae's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.5
Graphic: Cancer, Child abuse, Child death, Chronic illness, Death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Mental illness, Miscarriage, Physical abuse, Self harm, Sexual content, Suicidal thoughts, Suicide, Toxic relationship, Violence, Blood, Vomit, Medical content, Grief, Medical trauma, Car accident, Abortion, Suicide attempt, Pregnancy, Gaslighting, and Injury/Injury detail
anxieteaandbiscuits12's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
2.25
Graphic: Child abuse, Child death, Death, Sexual content, Violence, Car accident, Abortion, Murder, Pregnancy, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Mental illness, Self harm, Suicidal thoughts, and Blood
aliciaallen's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Child abuse, Child death, Chronic illness, Death, Self harm, Suicidal thoughts, and Abortion
Moderate: Infidelity, Grief, Car accident, and Pregnancy