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The Mystery of the Ivory Charm by Carolyn Keene

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2.0

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Man, The Original Text (OT) of The Mystery of the Ivory Charm does not hold up well at all. Where do I begin?

"Nancy Drew, you're talking in absolute riddles. But if you think I'll take in a brown-skinned boy to raise, you have another thing coming." Yeah, a whole lot of that throughout the book because The Mystery of the Ivory Charm is about an Indian boy who runs away from the circus because of a cruel master, Rai. Lots of stereotypes in this book.

Coya, the boy, is actually whipped in front of Nancy, Bess and George before Nancy puts a stop to it. For some crazy reason, Rai gives Nancy his good luck charm, an ivory elephant charm that hangs on a necklace. Coya sneaks away on the train to River Heights, and Nancy takes him in.

Later, the chums (it is never "friends" in the OT Nancy Drew, it is always "chums") encounter a woman named Miss Allison who believes she has psychic powers. "Oh, Nancy, please don't ask her another question," Bess pleaded, shivering. "I've never heard such dreadful talk before in all my life. It isn't normal. It frightens me." "Don't encourage her to say such strange things," George added in a pleading whisper. So now we have prejudice along with all the racial stereotypes of Indian culture to add to the book.

Miss Allison owns a house which is actually just a shell of a building hiding a secret passageway underground. How many of these are we going to find in River Heights? There was one in The Hidden Staircase, too. And the passageway has secret compartments that hold Miss Allison's treasures, which she has to remove after the building burns down. There are tons of jewels that spill out of the box.

Since Coya will be staying with the Drews indefinitely, Hannah (for some inexplicable reason, she's repeatedly referred to as Mrs. Gruen by Nancy throughout half the volume, then called Hannah later) puts Coya to work around the house. Carson Drew also thinks the boy could use a tutor because his English isn't that good. It just so happens that good ole Ned Nickerson is in town and knows of a retired professor who has travelled to India many times and speaks several languages who would be willing to tutor the boy for a nominal cost.

Details emerge that Miss Allison and Rai are in cahoots together, and it has to do with Coya. See, it turns out he is really the long lost Rajah of a smaller Indian province who, it was told, was eaten by a tiger so a puppet Rajah could be enthroned. The payment was all those jewels which Miss Allison kept for herself, because it is clear Rai hasn't got any wealth (being Indian, of course).

Somehow, even though Nancy knows Rai is looking for the boy, does nothing to safeguard him and he is kidnapped. No sooner is he returned than he is kidnapped again. Nancy, her dad, Ned, Bess and George spend weeks travelling to nearby towns where there are carnivals and circuses, looking for Rai and Coya.

Finally, Carson Drew has had enough. He contacts his friend, Mr. George of the Department of Justice in Washington, D.C. since this lost Rajah business is an international affair, and the next thing you know, Nancy and her dad are flying to Washington. While in Washington, Nancy receives a summons from the president's wife to attend a luncheon the next day. (That would be President of the United States, and Eleanor Roosevelt for those of you who don't know 1930's history) "The distinguished first lady told Nancy that Mr. George had spoken of her work as an amateur detective, and she asked many questions about the girl's famous cases."

The Drews return to River Heights while the man hunt continues for both Rai and Miss Allison. Nancy is getting discouraged and decides to walk along a path with a footbridge, and who should she happen to see but Miss Allison, standing on the rail of the bridge in a diaphanous dress and chanting. Nancy steals away and calls police, then returns to spy on Miss Allison. When the police arrive, Miss Allison jumps down below into the river and Nancy dives after her. After a bit of a struggle, and an assist from the police in a rowboat, Miss Allison is taken into police custody.

It is only a matter of time before Nancy and the crew find Rai and Coya hiding out. Coya is near death, but magically, Nancy knows that there's a life-saving liquid inside the ivory charm and gives it to the boy, which revives him. Coya is now safe and can return to his homeland, with the help of the British Embassy, according to Carson Drew.

I'm not sure the RT will be much better because it is still the same story. I definitely won't be revisiting this volume anytime soon.

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2.0

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The Revised Text of The Mystery of the Ivory Charm is almost identical to the OT, with a few exceptions. Coya's name is changed to Rishi, and a wealthy Indian who specializes in imported goods and makes his home base in River Heights, Mr. Tilak, are added. Instead of housing Rishi above the garage as in the original, he's ensconced on the third floor of the drew house in an extra guest room. Who in their right mind lives in a house with three floors? A successful widower, his teenage daughter, and a housekeeper, that's who. I always knew Nancy Drew was well off, but I must have read that as a child and thought Nancy was super-rich.

The plot holes, racism and prejudice that Mildred Wirt wrote were kind of fixed 40 years later by Harriet Stratemeyer Adams. Indian religions and cultures are explained in more detail than the original, as are several different languages spoken in India. There is more respect given to the other culture, but not by much.

Mrs. Allison (no longer a Miss) chants from her bejeweled book just as in the original, but in the RT, the name of the book, Sanskrit, is mentioned. There is more explanation about how a maharajah heir could be spirited away and a puppet ruler put on the throne. It seems Mrs. Allison and Rai led a revolution in the wealthy Indian province, and Rishi's father fled the country. And no surprise to an adult reading The Mystery of the Ivory Charm, the man that fled his country made his home in River Heights. That's right, Mr. Tilak is really Rishi's dad.

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I had a lot of fun reading this story and watching Nancy grow and decide if she should trust in the charm and its power or if it was all in her head. This series becomes more and more enjoyable with each book.

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4.0

Not as racist as it could have been, so plus one points for that. A fascinating mystery with houses that aren't houses, a smart Indian orphan who is more than even he knows, and an ivory charm many people are desperate to get their hands on.

rainynook's review against another edition

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adventurous mysterious fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

4.0

(Hannah Gruen) is deeply embarrassed... Facepalm!  This particular book features a mysterious ivory charm (and ivory is, in 2024, not a good thing to own or revere because it involves the suffering and death of an elephant).  The story features numerous trips to the circus featuring animals, snakes, tigers, etc. (no longer a done thing) & there is some animal cruelty involved. 

Nancy is at once a super-girl and a product of a society in which women did not go to University, nor did they have a paid job. She is just rich, fortunate, attractive, thin and has nearly every opportunity one can imagine. She drives a convertible, dresses impeccably, hangs out with her good-looking, good-natured fraternity boyfriend, as well as Society Matrons, knows everyone in their hometown of River Heights, is beloved by all (except, of course, the bad guys), knows how to play every sport well, is an expert swimmer, is trained in life-saving techniques, gets invited to cool parties, keeps a level head in difficult circumstances, and is also aware that she just has better luck than the average person. Of course she knows how to drive a motor-boat. She has stalwart friends and a dedicated dad who help her through difficult problems. When needs must, her father gets them an immediate flight to Washington D.C. and, naturally, she is quickly invited to the White House to have lunch with the First Lady. 

Even given all the above, the book is an ok read, given that you know it was written nearly 100 years ago and it was a completely different world. Nancy Drew influenced countless young women to be self-sufficient, and think on their feet. 

The team behind the pseudonym "Carolyn Keene" knew how to write a page-turner... each short chapter ends something like, "and then there was a scream, and the lights went out!" or "and then a hand grabbed Nancy and she fell unconscious!" and so on. 

I have not read the 1974 version, and I do hope that one is more enlightened than the 1936 version.

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adventurous lighthearted mysterious fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.5

dizzybell06's review against another edition

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2.0

Not a fan of this mystery. It was not very interesting and it felt like the same things kept happening.

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5.0

loved it!!!!!

postitsandpens's review against another edition

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3.0

I'll admit, considering this book involves Indian culture and the Hindi language, I was a bit concerned going in as to how it would be handled. However, while probably not entirely appropriate for today, the book didn't do too terribly much wrong, and the mystery, while a bit over the top, was enjoyable. Nothing spectacular, but definitely not the worst of the series that I've read!

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5.0

This one was alright. I found it somewhat confusing but that’s my own fault—I’ve been to busy to give the story my full attention and it took me forever to get through it. So while I’m still not quite sure what the deal with Mrs Allison was, the book was okay. I will say that Nancy must be getting really sick of ending up in rivers and lakes fully clothed because I feel like this has happened in just about every prior book. However, in a highly atypicaltwist, Nancy’s dad almost blows the interrogation at a crucial point when he decides he needs to call and check on Nancy’s safety (since when, Carson? Since. When????). I also love how they wait until the child is kidnapped twice before they decide they should probably involve the police. Thank God it all works out!