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The Unfinished Line

Jen Lyon

4.57 AVERAGE


This touched me on a very emotional level. Outstanding writing.
challenging dark emotional hopeful reflective sad tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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These characters are going to stick with me for a long, long time. Thank you Jen Lyon for your mastery of human nature in your characters.
dark emotional sad medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

If you’re in the right headspace to tackle a story that explores the complexities of mental health struggles and their consequences, I’d recommend The Unfinished Line. Compared to Jen Lyons' The Senator's Wife series—which I found too wordy—this book feels like a significant step forward. Her writing has matured tremendously, with incredible character development and a solid, engaging plot.

As for Dillon and Kam’s relationship, there isn’t much I can add beyond what the authors note warns us: this is a love story, not a romance. That framing definitely set the tone. While I struggled with certain parts, I’ve never had a book physically make me feel numb before—yet this one did. For better or worse, I think that speaks volumes about its emotional impact.
emotional sad tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
emotional reflective sad medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
emotional sad slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

I am so mad. Unskilled and incompetent unconscionable killing your queers trope

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emotional funny sad medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
challenging emotional reflective sad tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This book absolutely destroyed me. I’ll never recover.