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Between by Joseph R. Lallo

nebulous_tide's review

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3.0

A bit hit and miss. I enjoyed the main story and I found the locations and characters great, for the most part. I felt Lallo over-used italics, and this started to grate on me towards the end. I was also disappointed by the ending. I felt the big fight was resolved too simply. Many of the characters in play by then didn’t make an appearance, or their appearance was not up to the scale of the character. For example, why was anyone scared of Heartcore’s army? They did absolutely nothing. Don’t get me wrong, I enjoyed the epic finale, but it just felt a bit too engineered in favour of the good guys. Also, what happened with Brankle? What was the point in all the Darva stuff and the recordings?
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