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Thorn

Intisar Khanani

3.95 AVERAGE


4.5 only for what they did to my FAV

I can't put my finger on what was wrong with this book. Maybe it was just that there was nothing unique about it in the first several chapters. A poor little princess, abused by her family (very much the Cinderella stepmother even though it was her real mother in this case, and the mean stepsisters, even though it was her real and physically abusive brother this time), committed in marriage to a man she doesn't want to marry. Nothing stood out to me about her character, or the setting, or the premise. I just got bored and stopped.

I had high hopes for this book but it was incoherent for most the book, the plot line was lacking, the characters lacked dimensions, and the author didn’t explain things where I was confused on what things were. I didn’t feel like I was immersed in the world.

I'm not sure how I feel about this book. I devoured it in a day, but I'm not sure if it's because it captivated me, or because I wanted to find out how the author would deal with the societal issues she brought to bear.

An unloved, abused princess is married off to a distant prince, but her precarious position is usurped via a magic spell. A retelling of The Goose Girl, this has a slow start but picks up after the goosening. It reminds me of Robin McKinley's style of fairytale retelling, with an emphasis on domesticity and work/life/family--cozy, a little idealized, but not toothless. The curse in particular is remarkably well-handled: it's functionally an open secret, so rather than being about the frustration of mis-/missed communication, it's about why people struggle to communicate, and about how the protagonist perceives herself and wishes (not) to be perceived. I haven't thought a ton about Thorn since finishing it, so it hasn't stuck with me like my favorite retellings. But it revived my love of this genre, and it's engaging and satisfying enough that it convinced me to stick with a first person, present tense YA novel with a romance plot--that says something.

(FWIW I read the revised, traditionally-published edition.)

I really enjoyed this one! I’d never heard of The Goose Girl before so this was an interesting read. I like the Freaky Friday aspect of a curse switching bodies. Thorn is a normal girl who follows her heart and leads with kindness. She readily accepts the chance to escape her horrible childhood by hiding as a a goose girl. Along the way she befriends a magical Horse, a lovable family, and a prince. Really interesting concepts of justice in this book. Just a tad YA for my liking but totally understandable!

Author Intisar Khanani's Thorn, first novel in the Dauntless Path series, is a revised version of her original indie published novel. Increased by more than twenty thousand words, the story has been polished, revealing more worldbuilding details, while retaining the same rich character development that the original novel enjoyed. The story of Princess Alyrra centers on the choices one makes and the temptation to avoid onerous duty. Alyrra comes from an abusive family background and is a princess of a minor kingdom, Adania. Her mother and brother openly dislike her (due to events recounted in the author's story, Brambles) and are surprised when the king of neighboring Menaiya makes a visit requesting Alyrra's hand in marriage for his son, Kestrin. No one is more surprised than Alyrra herself, however. Alyrra departs Adania with only her hostile lady in waiting, Valka, on hand. Along the way, dark magic transforms the two girls, leaving Alyrra to be cast away once Valka arrives in Menaiya in Alyrra's place. But Alyrra, against all the odds, seems to thrive in her simple role as a goose girl. As in Adania, her kindness makes the hostelers that she lives with take her under their wing, and her willingness to take risks to help others, so evident from her life in Adania, unexpectedly makes her a powerful friend in Menaiya's shadowy underworld. Despite these boons, Alyrra struggles with her personal responsibility and her knowledge that trying to regain her position would be more than doing her duty by the prince she was to marry- it could permit her to make positive changes for all those who live in Menaiya's capital city of Tarinon.

Fairy tale retellings have become increasingly popular in the past twenty years, but often the reader finds, other than some initial similarities, it hard to find the architecture of the original story. Thorn, a retelling of the Grimm Brothers' goose girl story, remains an artful exception in that Khanani has managed to retain the all the elements of the original story (including the ill-fated Falada, who too many readers seem not to realize is in the Grimm brother's original tale) while envisioning a vibrant world, full of choices for Alyrra. This revised version of the novel allows the reader to explore Alyrra's psyche in greater depth. While the pace is a bit slower, the novel benefits from a somewhat clearer exploration of how magic works in Alyrra's world.

This edition of Thorn is bound with a novelette, The Bone Knife (also previously published as an indie story) which introduces us to the character Rae. Set in the same world of Menaiya, Rae will be featured in the second novel in the Dauntless Path series, Theft of Sunlight. Upon traveling to Tarinon, Rae will help, at Princess Alyrra's request, to investigate the child-snatching in Menaiya.

The audiobook of Thorn, beautifully narrated by Shiromi Arserio, includes The Bone Knife.

CW: animal cruelty (on the part of the villain), rape and murder of secondary character, public execution.

I received an Advance Review Copy of this book from the author and a Digital Review Copy from HarperTeen in exchange for an honest review.

My Review of the original edition of Thorn from 2016:

A delightful re-envisioning of the story of the Goose Girl by the Brothers Grimm. In the beginning, it felt as if this novel started as an interesting writing exercise. But the character development was so rich that the reader becomes transported by the story, even though anyone who knows of the original fairy tale knows of its happy ending. This is a story in which magic can be found simply, in a kind heart and a desire for true justice. My only loose end was that we lose track of Falada, the beloved and wise Horse. Where is his head?

An enchanting read by an author I'm so glad to have discovered.

Khanani writes a story that pulls the reader into a magical world. She writes relatable, empathic characters - I found myself crying more than once. I could not put this book down and look forward to reading more of her work.

3.5 stars


I read the reissued version of Thorn as part of the Beacon Book Box Club. The first half was interesting but I feel like it was dragged out too much. The second half is where it really got interesting to me and I was able to enjoy the book more.