4.04 AVERAGE

lighthearted mysterious medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

This book is an intriguing blend -- written in a style evoking [b:Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell|14201|Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell|Susanna Clarke|https://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1357027589s/14201.jpg|3921305], with a forbidden circus romance reminiscent of [b:Water for Elephants|43641|Water for Elephants|Sara Gruen|https://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1348373323s/43641.jpg|3441236], a [a:Neil Gaiman|1221698|Neil Gaiman|https://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/authors/1234150163p2/1221698.jpg]-esque system of magic, and stunning visuals that should be adapted to film by someone more imaginative than Tim Burton.

A few specific comments and criticisms:

- This book had one of the strongest opening lines of any piece of fiction I have read in recent memory -- "The circus arrives without warning." -- and there is a great call-back to it at the end.

- One of the most compelling characters -- for good and ill -- is the enigmatic, mysterious circus. The only suitable comparison that comes to my mind is the chocolate factory in [b:Charlie and the Chocolate Factory|6310|Charlie and the Chocolate Factory (Charlie Bucket, #1)|Roald Dahl|https://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1309211401s/6310.jpg|2765786]. Unfortunately, exponentially more time is spent describing minute details of the circus in favor of developing the other characters.

- The much-hyped romance between the main characters a) doesn't start until two-thirds into the book, and b) lacks chemistry, and hence, believability.

- The resolution of the challenge was a cop-out that was telegraphed from 200 pages prior. Fortunately, the sub-plot involving Bailey had me engaged for the final third of the book.

- Kill the Harry Potter comparisons, please. There is little to no action in this book, and no franchise/sequels to be bled from it. While there is magic, it is not the exciting, wand-pointing kind of magic from Hogwarts. Nor is there a great evil being combated here -- just two old, bored rivals, lacking in compassion for their pupils' well-being, engaged in a chess game with a circus and its members as their board and pieces.

- I loved the Shakespeare/Tempest/Prospero references.

- The short chapters interspersed throughout the book in second-person were unnecessary and distracted from what little drive the plot did have.

Despite my misgivings about the plot and characters (and yes, I realize these are big elements of a book to have complaints about), the author's ability to create such an incredible atmospheric experience, and take the reader to this fantastical circus of dreams, made up for a good deal of the book's various other shortcomings.

If yall found this boring, YOURE the problem. Have some whimsy for once in your life girl.

hopeless_wanderer's review against another edition

DID NOT FINISH

I’ve heard that this book is about vibes rather than plot or characters. If that’s the case, this was not my vibe. I found the characters unappealing, the plot nonexistent and the atmosphere boring. 
slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
adventurous dark emotional mysterious slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
emotional mysterious medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No

I throughly enjoyed this book! Truley magiacal and beautifully written.
I can't wait to read more of Erin Morgenstren's books.
adventurous emotional hopeful mysterious medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
adventurous dark mysterious reflective sad slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes